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Panel One
Estrid:
-Paces around nervously- Oh jeez uh what do I do to help them...?
???:
Hey hey hey! Blue girl!
Estrid:
? -Looks up-
Panel Two
Marx:
You want to help your friends n' all, right? Since, y'know, you kinda just knocked 'em out!
Estrid:
Wh-...I-...How do you-...?
Panel Three
Marx:
What's that? Cat got your tongue? Huh. Maybe you don't want help after all...
Estrid:
No no no! I, uh...would really appreciate some help, if...if it's not too much to ask or anything!
Panel Four
Marx:
Right then!
Zeus:
Hold it!
Panel One
Estrid:
-Paces around nervously- Oh jeez uh what do I do to help them...?
???:
Hey hey hey! Blue girl!
Estrid:
? -Looks up-
Panel Two
Marx:
You want to help your friends n' all, right? Since, y'know, you kinda just knocked 'em out!
Estrid:
Wh-...I-...How do you-...?
Panel Three
Marx:
What's that? Cat got your tongue? Huh. Maybe you don't want help after all...
Estrid:
No no no! I, uh...would really appreciate some help, if...if it's not too much to ask or anything!
Panel Four
Marx:
Right then!
Zeus:
Hold it!
oops i kind of ended up revamping zeus
also i was so tempted to make zeus say "OBJECTION!"
...and to make marx say "TOO BAD, WALUIGI TIME" at some point
hes even purple and everything
everything is purple today. purple is a colour
but anyway!
new page, new style!
it kind of gives off a whole new impression or essence or air or whatever
essence de false remedy
yeah im just derping now
but the new style has seemed to cut down on time!
i mean, it still took, what, six hours?
i dont know
but you know, the timer is lying this time
i left the oekaki open for an hour and a half before i started the page
so it really has cut off some time!
especially if you consider that, the last page, which was, ill admit, a pretty lazily-done pretty-much-three-panel page, and that took seven and a half hours...
and that was while not even doing the ridiculous hair shine!
but enough of my babbling already
RIPPLE STAR AINT GONNA SAVE ITSELF 8U
-flies off to play kirby 64-
edit;; ahaha timer says bout eight hours oh well close enough right .p.
cakecrumbs wrote:AND NOW FOR THE NEWS AT ALMOST NINE
false remedy is going to be going on an itsy bitsy break
despite my doubts about things, its not going to be cancelled completely or on any long hiatus or anything
but i just need a small break, because im a little busy
pushing other sort of big things aside, ive got one GREAT BIG THING that im working on, and i have to get it done pretty soon!
but ill be working on page twenty starting from the first of december
just thought i should let you guys know
thank you for all of the support so far! it really means a lot <3
Estrid/Zeus © Me
Marx/Kirby (since you know this didnt stop being a kirby fancomic when the style changed n' all) © HAL Laboratory/Nintendo










