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× B I O P U N K .
× Mechair
>>Scar-Tiger<< wrote:>> 22-23 years old<<
>> male <<
>> Machairodus Kabir <<
>> Hybrid <<
>> Pansexual <<
>> Single <<
>> Calm// Laid-back \\Cautious <<
N A M E :;
- × Bars Gatura
- × 22-23 years old
- × male
- x "Brats are brats. They yell, they shout, they throw a tantrum and act as if the world is theirs. At the end of the day, they're the same little kids that cry for their mothers when what's right gets to them. They would do anything to raise their level and guard their pride to the point of being utter imbeciles. Last time I checked, pride doesn't count when you're dead."
× In contrast with the majority of his comrades, this person is like a black and white spotted ram in a flock of completely black ones. While most members, including the higher-ups, are cruel, twisted and vicious, he is calm, even-tempered, maybe even too much for his own good. Preferring to have a quiet evening than a bloodbath night, he's well aware that the only thing violence solves is power disputes. Considering how frequent they are in his gang, it is indeed hard not to get in the middle of them. However, with his status of an 'old dog' there is a certain dose of respect he carries among the group. That doesn't stop others from thinking he's useless or cowardly, basing their accusations on the fact that he's laid-back and doesn't answer to challenges with an attack. If somebody were to try and provoke him, Bars simply brushes it off, but would more often just give a silent cold stare with that sharp amber gaze of his and, if he dubs needed, utter a short cold comment in response. The usual "I don't feel like it" or "I don't give stupid kids candy" are some of his daily lines. Despite the deep chilly rumbling in his voice, as if there was a low echoing roar in his throat, what actually does the trick is his appearance. When noting his height of approximately 197cm, muscly body and the huge scar on his right side that allows his fang to be completely visible, it is no wonder why people avoid confronting him.
x If you were to look past his gruesome outside, you would notice that Bars is unusually helpful and kind on the inside. Of course, not the girly childish form of kind. It's more like a "I'll help you up, but I'll crush you if you do something stupid" type of thing. He's one of the possible guides for new members, offering them advise about how to behave and with whom not to pick a fight. Still, not many really go to him for rather obvious reasons. Even so, this man isn't the sort who would leave someone behind just because they've shown a weakness. If it proves to be dangerous for the gang, he would, yet doesn't completely obey the rule "The strongest survive and the weak must be left to die". He isn't the one who would take orders from just anybody either. Raptor is the only one whom he never questions, but when it comes to the rest...Fang would be the second he is prone to listen to, although the wolf's personality sometimes makes him doubt his logic. Sydney he outright rejects as a second-in-command, due to his 'dark childishness' and rarely even listens to him. Not that that spider would ever really give a straight demand, but even when Bars is being shouted at by the poison fanboy, he would just stare at him like a stone and perhaps even say something similar to "It's not polite to talk with a full mouth." The guy isn't looking for a fight in any of the cases. He merely wants to reduce those bothersome events to a minimum. The leader he has not dared to oppose ever since the day of his fight with him, however, his distaste for some of that lizard's actions still remains, yet he hides it and simply continues on living. He learned that it didn't concern him all that much who would sit on top, as long as it didn't kill him. Not that much of a reaction can be gotten out of him by Raptor's taunting. It's due to getting used to it that he rarely gives it any mind at all. Instead, he has accepted the joke and allows the rest to have a laugh as well before he makes a bad comment about them in return. But if it's the boss, he has nothing to say. Only obedience can come from him, since he was shown how seriously dangerous that person is and will be reminded of that fact until the rest of his days.
x Having had his fair share of battles, this person often feels too grown-up among the rest of Biopunk, most of which are still teenagers, although he himself isn't past the age of 25 years. This sense of being some sort of veteran can easily be explained by his past. Since he has been running in the slums ever since he learned to walk, those two eyes have seen quite a lot of scenes that might make the normal human vomit or lose consciousness. Because of that, he has hardened, forming a good layer of protective wall, from the top of which he surveys the surroundings and examines any trespasser with a long cold look. His habit of lending a hand to the newbies or wana-be-members is also a way of protection. He inspects anyone who wants to set foot in his territory, although the methods of inspection vary depending on his mood. Although it might seem like being too quick to judge, the sketchy profiles he is capable of making are often outstandingly correct.
x Indeed, in the end, Bars is one of the few calm collected individuals in Biopunk. He rarely does anything violent, but manage to tick him off and you will most likely lose a limb or two. That set of knife teeth aren't just for show.
- × It is curious to say that Bars isn't remotely similar to what he used to be. True enough, he was still not easily provoked when he was young, but had a burning rage in his eyes which seemed like it could burn anything his sight fell upon.
The beginning of this person's journey was in a place not too far off from his current surroundings, both appearance and location wise. He was born into this world with only his mother by his side. Not a trace was seen by the father which wasn't surprising, considering the situation. Whoever he was, it would have most likely caused an uproar and trouble for him. To hear that the prostitute he slept with once or twice had a son from him would be quite the shocker, after all.
Although one of the parents never even poked his nose around, probably because he was never told, the other made sure to be closer than anyone else. His mother contrasted her co-workers just like he contrasts his comrades in the present. She was a sale's girl and a mighty fine one at that, yet unlike the women among whom she lived, who discarded their children and even prevented them from coming into existence through vile painful acts and concoctions, she took care of her son and made sure he grew up as finely as she could provide.
Until her first month she continued to serve men in her chambers, but after that she quit, tossing the job in the dustbin along with all the drugs, alcohol and cigarettes she used to have on her daily list. For that short period of time her savings had reached a decent sum, but weren't enough to last her throughout the whole pregnancy, so she had to depend on her friends for support.
When he was born, Bars had not only one, but fire or six other women surrounding him. They crowded around him, playing and giggling as he made all sorts of sounds and moved his little legs. Even when his mother wasn't around, there was always at least one set of eyes watching over him. Those were needed, for he often got into things he shouldn't.
Adventurous and cheerful, the boy played on the streets of the Slums with a pack of kids around his age ever since he could walk. He could never stop himself from venturing far from the old hotel where his residence was. It was actually a brotel, so he was capable of seeing all the things the pitiful children in the cradle of Tektron could not even dream of until they entered the middle of their teens. This was the reason why he never drooled over the bare bodies of the women at home. Growing up in that habitat makes you grow accustomed to such scenes, thus you take it for something normal, not even interesting at times. Just because he grew up among prostitutes didn't lead to him to become girly or lusty. Loud and rebellious, he loved fighting in the black alleys. Something about rolling in the dirt of those junk-filled puddle streets made his heart race with excitement. It was one of the most enjoyable things he ever did during that early stage.
At the age of 13 he knew he couldn't live with his mother anymore. She had started work after his first year, but had continued caring for him. Hugging him when he was sad, singing him a song to sleep, eating together whenever there was food, laughing and telling dirty jokes, she was always kind and gentle and never raised a finger against him. Most children with such mothers simply ran away or caused a ruckus as an excuse to leave without a note. Bars cherished his and found it difficult to strip himself from being together with his only parent. Yet rules were rules. A boy such as himself was supposed to already be on his own and he couldn't disagree. For one, it would take a huge load off of the woman's back. Not to mention he wouldn't be called a mommy's boy. Thus he set out and started a new chapter of his story.
For the first few months he did the same as the rest of the youngsters in his situation. Steal. Forming a small group from the time they were mice, Bars and his bunch of rambunctious friends fount that teamwork lead more often to success than going alone. Working together, they easily robbed different people either on the street or when transporting cargo. When out of a mission, the lad felt like he was an animal out on a hunt with the pack, watching the latest victim closely before initiating a precise deadly attack. A load of little brats, despite the many times they failed, their skills improved and all was well, as long as they didn't steal from each other. Whenever a fight would break out between the bugs of this ruffian swarm, the dreadlocks boy was usually the one to break them apart, often by simply beating up both sides. Despite their petty disputes, together they spent a long time roaming, causing trouble and teasing people. They were a merry band of hooligans, happy to be together as family, always helping each other out when needed.
Not even a year had passed and that house which was built was already crumbling down. There were many other little gangs out there, but there were also ones which were greater in number and notorious in every corner of the Slums. Some of the boys left in order to join some of those strong gangs and so the last childish days were over. The group of jolly youngsters dispersed and they headed their separate ways in order to fulfill their own wishes. Bars and two others went to join Biopunk. Not only because of their rumored powers did he agree upon this decision, but also because he loved animals. While most kids beat up any critter that dared come into their field of vision, he liked to feed, pet or simply watch them. It was because he understood what it was to be like that. Often feeling like a mutt when spotting people from outside the Slums, the guy had problems getting over his low standing when he was younger, but his bright attitude made him feel less depressed about the matter compared to many others, who shouted and thrashed whatever place they were at simply out of anger, without at form of provocation. Another important reason why Bars joined the Biopunks was their boss, a tall young man, well-built, with golden hair and sharp eyes. That person had a powerful aura around him, with a firm voice and strong opinion, he was the perfect portrayal of a king. Many, along with the lad as well, saw that and were instantly attracted towards him. That confident character, with fine leadership skills and a thoughtful mind, was like honey to a bee. Of course, the boy was warned about the low acceptance and necessary 'trial'. At first he backed up a bit, but after considering the offer, he accepted. The feeling of being an animal never left him, in fact, that feeling never left most of the residents of the Slums. The Hive always reminded them that they were insignificant, like some stray dog nobody wants. If he had to be honest, although he was still frightened by the thought of becoming like them and just looking at them, somewhat, the appearance of the mutants didn't shake him that much. Convinced that this was the gang he was meant to be in, he entered the testing facility with the thought that he would never leave this gang until it crumbles, even if times prove hard and burdens become heavy. He would find out just how hard times could become.
Bars' DNA was merged with that of a Mechairodus Kabir. Because the animal itself had been extinct for thousands of years, the samples used were precious. Not many people survived when their generic code was edited, even less were those who pulled through after being given the data of an ancient animal. He was an even greater experiment than the rest, one of those who would be a complete disaster if they failed, for precious material would be lost, or would become an irreplaceable specimen if successful. The youngster managed to hang onto life, but his body would never be the same. The main aspect of the mechairodus kabir were its huge fangs, which were not as long as that of a Smilodon, they reached exactly to the end or a very little bit below the chin, however, they were not as delicate as those of its cousin's. The two canines were long, thin and flattened from side to side but broad from front to back like the blade of a knife. They were rooted into the mouth and fitted comfortably into the jaw, being exactly the needed length to be lethal for hunting, yet easy to live with while not killing, while sleeping for instance. In order to have such dangerous weapons, the skull itself also had to be designed properly. Although his couldn't get narrow as it was with the great predator, his forehead flattened and as his head became larger, it also got longer. In addition, in order to carry the heavy head which had to support the teeth, the bones and with them the musculature had to grow rapidly. This is the reason why from 172 cm Bars became 189 cm in less than a month while he was still in the examination rooms. With such a huge structure, his lungs and other insides also had to increase their size. His arms and legs did not become remarkably long, but this was due to the fact that the mechairodus kabir was meant for jumping high than chasing continuously. They were proportionally correct and indeed his climbing and jumping abilities improved dramatically when he was awake. Along with these changes, he also grew a tail and ears. Again, unlike the Smilodo, which had a short tail, this feline had a long tail for balance, proof for it not being meant to rival a cheetah. Strangely enough, only his feet changed to resemble that of a cat. His fingers became retractable claws which were nearly as sharp as his teeth. By the time he was ready to stand with his new body, Bars had grown astonishingly and continues to even to this very day, only in more even temps.
Once he had gotten out of the 'hospital', his new comrades welcomed him warmly. There was quite a bit of trouble at first, since the lad didn't know how to control his new strength. While he was having difficulty with his height by bumping into door lintels, one of the friends he entered the Biopunks with only had the difficulty of holding his venom in his mouth when he talked, since he had gotten the DNA of a spitting cobra. Their second friend had died on the operation table while they were trying to inject the code of an Andrewsarchus. That fierce ghostly carnivore proved to be deadly even after extinction. For the following two years and a half, the two boys who remained had the time of their lives. Drinking and having parties until they dropped from exhaustion. Getting higher than the glass done which stopped them from seeing the true sky. Fighting and ripping skins and crushing bones. Not to mention the girls. Bars never set his foot in a brotel. It always reminded him of home and he felt slightly embarrassed when he remembered his mother was exactly like those girls. Despite all the hooligan business and orders he had, the already 16-year-old still visited his parent from time to time. Whenever she lacked money, he gave her. If there was medicine she needed, he found it and delivered it quickly and if he heard some man had given her a hard time or hit her, well, than man wouldn't live for long. Although he had left the nest long ago, the knew there was a debt to be payed and he gladly payed it. His mother was as gentle as ever. She accepted his new looks and told him that if he truly believed that this was what he wanted, then the choice was the rightest one he could ever make. Her gentle hands made him feel like a kitty than a monster. Still, he couldn't purr around his mum for too long. There were responsibilities other than having fun, but every order he was given seemed like a game to him. It was enjoyable, as if he wasn't being an underling but some participant in a childish trick. Everything was going smoothly. The boss was harsh, yet joined in the party while only his gang members were around and slowly his true outgoing nature was coming to show. Those happy days they spent as a 'family' ended as well, just like the first time, but in this case, the final curtain would be pulled in a much more vile manner.
When he was 16 years old, Bars witnessed the arrival of a new member. That boy was only 14 years of age, yet had been given amazing features. He was just like him, an extinct species, only his animal dated from an ear far behind the arrival of the first felines. He was a dinosaur, a raptor, with green hair and darker scales all over his body. With eyes of a serpent and a strange smiling expression, he entered the gang with great enthusiasm. Bars had heard about some kid who had went to the king head on and asked to join, but he never expected that to be the actual one. That brat had guts to ask, he had guts to endure and to survive. It was impressive. However, the lad didn't hurry to befriend this individual. While the rest gathered around him to inspect him, he stood at the side, watching closely with a cold glare. There was something, something out of place. He didn't know what it was, but he could smell it. It wasn't dead fish and no one had let out gas. It was something different. A feeling this hybrid had never felt before. His tail twitched in annoyance like with any cat. He couldn't explain, nor identify this sensation. Only the root of the problem was known and that was the newbi. That person had something eery about him, a specific scent or maybe an aura that just told Bars to be careful. After his head started pounding, the youngster decided not to look into the matter any further. Simply staying away from him would be enough. He couldn't be more wrong.
[!Warning! The following text contains a little amount of violence.]
The following three months went through them all like a storm. The new member, named Maddock, nicknamed Raptor, was living up to both of his names. He was as mad as a hatter and as despicable as that lizard. The first person who tried to make a joke about him, the usual treatment the green sprouts received, got his throat cut on the spot. The companions of the guy who got killed also suffered a similar death and perished. For that amount of time, the numbers of the gang dwindled down to less than 20. Whoever raised their voice against the maniac were reduced to a pile of rags, leftovers from the torment of being prey. Bars was given an even greater reason to stay clear of that guy's way. He stayed in the dark with a small group and watched as the lunatic spilled one blood after another. The DNA samples weren't lost, well, most of them, but it was clearly going too far. The long-fanged feline hybrid was also given an interrogation, but got away, strangely, without a fight. Reasons for that were either the fact that he proved to be less interesting than the other short-fused people or that the hot-tempered members distracted the interrogator enough for him to let go of the conversation. The leader had tried convincing the older members not to mess around with the psycho, since he was visibly still unstable after all the tricky operations he had gone through. Of course, after the second-in-command was also killed and the total of victims reached 15, enough was enough. The king faced him off. The most respected person in the district, the "Golden Prince", the lion whose roar was loud and ferocious. That roar still echoes through the streets of the East Slums, only it's often painful to listen, because it resembles a cry than a warning. A painful yawn of one's long lost glory as they fall to the ground, helpless and exhausted, ready to have their head chopped off. It is unknown what exactly happened. Rumors and evidence state that the battle had been done through the entire territory, every street had something broken or blood spilled and people young and small had seen them clashing and tearing each other to shreds. Yet in the end, Maddock proved yet again that his name wasn't given my mistake. The leader, whom everyone loved, was dead. (SIDE NOTE:god, the music I'm listening to just reached that slow sad part where it makes you feel the emotion deep in your core T_T Anyway, my suggested song for the fight it "Ignition" by TobyMac or "Acceletant" by Blue Stahli)
This turn of the circumstances completely crushed the mental stability of the gang. One half was petrified, barely standing out of fear, uncertain what to even say. They were like little marionettes, incapable of moving on their own without being given a kick by somebody else. The rest were switching between anger and sadness. They broke something and then cried like little kids. Each of the remaining Biopunks was a mess, including Bars. He couldn't explain it, just like he couldn't tell before, only this time it came from himself. He was broken, incongruous or just plain wrong. There was nowhere to go, nowhere to hide and there was no need to. Only one thing came to his mind and all the reason he had in his head couldn't help him in that situation. Two days after the lion's murder, the long-toothed went on a hunt.
It all began so quickly, like a shooting star in the night sky. They were all at the usual hangout in their territory. It was one of the places they liked gathering at other than Limbo. Raptor entered the stage, confident and proud, with a strange twist to his expression, as usual. That smile with a full set of sharp teeth was terrifying to gaze at and even more was his laughter, which sounded like that of some maddened scientist, who had finally completed his greatest experiment. That sly young man, with his quick whip tongue, threw a couple of rude or joke-like comments towards the few members who had been left alive by him. He was the boss now, thus no one dared to oppose him. Clenching their jaws together, a word was not uttered by any of them. There was only silence for the clever lizard's answer. Until a cold comment was heard from one of the corners. Everybody spun around and all of them had shocked expressions, except for Maddock, whose huge grin expressed his wholehearted contempt and happiness. Finally, after being so stubborn, the person who was as big as him in size had taken up the challenge. Bars' voice was clearly recognizable, but there was an unusual deep growl in the words that made even those who were thinking of pulling him aside shiver and back off. Of course, the new leader went for intimidating him first than straight on attacking straight on. For the short time he still stood in one place, the feline hybrid actually thought he could keep calm, yet when the opponent began to outright mock the previous leader, the lad quite honestly snapped. Just as he was standing, seemingly calm, he sprang and opened his mouth, extending those muscles to the fullest in order to deliver a killing blow. His lips lifted upwards, the two huge upper canine teeth were like flying knives. Fortunately, the reptile's senses were not dim and he swiftly avoided the assault. Landing on the ground, Bars used the crouched position to thrust himself forward. Yet again, the boy who was 2 years younger than him escaped his grasp. He was fast and perhaps prepared. One thing was certain: from the beginning to the very end, Maddock was going to enjoy each and every moment of this battle. After dodging the first few blind attacks, the leader himself went and collided with the furious freak. They clashed, separated and crossed again. Each time they hit and spun around, sometimes even looking as if they were dancing. Raptor had claws on his hands to use, but Bars' were on his feet, thus he was quickly able to discard his shoes, which were also handy for distractions. In the mean time, he managed to land a few scrapes with his teeth, but they barely made the cold-blooded individual bleed. And with good reason. If they actually hit, a reasonable chuck of meat would be pulled out. Whenever he landed on the ground without hitting, the youngster knew he was going to get attacked from behind, thus he had to frequently stand on his hands rather than on his feet so that he could either escape or counterattack. In comparison to the dinosaur, he was built to jump high in various directions from different positions. This in turn did not make Maddock sluggish. Despite the length of his tail, it was still a vital weapon, potentially dangerous when swung. Two hours were spent in circling and clashing again and again. Kicks and fists were thrown in the air most of the time while they avoided each other. The younger of the two proved more eager to attack, but he was being entertained, he was having pleasure, while the other was fighting from pure wrath, anger and loyalty. The both of them had a deadly concoction of mental state and emotions which drove them to a level beyond just lethal to one another, but also to anyone who got in the way. Those who came too close either got their face crushed or guts spewed. In this crazy tornado or claws, spit, blood and hits there was no room for outsiders. In the long run, Bars knew he was at a certain disadvantage. The other competitor had both teeth, tail and two sets of claws at his disposal. To counter that, he had his own claws on his feet, his outrageously big fangs and the strength of his muscles. So far each had landed plenty of hits on the other. He had managed to cut the lizard's side and leg, while he himself had received plenty of cuts on his back and arms. Blood had spilled on the floor and the walls after they had hit them a couple of times. There were even cracks, which seemed like red roses. The useable materials, such as rubbish, were already broken to the point of dust. Wooden sticks with blood stained needles, bottles shattered in million crimson pieces, metals too crushed for use. Somehow, from all that going left and right, up and down, sideways and backwards, the lad finally found some sort of opening. He jumped in the matter of milliseconds and bit hard into the reptile's tail. Maddock swung him around and since he was incapable of reaching him like that, he threw him at the walls, splashing a new shade of bright red over the already darkened dried one. It felt like a wild roller coaster. With a spinning head and leaping heart, the guy had the feeling he could barf any moment. However, there was no way he would let go. Not until another chance was opened in front of him. If he were to lose his grip, the split second he would need to recover from taking his canines out of there would be enough for the other to snap his neck with his razor sharp teeth. But quickly enough, the lady of luck smiled upon him. A plan. Use the wall as a platform to full the fangs out quickly enough to use the pressure in your feet to jump and crush the person's skull. It was legit. Doing just that, the next time he was swung at a wall, Bars used his still strong legs as a metal spring and leap at him. He believed. Both in himself and in justice. All those killings needed vengeance or at least a reason. If this one soul was able to pay for the losses, so be it. Unfortunately, there was a little problem. Despite being completely nuts, Maddock was no fool. He knew exactly what his opponent was intending, so he used his craws to counterattack. His plan included cutting the throat or at least shredding the eyes to bits. In both cases they failed. Raptor had a heavily bleeding tail and cuts from every side, but was still alright and breathing, although heavily. The same can not be said about Bars. He himself had injuries everywhere, yet nothing could compare to the wound on his face. An enormous opening, half of the cheek as well as a long line across his mouth all on the left side was gone. A chunk of meat was missing and his teeth were completely exposed. There were hanging pieces of muscle, not to mention the waterfall of blood which flowed down his face and formed a stream on the ground below. He was a freak, a mess of wild dreadlocks, some over his eyes and beside the fresh wound, like dead snakes sprouting form his head. Breathing heavily, with so much bloodloss, that amber gaze was still sharp and burning with rage. Indeed, his spirit could keep going, maybe even until eternity itself was over, but his body was going to abandon him soon. Disregarding all the throbbing pain, he leaped again for his green and red enemy, but was avoided swiftly and kicked to the side. Rolling down in the bloody dust, he knew it all too well. It was over. Not only the fight, his life as well.
It can't be said if Maddock was intending to kill him at all. Only that lunatic knows. But he was slower to react. Maybe because of the wounds he had also suffered, notably the one on his tail, which would prevent any animal from moving properly. From what Bars heard later on, the splicers from the lab had come to break them up, using the excuse that they were both precious samples. Even then the head could have killed him on command, yet no such was given. Although the scientists wanted to close up the wound, the guy refused, both because it was the boss' order not to and since he didn't want to be experimented on again. From that day, Bars carries his burdens on his face, reminding himself that loyalty and pride have no great meaning. He didn't grow scared of Raptor, but knows to keep his moth shut around him...as much as possible, at least.
- × "Nibyoukan" cover done by Soraru
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FYlU-EdfNXQ
- × What a Mechairodus Kabir is http://carnivoraforum.com/topic/9493580/1/
x Bars has a huge 'smile' on the right side of his face which enables his fang to be completely visible. Although tissue has grown here and there, the muscles can't grow themselves back and he refused to receive any 'special' treatment. Whet it comes to eating, he mainly chews on his left side, but liquid sometimes spills when he drinks. Since it is still prone to infection, he has to clean it regularly with different anti-bacterial medicine.
x He's just one centimeter below the leader. Maddock has warned him that if he grows taller than him, he'll chop his legs to make him shorter.
x Alcohol. He prefers vodka, whiskey or cognac.
x Drugs. He began when he was 10, but stopped when he was 16 after seeing the boss get high. The thought of it being dangerous for him if he was 'hazy' and his leader was 'hard' passed his mind and he hasn't touched the stuff ever since.
x When it comes to having 'partners', Bars was a very 'playful' guy at the age of 16, but after the fight with Raptor, he's hardly touched anyone. He's never gone to brotels for obvious reasons.







































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