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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Fat Unicorn » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:14 pm

((I'll try and edit my earlier post again I guess...))
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Fat Unicorn » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:21 pm

Blu Winter wrote:(Actually five is very sturdy and agile. Thats why he is such a murder because he is strong, large and very agile. His fangs are more for puncturing like that of a ferrets of a cats.)
Five snorted at the male, he thought that he could out dodge him. "Pup Please!" he laughed, a crazed expression spreading over the males face, a sadistic grin that he had worn when he ripped half of Pan's face off. He watched the male prepare to dodge and lept right at the male, landing just infront of him and repelled himself to the males side, ready to catch him while the male would try to dodge, his sharp long fangs snapping at the males face, if the male dodged the other way Five would easilly jump onto his back and grasp his scruff if he was quick enough, if the male jumped into him like he had hoped then kaz would get a painful bite to the face hopefully.


Kazouri gritted his teeth at Five's insult as he skidded to a halt, thrusting his face back in an attempt not have the fangs in his face. The little brute, through his utter confusion and adrenaline, tried to dodge the other way. He would just have to try..... but if he didn't succeed in getting away..... he shuddered in mid-step. Kazouri by now was an a position Five could easily pounce on him, even though Kazouri didn't know it out of his fear.
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Flame-Eye » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:25 pm

Right,

This fight is silly and pointless...

Reject: Because of your arguing and Goddmodish posting, Blu is considering kicking you form D&C, However I'm saying to let you find your feet. Everyone makes mistakes sometimes.

Blu: I don't Think Kicking Reject for the first thing she did wrong will be the right Idea, as I say Give Reject another chance.

Note: Me and Blu arn't the owners, However we do have considerale power over this RP. It is not our dessision whether you stay or not, But I say Try to improve your future posts so Pan doesn't say 'Kick'. But Reject, From now on, Please don't argue with what We say, If you think Blu's being rude, point it out nicely and this may have never happened.
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Flame-Eye » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:27 pm

Kazouri gritted his teeth at Five's insult as he skidded to a halt, thrusting his face back in an attempt not have the fangs in his face. The little brute, through his utter confusion and adrenaline, tried to dodge the other way. He would just have to try..... but if he didn't succeed in getting away..... he shuddered in mid-step. Kazouri by now was an a position Five could easily pounce on him, even though Kazouri didn't know it out of his fear.


((See, This is much better and more readable :))

(Gah... Still waiting Star Bluberry!)
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Bℓυ ωιитєя » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:30 pm

(Hold on wait a minute.
Rejected Artist wrote:((Yes, I have heard of it, but have not god-modded. You have, though - I've let your wolf surround him, blocking his escape.

Blu Winter wrote:(Actually five is very sturdy and agile. Thats why he is such a murder because he is strong, large and very agile. His fangs are more for puncturing like that of a ferrets of a cats.)


and that isn't god modding? Good at everything? at least I gave Kazouri a big weakness, his small size and strength.))


I warned you that you where godmoding, you denied it and acused me of godmoding.
We would have never been in this fight if you had of listened to me in the first place.
No a cliff hanger is something that stalls the whole RP.)

Five growled low in his throat as his fangs snapped in mid air infront of the males face. his fiery amber eyes followed the male as he dodged, and Five began to break down, laughing crazilly, he loved chasing down hairs. "Run puppy!" he barked out in laughter, shoulders shaking with excitement as he pounced after the male, nipping at the males hind legs. Five was playing with him now, if the male wouldn't give him a proper fight then why not have some fun?!

(Sorry Flame, I will get right on it darling. <3
This post is much better Reject)

Star turned, snarling as she felt eyes on her. Her eyes locked with that of a Blue wolf, before a large male smashed into her, knocking the medium white female off her paws. She landed with a cry of pain on the ground, fangs around her face. Kicking for the realise of her face she began to squirm in pain... what a way to go!
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Fat Unicorn » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:35 pm

Flame-Eye wrote:
Blu: I don't Think Kicking Reject for the first thing she did wrong will be the right Idea, as I say Give Reject another chance.


((Can I just say something here?
I am trying to correct my mistake, going back and editing my posts.. I am a firehead (a nickname someone gave me ages ago,) and am well-known for how much I can be a pain in the bum. Yet Blu, you could've been nicer and I would've cooled straight down and wouldn't have retorted like I did.

I'm sorry and I'll try not to do what I have in the future.

But I do not believe the fight was entirely my fault....))

"Chase, brute, chase what is no challenge for you!" Kazouri retorted, his determination boiling up again. Five was almost near impossible to shake off. He had the advantage of seeing where Kazouri was going from behind. So he would see what Kazouri was doing immediately. Kazouri started to turn in a circle ever so slightly, praying to heavens above Five wouldn't notice. But he still might catch Kazouri. This urged him on faster, trying not to let his feet get in the way, otherwise Five might grab it and pull him down.
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Flame-Eye » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:40 pm

(Thanks Hon <3!)

"Oi!" Jed Snapped, Immediatly leaping to the females defence. Little was he aware, She, Was the Rebels Alphess... He sprang to his feet. Tail raised in an attempt to frighten the attacker. He slammed a paw into the snow and Snarled in aggression at the male. He galloped towards her, Kicking his back legs in a kind of war dance. He wasn't really interested in a fight yet.
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Bℓυ ωιитєя » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:46 pm

(Just shut up Reject, I really do not care what you think.)
Five didn't really understand what the male said, he was watching the male, interpretting his next move. Suddenly Five darted away as they passed Vita, his fangs parting wide as he attempted to leap on her, eyes ablaze. That mutt was worthy nothing to the alpha female. "Sorry about this Vita," he appologised as he landed infront of her, staring down at her with narrowed eyes. "But all is fair in love and war..." he growled, bunching himself up and then leaped at her.

The male looked up, giving Star enough time to kick him off her. The male landed beside her, and she scrambled to get ontop of him, her jaws closing around his neck where she held on, crushing his wind pipe between her vice grip. The male slowely stopped moving, and Star straightened up, starring at Jed with her stunning pink eyes before she turned and vanished amongst the fighting wolves.
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Fat Unicorn » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:50 pm

Kazouri, who had run for about 30 seconds before he didn't hear thudding pawsteps behind him, finally dared to whirl around to see what had happened to his intruder. Five was leaping at Vita, the female Kazouri had been trying to help earlier. The little brute could do nothing about it but watch in horror, frozen to the spot.
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Re: Under Intense Heat | Dead Mans Plain; War Zone | D&C Pri

Postby Flame-Eye » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:54 pm

(Very Profesional Blu... XD! Reject don't bother arguing with her you'll just get yourself kicked...)


Jed stopped and steared in amazment at the females swiftness and agility of her kill. So aggressive and quick... So... Exact. He tilted his head as she vanished into the snowdrift behind to join the battling wolves. He stood for a moment stearing into the Snowdrift... His Metalic Blue coat swishing in the wind.
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