[FallingFlower]

Prologue
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Page 1

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Here we have it, folks! Page 1 of Paradise!

Yeah, I'm not even gonna try with the castle because my pen hates me. It's a lazy page, nothing much happens but a bunch of shady characters enter the scene with.. a very familiar shape.

Comments and Critique are always, always welcome in the house! Remember that I'm still taking in your Ponies! They may appear with a heavy role, or a background character. Either way, I'm most likely going to have them somewhere in here if you submitted a Pony. It may take awhile for the plot to progress for this to happen, so please keep that in mind and please don't nag for a new page just to see your character. Sure, a reminder would gladly be accepted, but please don't overload it.
...And with that, I'm off! *Splash*
MLP is Copyrighted to Lauren Faust.

[corrosive_limes]

I dont want stella in the comic anymore. Just in case you didnt see my last post.

[sketchy::]

This is amazing<3! Love it!

[Squautle]

I wanna know what happens next! (Btw nice pony drawings)