[wyzrd]

He runs under the red-brown skies, over the marshy grounds to the gardens surrounding the Tree. Another day on the leathery hard ground, staring at the skies.
What lies above the clouds?
That's the only mystery that he hasn't solved.
"But I, Druin, master of mystery! Will find out!"
He outstretches his arms, flying over the ground, his tough bare feet pounding the ground in sync with his heart. Running out of the marshy lands, he bolts down the valley in which the gardens and the hill with the Tree sit in waiting.

Credit to OctaSmile for the original premise (of a guy with a stick who likes to solve mysteries) and setting (of a tree on a hill and gardens and marsh and wilderness scarylandstuff).

Huhuhuhhh vague intros for the win.

Akcakakummm... This is a littittittittittle sieries that I'll do with a mouse while my tablet's broken and I can't do Donoko's Door.

Feeeeeeeedback? Questions? Critique? Talk to me about the story and not the art.

OOHHH. And NOT ONLY DID I not do this with my tablet, I did it with a trackpad. *~* HahahaHAAA.

[OctaSmile]

Hehehehheh MY CREATION IS ALIVE! RISE, Druin, come and take your DESTINY!

Um, that was odd. Anyway, yay the comic is starting! Looks cute, as is to be expected.

[wyzrd]

It's not aaalllll your creation, you just gave the premise and setting and stuff, I fleshed it in I think sort of whatever. So what do you think would be good for an opening chapter?

[OctaSmile]

What I meant by "my creation" is not the comic, but Druin. I described what he looked like, a bit of what he did, etc. Therefore, he is "my creation" since I created him. You brought him to life by drawing what I had created and had explained to you.
Amazing that you can understand him at all considering my explanational difficulties.
As for your question, my reaction is this:
0.0 Whaaaatt you started the series and you DON'T KNOW?!?
That said, how should I know? And why do you want to know what I think, since my suggestions involve plot, and you don't want this series to have plot? I thought you were just going to make random stuff up. XD
So... what did you really want? I must have misunderstood your seemingly blatant aversion to structure and intelligence in this project. Perhaps you were just being contrary and you really weren't saying anything you really meant. Or did you change your mind?
Do you want to have a plot in HappyDay SKiES? If so, I'd be happy to discuss options for the first chapter with you. If you don't want plot, I'm not sure if I will have much to offer, but I'd still be happy to try.

[wyzrd]

What I meant by the fact that I "don't want a plot" is that I want to have chapters that all have different plots. And I mean by "a good opening chapter" is an adventure for the chapter that would be good to introduce the comic's characters, setting, and etc. The reader doesn't know everything that we do. So what's your opinion on what a good introductory chapter should have in it?

[OctaSmile]

Characters. We must introduce all, or as many as possible, of the main characters in a good, logical, natural, and interesting way. Not in an overwhelming dump of who's who and what they do, we want a good introduction that gives a glimpse (and I say glimpse, that is fine, we don't need to go all out on development in Ch1) of the main people of the story. We want to give a taste of their personalities and roles.
We'll need an antagonist to introduce too...
We also need to show some problems Druin is facing. Is he lonely? Worried? Does he have a problem? Is there something about his life that's a little off?
We want to bring in some sort of plot that can show Druin at his best, and at his worst, I think. We should try to show his unusual talent, and how he can be a hero and an awesome dude with it, but we also must show some significant weakness, because we want him to grow over the series, don't we?
So my point is this: before we fret over plot too much, I say we need to work on our cast. Give Druin a couple friends, maybe a petty rival or two, and a mentor. Then grab a villain, hand him a weapon, and set him loose on the world and see what everyone does.
What do you say?

[wyzrd]

I say that you've already told me we need more cast. And so I shall work on that. o3o And we should interview him as we'll. and I'm really tired so let us sleep. 'Gnight.

[OctaSmile]

Okay, now get to drawing that intro! I want to get to the real story already!

[wyzrd]