[Doctor Allons-y]

Wooh finally got this up! This was pretty fun to make actually. I'm excited for this story. I wish I had more time for it. Anyways I hope you enjoy this! I apologize more my sucky trees, I'm horrible at backrounds! Comments are reeeeeeeeeaaaalllly appreciated

Panel 1

Collin:Oh, there he is.

Panel 2

Lance: Dude, that was awesome! I lost track of you for a while! How far did you go?!
Avery: To the edge of the Forest.
Lance: No way! That's sick!
Avery:Yeah, but lets keep quiet about it. If Collin found out he'd kill me!

Panel 3

Collin: Dramatic as always, dear brother. But for once you are right. I do seem to have acquired the sudden urge to kill you.
Avery:Oh...hi Collin...
Lance: Ummm...Avery...I need to go...good luck.

Panel 4

Collin: What were you thinking?! Flying around the forest like that! Do you have any idea what you risked by pulling that little stunt of yours?!
Avery: Oh stop being so stiff and loosen up!

Panel 5

Collin: Or maybe you should start taking things more seriously! What if you were seen?
Avery: Well I wasn't, ok! So it doesn't matter!

Panel 6

Collin: Doesn't matter? As always you have failed to notice the big picture! You have broken one of the biggest and most important rules. You left the Haven and went into an uncleared part of the Forest. If you had been seen it could have led to the discovery and/or capture of us all. If this is to become a habit of yours then I will have no choice but to inform someone that my younger brother is a danger to all of us. There is only two words I have to say to you now. Badly done. That was very badly done, Avery!

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[octoberwind]

Awesome page!<3
cant wait for pg 3

[Doctor Allons-y]

Thank you so much!

[pisgah]

Your art is so cool!

[Doctor Allons-y]

Thank you so so so much! :'D