Hunting the Impure - Vampire/Hybrid/Human RP

[Caeleesi]

What's this hush hush you're talking about then?}}

(His nickname is practically grain~ It says hush hush because if someone brings that fact up he won't be too happy.)

[-Superman-]

(I have internet where I am. I will try to get on as much as I can)

[Caeleesi]

((So am i accepted? ^^))

[RoyalInTheDark]

[Everyone is accepted; I've only got a few issues with a couple of the forms. Maya, You need to edit the history you have for the princess as well as the last name; the last name has to be Orleans... the history just doesn't fit for a vampire princess with a dead mother and only one brother; you also need to change Nathan's first name as we have a character called Nathaniel and it would be rather confusing; the hybrid you have needs to have the last name of Orleans. Dragonir, all hybrids have the typical vampire speed, strength and senses so her power needs to be different... I'll edit everyone in when I get home from school tomorrow.]

[daices.]

edited. }}

[RoyalInTheDark]

[You'll have to pick only one of those powers; travelling through time and stopping time are two different things...]

[daices.]

Really? Would I be able to say manipulating time, then, or is that too iffy of a loophole?}}

[RoyalInTheDark]

[It's too broad a power; most powers are simple little things as the vampires and hybrids already have the super advanced speed, strength and senses.]

[RoyalInTheDark]

[Bump

[diana.]

{{ fixed (: