The Five Clans V1 (V2 is Starting!)

[scarecrowz]

(I won't judge I bet it will look buetiful!)

[huddson]

(actually, I'm just gonna show off the eyes. editing a lineart I made myself, just to show them off ^-^ In everything, the eyes really complete a picture)(Also, broken, mind if in the description, I use this little bit of speech, for Lillyfur to be supposedly saying?

"I never saw it coming. One moment, we were family... But then you snapped, I couldn't see my kit. And you hid her from me. What had I done to deserve it? Nothing. I argued, but you kept her away... It all happened too soon. I will never explain what I felt, what I felt when I bit your throat. I never saw it coming. And I didn't mean to, but... You were taken from me. And I'll never get you back"

Just tell me if I should edit or remove it. Thanks! ^-^) (Oh, and one for Badgerfur as well, for him to be saying

"I never saw it coming. One minute we were together and one, but by the next blink we were torn apart. I'm sorry I didn't let you see her. I don't know came over me. And when you lunged at me... My heart broke in two. Will I ever be able to explain the feeling of pain, not just physically, when you grasped my fur and bit my throat? I wish I could know why you did that. I was taken in a moment, I never wanted to leave... I will always love you. Goodbye")

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[ShadowBoi]

(yay!)

Lion)

He purred "I may not have still known what you looked like, but your eyes stayed the same. Anyone could tell who I am. The only kit with purple eyes in all the clans I think." he frowned slightly.

[nana]

"Dad told me..." She whispered

[scarecrowz]

Wolfblaze

She ate a rabbit sitting in the Warriors den she finished the rabbit she remembered her brother and groaned ugh he betrayed me why do I remember him she snarled



Hawkclaw

She contuined hunting, ok 3 mice so far he mewed to himself he remembered hunting with his sister and blinked, ah she's to bossy to remember he groaned

[ShadowBoi]

(I'm sorry, but it's kinda bothering me that you don't add quotation marks when your charries are talking ^^;)

Lion)

He flattened his ears, not wanting to hear about his father.

[huddson]

(actually, I'm just gonna show off the eyes. editing a lineart I made myself, just to show them off ^-^ In everything, the eyes really complete a picture)(Also, broken, mind if in the description, I use this little bit of speech, for Lillyfur to be supposedly saying?

"I never saw it coming. One moment, we were family... But then you snapped, I couldn't see my kit. And you hid her from me. What had I done to deserve it? Nothing. I argued, but you kept her away... It all happened too soon. I will never explain what I felt, what I felt when I bit your throat. I never saw it coming. And I didn't mean to, but... You were taken from me. And I'll never get you back"

Just tell me if I should edit or remove it. Thanks! ^-^) (Oh, and one for Badgerfur as well, for him to be saying

"I never saw it coming. One minute we were together and one, but by the next blink we were torn apart. I'm sorry I didn't let you see her. I don't know came over me. And when you lunged at me... My heart broke in two. Will I ever be able to explain the feeling of pain, not just physically, when you grasped my fur and bit my throat? I wish I could know why you did that. I was taken in a moment, I never wanted to leave... I will always love you. Goodbye")

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(*wails* I HAZ TO GOOOOOO. Bye!)

[scarecrowz]

(Sorry it's just I'm not a big fan of the "marks")

Wolfblaze

She wondered around the clan still remembering her brother in revenge, ugh she said clawing at the ground why do I think about the cat that betrayed me she said trying not to get angery

[nana]

"Didn't you hear him? He was right behind you." She Mewed at Spruce

[ShadowBoi]

(omg, crying. Yes.)

Lillyfur)

She looked up at the sky, words echoing in her head as she sobbed silently into Riverstar's fur.