Feαтнerclαɴ | Accepting Decent Players

[zliti]

Galeflurry flicked his ear, padding after the she-cat. As she paraded into the camp, he snarled and dashed in after her, hitting her hard over the head. "Don't act so cocky, your lucky I let you live!" He quickly looked around. "Littlebird! We have Puzzlekit!"

[ps4 kid]

Name- Stormkit
Rank- Apprentice
Age- 5 moons
Description-
Personality- Upbeat, Tries to stay positive
Crush- None yet
Mate- None yet ( He's just a kit!)
Kin- His sister Hawkkit, His mother Hollydash and his father Longpelt.
Kits- None...

[Kuj0]

Cinder / Rogue / Featherclan camp / Tags:: Rivernose, Galeflurry, Russetclaw


"Ow! Watch it!" Cinder snaps, glaring at the tom. This was a cat she would definitely hate, no matter what. "So, what happens now? Do I just sit back and chill?"

(I got to go now, bye!)

[lameloserlexi]

Neon, could you fix your forum, please? I don't think I have to explain everything wrong with it, just read through it and I think you'll find the problems.))

[zliti]

Chill? "No! Your going to tell Goldenstar why you took Puzzlekit!" Galeflurry spluttered, his eyes sparking in rage. I can't deal with this! Im going to attack her again!

[ps4 kid]

Neon, could you fix your forum, please? I don't think I have to explain everything wrong with it, just read through it and I think you'll find the problems.))

I edited it is that good?

[hakuna matata;;]

rivernose | she-cat | 25 moons | cats
"Galeflurry," Rivernose replied, laying her tail over the younger warrior in a calming manner, "Calm down. Goldenstar will take care of her. You did good." She smiled slightly, wincing at a cut in her leg before looking to check and see if Puzzlekit and Littlebird were okay. And keep and eye on Crimsonkit.

[zliti]

Galeflurry sucked in a breath, raising his head from it's lowered position. "You're right, I'm sorry. I just..." He turned and inspected her. "You're hurt," He said, half to himself. "Better go get that checked, it could get infected," He added before moving away. "Sasha!" Did she follow us?

[sleepypony]

Is mine accepted)

[ps4 kid]

( I never got a reponse yet ;-;)