Mountain Wolf Pack wrote:Onyx and Wolfgang heard Cleo's cry. The 2 of them ran towards her and Onyx said "Don't worry. Wolfgang and I were just on our way to go hunting. If we find anything we'll bring you back something, ok?" she said and smiled
(Sorry, but this is only two lines, it has to be at least 3-4 sentences. I will let this by, but next time...)
Mazey
Mazey was biting it's leg, she wouldn't let go, even though it was dead. She was biting enough to hang on when it was of the ground. Mazey accidentally let go, and squealed as she fell. She squealed loud enough for Onyx and Wolfgang to hear. She stayed on the ground, her leg was bleeding. She was a very fragile pup, and now, her leg was bleeding.
Mazey
Mazey was biting it's leg, she wouldn't let go, even though it was dead. She was biting enough to hang on when it was of the ground. Mazey accidentally let go, and squealed as she fell. She squealed loud enough for Onyx and Wolfgang to hear. She stayed on the ground, her leg was bleeding. She was a very fragile pup, and now, her leg was bleeding.





