Cloud Clan *REALLY OLD* 2015

[Wolflover101423]

stormpaw woke up during night she padded out of the den and wisperd to herself "what is that noise" she saw a squirrel eating a nut.

[.crossfire.]

Wolfheart padded up to Stormpaw and said go back to your den. You will need to be focused if you want to go with your mentor"

[alyxmin]

(( why are you asking me to post when your not talking to my characters ))

[XxepictimexX]

You were never accepted, Xxwarriorcatsfan01xX)) Willowstar padded away to her kit, moonkit. She smuggled her and kept her precious kit close to her. She watched the warm sun set with clouds of different shades of pink turn a dark navy blue. A cold breeze swept over camp, bit of snow flying up. (Guys, please expand your roleplays more, no one sentence!)

[Wolflover101423]

(will you accept me you really hurt my feelings.)

[.crossfire.]

Wolfheart limped over to Otterpelt and said " Where's larkwing?"

[alyxmin]

Otterpelt - '' i dont know '' she mewed

[.crossfire.]

" well if you see her tell her I said thank you. She changed everything for me" he said then licked her cheek before padding to the warriors den

[XxepictimexX]

I am sorry, though your character can really use improvement and to be even more expanded upon personality, story, etc. Take your to,e to create this cat, please. You rushed.))

[closeface]

Name: Snowfeather
Username: ~ Eeveelover ~
Age: 16 Moons.
Rank: Warrior.
Personality: Kind, bubbly, sweet, funny, proud.
Family: Oscar (Used to be Woodfang, left the forest to be a kittypet) Oceanbreeze (Died having her kits) Stone-eye (Died of a heart attack in the elders' den)
Backstory: Snowfeather is a white she-cat with bright blue eyes. She sadly lived a lonely life, never getting to meet her mother. She was depressed for days when her brother left the forest, but she got over it quickly. She, thankfully, didn't see the death of her father, although she always felt bad he was blind. She's lived a painful life, and she doesn't want to look for a mate too soon, because she fears she'll lose him too.
Crush: None.
Likes: Hunting, basking in the sun, swimming.
Dislikes: Toms trying to charm her, thinking about her family, adders\snakes.
Other: She doesn't try to be Mary-Sueish, and she always finds a way to distract herself when she's feeling down.
Here's a pic