MoonClan! V.1 Not accepting

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[no, I thought we might as well finish this part in the Rp... I will have Redfeather leave soon so he can start his clan!]

[autumn,]

R E D F E A T H E R
Redfeather looked up at Frostfire, he jumped up instantly,"Frostfire, Frostfire don't leave me!" He screeched. He buried his nose in her fur, taking in her familiar and sweet scent, he heard her begin to speak again and looked up. He was trembling and his voice wavered,"N-No, you will tell her. Y-Your gonna be better!" He looked at her trying to speak again,"I love you too." Was all he could get out before she was gone. He let out a agonized yowl before burying his face in her fur,"I'm so sorry..." He murmured softly,"I'm so sorry.."

[Here is where we last left off with Redfeather and such :3]

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(I will try to respond by tonight.... I'm on mobile right now and sneaking through homework so I can't.... But I'll try soon.
Is posting open in the V. 2 Moonclan? Not that I'll post right now, just to know if I can post Shadeheart tonight.
And for the crush thing.. Shadeheart loves him back, just both of them are confuzzled. *cries* Wish he knew that. xD Shw can't move on...)

[autumn,]

{Okay, I will open the thread for posting forms soon. I knew that she did, but he doesn't know that so I just put that down for his crush :3 I have a lot of cats to do and so far I only have 3.}

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{Done with homework early! Whoop-whoop! Sorry......
Anyway, as soon as posting is open I shall start working on Shadeheart's new form.}

Shadeheart
My emotions flicker. Everything confuses me, and I look from the forest to the two disheartening cats in front of me. I hold back tears skimming and stinging in my eyes. Slowly as their scent becomes faint I go to turn around. I stop, tail swishing and my back to them. I want to live the rest of my youth in happiness, Redfeather. That made me sound like I hated him or what happened between us... I look at the ground, tears brimming my eyes as I hear a faint, scared yowl. A yowl of the word Frostfire. For a moment my breathing becomes labored, and my vision goes in and out before focusing again. That could only mean one thing....My knees buckle and I fall to the ground. Frostfire...? Please... Please... You're the only true best friend I've ever had. I let a tear slip out of my eye. I slowly lift my head to the camp, painfully. I can't see it or smell it, but I know where it is. Yet I don't go back. Frostfire, please forgive me. I'll stay out here. In the wilderness. I can't go back... Let me mourn you here... I them bury my muzzle in the grass. Frostfire...

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R E D F E A T H E R
Redfeather looked around the medicine den, his vision was blurry and he could barely see anything. Tears were still formed in his eyes, but he had forced himself to stop. Mixed emotions swelled inside his body as he stared at Frostfires lifeless body," Inside, he screamed at himself for leaving Frostfire. He put his muzzle in her fur one more time before stumbling out of the den. Luckily, no one was in the clearing and he made a slow, stumbling pace toward the tunnel. His paws felt as heavy as stone as he made his way through the forest. Only did he stop when he saw Shadeheart on the ground. He stopped dead in his tracks, should he talk to her? She couldn't possibly know what had happened. He was about to speak when he realized he couldn't, Frostfire was her best friend. How could he tell her that she had passed away?

[I have to get off my computer so I cant finish my last form but I will open the thread for forms anyways, since the last cat is just a kittypet.]

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{Aww... Well I'm working on a form for a Rp I'm doing with my best friends, but after that I'm going to work on Shadeheart,}

Shadeheart
I hear faint footsteps behind me and I slowly, blinking fiercely to try to get the tears out of my eyes, lift my head to the sound. There, a distance from me, stands Redfeather. I turn my head back and fight conflicting emotions. Finally, I push myself, seemingly as tired as possible, to my paws. I flick my tail and compose myself before turning to him, but the sadness remains in my eyes. "She's....... Frostfire... She's dead...." My voice breaks and I try to steady my breathing as it gets faster. I bring my eyes which are on the ground nervously back up to him. "Isn't she?"

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R E D F E A T H E R
Redfeather looked at her without speaking for several moments. He flinched so bad when she mentioned Frostfire that he knew Shadeheart would be able to tell the answer. His head dropped low to the ground and he whispered," I'm sorry... I.. I couldn't do anything." He closed his eyes and then lowered himself to the ground with his paws and legs underneath him so that he looked like no more than a red colored rock. After a moment he looked up and his eyes met Shadehearts," I'm leaving for a long time Shadeheart. I won't be back for many moons to come." His voice cracked in effort and he felt pain as if it were physical pain with every word he spoke.

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Shadeheart
I blink, closing my eyes and breathing in deeply. I slowly let out a shuttering breath. I walk over to him and slowly, but quickly touch my nose to his before jumping back remembering what Frostfire did to me. That thought made me stop and almost collapse. "It's not your fault..." As he said his next sentence, I flinched like something hit me. "I am too..." I said so softly, it was almost inaudible.

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R E D F E A T H E R
Redfeather blinked and flinched as her nose touched his. He let out a deep breath and mewed quietly," Sha-...Shadeheart..." He shuffled his paws and glanced around," Shadeheart, I wanted to... Well I wanted to ask if you would come with me. He looked down at his paws and stared at them. He whispered quietly," Your the only thing I have left." His tone was so soft he wondered if she would even be able to hear him. He felt a shiver run through his body and he started to think of what he would do if she said no.