HypnoticPanda wrote:Unknown Voices wrote:(Small bump~ Also, my forms are complete. Feel free to advise me on changes.)
((You asked for anyone to point out mistakes : o the only thing I saw was "He dies " instead of 'He died'))
(Thank you! ♥)
HypnoticPanda wrote:Unknown Voices wrote:(Small bump~ Also, my forms are complete. Feel free to advise me on changes.)
((You asked for anyone to point out mistakes : o the only thing I saw was "He dies " instead of 'He died'))







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