Oh... okay... cliffhanger..
This comic won't have speech bubbles (I'm adding text to it for this for something other than CS for a change. Webtoons.)
Anyway...
Dialog/sound effects:
Key:
b Panel #
u Character
i Sound effects
"i" Thought/narration
"[Text]" Dialog
Panel 1: BOOM
Panel 2: ???: "I have to hurry before this storm gets worse..."
Panel 3: crack-crack-crk
Panel 4: RUMBLE
Panel 5: "SISTER!"
First page is up, finally! Enjoy... comments are appreciated






