Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1" by ShadowStar95

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Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby ShadowStar95 » Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:39 am

Ok the title is a wip. If you have any idea what to call the series go right ahead and tell me your suggestions below in comments.

ANYWAY

This is just a test comic where I was trying out some drawing styles for a comic (besides W.F.A. cause that looks bad on purpose XD). If you guys want me to make pt. 2 plz lemme know below, cause idk if I should. (part of me wants to finish it, part of me is like, "what's the point..?"

As of now, this is what I know I need to fix if I make an actual comic:

the text is too small and not very easy to read- a small problem I ran into
lazy bgs because test comic.
no title card or something like that because...test comic. XD

If there's anything else you wanna point out is weird or wrong, or if you have any questions, also lemme kno in the comments. I'm up for constructive criticism. ^w^

Sky (the orange fish-lizard-thing); Bonny (the white and light-grey Anthro Rabbit); B.C. (the blue cat-rabbit-thing) (c) Me
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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby Bunny!! » Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:48 am

This is really nice! You did a wonderful job on the drawing and I could really read the words! I love it!
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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby rabbit. » Mon Aug 08, 2016 8:02 am

oo this is amazinn owo
ew this was ugly
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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby ShadowStar95 » Mon Aug 08, 2016 8:27 am

Lilly Your Bff wrote:This is really nice! You did a wonderful job on the drawing and I could really read the words! I love it!


aa ty. But the words in the top left are so messeh eeehhh XD.

Box. wrote:oo this is amazinn owo


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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby y i n ☯ y a n g » Tue Aug 09, 2016 2:40 am

I ♥ this.
Pls make a part 2!
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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby ShadowStar95 » Tue Aug 09, 2016 6:44 am

♥DelilahDoodles♥ wrote:I ♥ this.
Pls make a part 2!


eep ty!
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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby AJVideos2004 » Tue Aug 09, 2016 9:20 am

:D It's awesome! I would totally read it if it were to be a real comic!
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Re: Team Star's Test Comic- "Bonny's Classroom pt.1"

Postby ShadowStar95 » Tue Aug 09, 2016 12:52 pm

AJVideos2004 wrote::D It's awesome! I would totally read it if it were to be a real comic!

aa ty! This makes me su happeh hehe. >w<

But this is just a test scenario XD. I mean, if it was to be the actual comic I hope for one fine day, I guess there'd be a few scenes in Bonny's classroom, but it'd mostly focus on the other things they do for a living. (trying not to give spoils in case I actually do make that comic one day XD)
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