((UGH.. dont even wait up for mee!!!???))
DURING ATTACK
Nighttail and the kits began to walk home. Suddenly she say a white fox tail. She looked at her kits, "run to my den." she said sitting down. The kits ran off. It was just her and the fox. "hello," she said looking at him as he appeared from the bushes. "your in danger... They are attacking tonight." he said sitting with her. She stood up."cant you stop them?" she asked. "unfortunateley no. *distant barks* I have to go." he said barking back. He ran off Nighttail jumped up and ran back gracefully and told dapplestar.
She stopped making it to the clan. she saw the chaos and jumped in her voice rang out as she fought. bothe kits were safe in the den. The white fox jumped out of the forest running towards her he mouthed the words "im sorry" as he bit down on her back leg snapping it in almost two. she yowled in that same songlike voice. she turned clawing across his eye. she was in much pain and he let go of her leg whimpering, then he,opening his bleeding eye and foaming at the mouth, stood up and jumped at her. sudddenly her leg stopped hurting and she looked down seeing it was no longer mangled. "great starclan..." she whispered ducking out of his way. she jumped onto him and bit as hard as she could on his neck. she waited untill blood gushed and he stumbled, to his death. she looked around and continued fighting whatever came after her.
Thunderpaw stood from his place under the tree and took off into the camp.'time for action... no more apprentice stuff' he thought speedning into camp. he saw that one fox had snowbreeze pinned against the wall and he jumped onto its back, biting its neck. the fox smiled and fell backward on him crushing him and breaking his ribs. the pain as great and sharp. he tried to yowl but all that could be heard was crimson gurgling..
there he lay dead.
'oh starclan...' snowbreeze thought she saw his eyes glaze over her and sadness and rage filled her eyes. she let out a battle cry hurling herself at the fox who stood over thunderpaw laughing. she jumped grabbing the bottom of his neck. he was too strong, wedging its paw between her chest and his, he pushed her onto the ground biting her neck. she yowled and gurgled. it let go and turned away, she stood up shakily blood searing from her neck and mouth. seeing thunderpaw, she ,with all her might, flung herself at the fox biting the same wound she had before but clinging to it with her claws. it tried to bark and blood dripped from its mouth to her forhead. her eyes began to glaze as the fox collapsed onto her. it lay there dead and so she did under it.
AFTER ATTACK
nighttail ran to snowbreezes side, seeing thunderpaw. she began crying. her tears were a teel blue color. she stood up still crying, and walked to her den. "momma"momma." the kits said as she entered the den. rosekit stopped putting her ears back... she stepped foreward... "whats wrong?" she said. spiderkit sat down looking at his paws. "Your aunt snowbreze... has benn killed." she said breething deaply in. she stopped crying and stepped onto her ledge seeing the destruction below. "if any cat needs my assistance, please come to my den." she called out loudly.