The beginning! Revamping, important message page 20!

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((It's in the beginning of the clan days, they where driven out by humans when they invaded their territory, its in Firestar's quest I think))

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Oh yes, should I change it?

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((You don't have to if you don't want to, I don't think it really matters, but you can))

[Ibuki Mioda]

((thanks!))

[FourCrosses]

Riverstar looked down at her growing clan. She smiled. There was Mousepaw, pestering her mentor to go hunting again. It was a warm day, and prey was running well.

"Please, please, please?" Mousepaw looked at Pebbleflower hopefully."Can we go down to the river?" It was a glorious day, and she couldn't wait to impress Riverstar with her hunting skills.

Mudpaw stood at the ridge of a tall hill. The wind ruffled his fur. He noticed movement, a small vole. He stalked it carefully, dispatching it neatly. He grinned. (( Do cats grin?)) It was a plump vole, and the other apprentices would be jealous.

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Streamstar stood still behind Mudpaw, her ears twitching softly as she scented for rabbits.

[FourCrosses]

Suddenly, a terrible smell came to Mudpaw's nose. "Fire!" he yowled. "Quick, Streamstar! The Thunderclan camp!" He raced down the hill.

Riverstar stared in dismay at the glowing flames flickering in the apprentice den. She cursed under her breath. Thank heavens Mousepaw had gone hunting. No one would ever know why she cared so much about the boisterous apprentice.

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Streamstar's ears perked, her eyes widened as she sprinted sown the slope towards thunderclan camp.

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Mudpaw stopped by the stream, dunking a ball of moss into the water. "Come on, oh, COME ON, Streamstar!" He hoped; it couldn't be, could it? His worries grew as he neared the camp. The entire apprentice's den was on fire. Was Mousepaw in there? He hoped not.

Riverstar scraped yet more sand into the fire. Where was the border patrol? They would be back soon... she hoped.

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Streamstar dunked a page ball of moss in the river, leaping over it she sprinted to the camp, squeezing the water over the fire she rushed to get more.