by *~*CanisLupus*~* » Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:33 am
((your still not using proper punctuation. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just Dyslexic and is it isn't correct it makes it hard for me to read them. Here, I'll show you how to do it.
Faline dreamed of her mother and father,"Mom, dad?" She asked outloud."Hello Faline."Her mother said."MOM!", Faline woke up
She saw that it was only a dream. Faline lowerd her head and went back to watch the bucks fight.
That is how its done ^-^ Its fine, I don't mean to me annoying its just hard for me to read without it being correct))
Aristotal jerked his head back and butted racks once more with Camolot, his neck and shoulder muscals rippled and flexed. He grunted then twisted his necka nd threw Camolot to the side. Camolot got to his hoves and shook out his pelt,"You won again." he chuckled. Aristotal smiled,"You know it." he grunted and flexed his shoulders.
Blackheart wached the bucks then snorted and struted into the clearing, her oddly colored and marked pelt glowing dimly in the white light of the sun. The young lead doe raised her head high and straitened her neck and looked at the herd with eyes filled with leadership.
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