Re: Wolf Song Page 23

Postby rainingdarkness » Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:44 am

The only parts of the body where you might stand a chance at hitting bone without muscle are joints. That wound was in the thigh though.

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Re: Wolf Song Page 23

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:15 pm

rainingdarkness wrote:The only parts of the body where you might stand a chance at hitting bone without muscle are joints. That wound was in the thigh though.

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*shrugs* I don't know. I wasn't really thinking about that when I wrote it, but about what would happen next. Forgive me for that slip up. Your the first to notice though. I'll be sure to work better at my writing so as not to slip up like that again.

By the way, I checked out your creation, Pardesuros's, and I really liked them. I applied a form for the Male Forest. He's a very neat design.
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this world could rot
die, and kill itself off
but a promise is a promise
and promises should always be kept
dont you think?

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Re: Wolf Song Page 23

Postby rainingdarkness » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:19 pm

You could write it so that the cut only went through skin, but didn't damage muscle? :)
Thank you for applying for him, by the way. He's one of the ones that's been sitting there for weeks because there weren't enough applications. X3 The judging will be done in two days, so you'll want to make sure to have a thread or website to put in the link section. ^^
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Re: Wolf Song Page 23

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:26 pm

rainingdarkness wrote:You could write it so that the cut only went through skin, but didn't damage muscle? :)
Thank you for applying for him, by the way. He's one of the ones that's been sitting there for weeks because there weren't enough applications. X3 The judging will be done in two days, so you'll want to make sure to have a thread or website to put in the link section. ^^



Alright. That sounds like a good idea.

I'll work hard at him tonight. I'll try and draw a picture, but I'm not a great artist. In fact, I suck. Basically. XD
But I'll work hard my writing a lengthy description, and a few other small things. Like a short story for him.
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Re: Wolf Song Page 23

Postby BassKitten » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:22 pm

the story's a bit confusing and its hard to tell between the male and female characters they all look male to me but aside from that great job!
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Re: Wolf Song Page 23

Postby Artwork-Is-Key » Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:42 am

I like this comic so far. :)
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