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[Lady Luna]

(Oh, sorry I wasn't paying attention, I'll edit it!)

[Inactive-Account]

"Thank you." Adderstar smiled. "I trust that you teach Larkpaw some manners and respect. I know this is very unformal, but it must be done."

[Lady Luna]

(I am writing a story, so I might be a little out of it.....)

"I'll try." Foxleaf smiled and rolled his head around once to loosen it.

[Inactive-Account]

That's cool! :] Tell me when you finish! ;D Also, does anyone here have a youtube account? O.e I'm making an animation based off of RainClan, but I need voices.

Adderstar nodded once, and padded up to his den.

Larkpaw looked over tword Foxleaf. He had heard the entire conversation. "You know, Adderstar was right. I do need to learn respect and manners. But doesn't every cat? Especially a few of our warriors. But theproblem is, I'd most likely excell in battle, since you're best at that. Maybe we could both work on hunting." He said matter-of-factly, trotting over ot join the tom.

(If you read in his personality, he's into radical honesty... O.e LOL)

[Lady Luna]

Foxleaf was slightly raken aback.
"Ooookay." He said and stood up. "well then, lets go practice hunting?" He said cautiously.

(I don't have an account sorry. I promise I will show you! I have like 4 short chapters done and I have to get the 5th. The story is going to be called either Warrior Brothers, Ashnose's Quest, or The Endless Path.)

[Inactive-Account]

Ooh, cool! :D I like Endless Path. :3 And sad. :c Well it's okay. lol (Now I'm distracted with tryping the script. >.<)

Larkpaw nodded and followed his mentor out of camp.

[Lady Luna]

(Lol. I have to think of a beginning to the 5th chapter. The beginning is sad and it won't get happy for a bit.....)

Foxleaf shook his head. That is one crazy tom! He tested the air for scents. With the taste of a robin on his tongue, Foxleaf started to creep up on the feathered prey.

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"Your form is sloppy." Larkpaw remarked, quite rudely. (lol)

[Lady Luna]

Foxleaf hissed under his breath as the robin fluttered into the air.
"Well, practice makes perfect." If you let match something.

(Heeheeheehee Foxleaf is peeved. I do like The Endless Path. IT kinda goes with the plot. In the first chapters, Ashnose, the main character, does some bad things and decides to run away to save his clan, Stormclan. His brother Rockpelt was attacked and killed by an Iceclan cat. Ashnose decides on revenge and ends up killing two cats instead of one. He leaves and starts out on a path with his Endlessclan brother to guide him.)

[Inactive-Account]

Oooh, interesting! 8D I can't wait!!!

Larkpaw shrugged. "Nothing's perfect, you know."