Doggy School (not accepting)

[Xelinator]

The police came and walked in. "Everyone leav efor your own safety!" called the police. Crouds of people ran out. The murderer got arrested. The police looked at Star. "I think the little guys gone."

[Coseylion]

Red turned her attention to the army of policemen suddenly swarming into the room, she tilted her head in even more confusion and hurried over. "Officer?" She asked politley, "what's going on?"

[Xelinator]

The officer sighed. "I'm afriad Jaydon Deth, a murderer, faked a docter and murdered someone called 'Star'." he said, poining to Star who was covered in crimson red blood. A knife was still inside him, dripping with the red stuff.

[borneofash]

Tess fought off the bear, but still could not find the exit to the cave. Bolder! Tess thought. "Help! HELP!" She yelleed, covered with blood, both her's and the bear's. She was weak. "Help," She wimpered, crying again. I'm gonna die here tess thought praying outloud " Dear god, please let some one help me...."

[tokietok]

Grey walked over to Star and started to tear up. "Star, no...Please don't go..." She said, kneeling by the hospital bed and cupping his paw in hers.

[Coseylion]

Red glanced into the small corner where the green curtains had been pulled open, "but that's th- that's Star!" She gasped and put her paws over her face. "Oh s***, is he ... d, d-" A big black wave felt like it had washed over her and she began to fall to the floor, fainting. This whole day had proved far to much for her and the stress she'd been through had started to show.

[tokietok]

Toby was just taking a walk in the forest and he heard a shout for help. He walked towards the sound and saw a bolder blocking the cave. He shoved the boulder but only made it move about a foot. It did open a small gap which he squeezed threw and saw tess and a bear. He ran up to them both and took his sneaker off. He chucked it at the bear and it hit his nose. Toby ran in between Tess and the bear, taking the slashes and the claws that would've benn Tess's.

[Xelinator]

Star was now having flashes in his head. Something was big, and sharp. It was growling and biting. It was eating dogs... Star's eyes widened. They were a very pale pink. Where the knife was, crimson blood was running. He wasn't breathing.

[borneofash]

"Toby........." Tess fainted, taking possibly her last breath.

[Starry Girl]

(yes black you really have to stop doing that I can barely read what your writing.)
Lyna was surprised that all of a sudden everyone was here. And now another dog is hurt too, she looked like Kass but acted different. When the real doctor came Lyna asked him to help Star quickly.