A New Generation {a Warrior rp,needs toms!!!}

[god-and-angels]

Nightstar
i look at Pebbgleclaw and walk up to him

[~♫Hannah♫~]

{coltrocks,put some more words in your character.IF you you need examples look at all the posts }
"Hi,Nightstar is there a problem?" he moewed a little worried.BUt still had is eyes across the lake.

[god-and-angels]

Nightstar
"just the others fighting across the lake" i say looking at them

[~♫Hannah♫~]

{good just put she instead of I }
Pebbleclaw moewing "yeah Darkclan fight over pretty stupid stuff."

[*BYE*]

form*
Name: spicetail
Warrior name(if not already one):
Gender: male
Age: 13 moons
Personality:stubborn
Looks:
Clan:darkclan
Rank: deputy
Crush(es): looking but likes his leader
Mate:none
Kits:none
Other:

[~♫Hannah♫~]

{accpected you can start rping now}

[*BYE*]

form*
Name: windstar
Warrior name(if not already one):
Gender:female
Age:24moons
Personality: sweet
Looks:
Clan:breezeclan
Rank:leader
Crush(es):none
Mate:none
Kits:none
Other: X

[god-and-angels]

Nightstar
"yep" she agreed then she asks "do you want to go for a walk?"

[~♫Hannah♫~]

form*
Name: windstar
Warrior name(if not already one):
Gender:female
Age:24moons
Personality: sweet
Looks:
Clan:breezeclan
Rank:leader
Crush(es):none
Mate:none
Kits:none
Other: X

{we have a Blazeclan but not a breezeclan}

[~♫Hannah♫~]

Nightstar
"yep" she agreed then she asks "do you want to go for a walk?"

"sure he moewed and on the way we need check the Darkclan boreder"he moewed supcuisly