((MOds delete please. Making a new one from scratch))

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Katelyn walked away from the dappled horse. She walked into the tack room and after she entered the door, Ally bolted out of the room carrying a bucket and Katelyn was chasing her.

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Alex walks Replay down the ramp. At the end of the ramp Replay sorts as if to say 'what is this place'.

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Alex walks Replay to her stall and settles her in. Replay nudges her pocket where show now there are cookies. Luaghing Alex gives her a cookie and strokes her cheek. "I will be back latter girly i have to go make friends."

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Alex walks around the barn hoping to find somebody to talk to

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Ally bolted into the barn, sprinting carrying a bucket of water, as Katelyn was chasing her down the aisles of horse stalls

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Alexs hears running and tuns around two girls race by her

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[ Hey guys, sorry for not replying for so long! ]

Logan sighed, spotting a large looming barn and fences leading off around it and felt his heartbeat quicken. He had been on vacation in an area with no phone service or anything with his family, and though it was fun, he missed the girls and Rim. He sped up the car a bit down the road, hearing the snore of his parents who sat one in the back and one next to him. He tapped his mom next to him as soon as he arrived at the barn and parked their truck on the dirt area, jumping out and letting his mom take charge of the car home with all of the luggage. Fixing his hat just a bit, he headed down into the large barn, taking in the smell of horse with a smile as he headed to Rim's stall and hoped that the stablehand had kept his word with taking care of her while he was gone. He whistled to her in low voice, bringing her out from her back paddock and to the stall door. He smiled, stroking her and talking to her in a soft voice. "Hey girly, where are the others?"

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Ally was running in the barn, looking back and slammed into Logan, making them fall down. Ally got up quickly and pulled Logan up. "I am so soryy I-" she saw Katelyn run closer and Ally squeled and hid behind Logan

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Logan felt something slam into him full-on, pushing him down to the floor. Then she pulled him up again and he noticed that it was Ally. "Oh, hey Ally, it's okay," he said to her calmly with a smile. When she squealed and hid behind him, he frowned, his brow furrowed in a bit of confusion. "Um, Ally...?" he said to her behind his shoulder.

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There must be some who wants to talk her Alex thinks to herself. walking down the barn asile she litens to the horses and hunts for people