((i only started rp this year

so any thing to help me get better is welcomed)
"now iam going to let you up now"flame told fai and slowly got off him fai just got up and whent back to saphiras dead body and lay next to her agen. flame turned sadly and ran into the woods
why did i just give away my most deeply hided secrate she thourt sadly and contued to run comint to a clearing she slowed and had a drink at the pond there
(whate why is crystila attacking star?)