~мαρℓεcℓαи~ Semi Literate. MOVED TO NEW THREAD

[eggog]

Shadow paw:
" calm down." he hissed at her " it's not like the world is going to end." He wrapped his tail over his muzzle closing his eyes He sighed and everything went black,he didn't move for a few moments on from that.
( can he black out because to much blood was gushing out and he didn't get to a med-cat faster? O.o it's okay if not...)

[nyra .]

Rainstar thought for a moment. She couldn't think of a ginger cat on her side of the family. She shrugged, they all shared the same ancestors, after all. "Who knows? It could've been a gene from generations ago." She smiled as her kits suckled at her belly, and she licked each affectionately kit atop the head. "I can't believe we're finally parents," she whispered to Ospreyfeather as she watched her kits with awe and adoration gleaming in her bright blue eyes.

Littlekit kneaded Rainstar's belly and suckled hungrily. She mewled in pain when another kit stepped on her back paw, but she continued suckling without a second though.

{{- WB on that one, sorry. And Dapplefawn is open. }

Goldenwhisker sighed and made his way out of the den with a brisk flick of his long, bushy tail. The cream Tom slid out of the port and remained by the entrance as he began to groom his curled ears, keeping an eye on the entrance. He suddenly felt authoritative, cocky and over-protective of Rainstar and her kits, emitting a low warning growl if any cats got too close. He noticed Dovestripe approaching and gave her a weary squint. "State your business," he mewed, his voice flat.
Dovestripe gave her uncle a look of astonishment. "What?" she asked with a shake of her head. Her green eyes searched her uncle's, but the Tom's golden eyes revealed nothing.
"State your business - why are you here?" Goldenwhisker repeated, a little more firmly.
Dovestripe shook her grey fur and just pushed past the grumpy cat, sliding into the den with ease. "Hello, Rainstar" she whispered.

[eggog]

Username:rainbow
Cat name: Lionpaw
Gender: Tom
Age in moons (kit, 0-6 moons; apprentice, 6-12 moons; warrior/medicine cat, 12-80 moons; elder, 80+ moons.): 10 moons
Rank: apprentice
Rank wanted: warrior
Warrior name (only fill out if apprentice OR kit!): Lion tail
Looks (description in words, please! 1-3 sentences.): a golden cat with amber eyes and a fluffy tail like always he likes to play with it he has some gold stripe in him darker gold stripe. He has short but dangerous claws. He has a scar on one ear he got in a fight with.
Personality (at least 3 sentences): I'm fun, brave, loyal cat I could be cranky at times but that's only if I can't get any sleep. I'm smart at times when something is weird or has gone wrong I could fix it not always, I'm going to be tired a lot lazy ect for tiredness after his mentor yells at him he'll be awake. He's very adventurous at times he'll ask in the middle of training if they could go on an adventure of some kind or he would ask a clan mate to.
Attributes (good qualities. At least 1): fighting
Flaws (bad qualities. At least 1.): hunting
Crush: none
Mate: looking
Kin: unknown
History (optional): doesn't like to talk about it.
Other: llamacorns rule!

[leblanc]

{{-The personality specifically says at least 3 sentences. Please edit it.}

[eggog]

( better?)

[LolNope-Kitty]

Username: Terezi_Pyrope
Cat name: ShimmerPaw
Gender: Female ( She-Cat)
Age in moons (kit, 0-6 moons; apprentice, 6-12 moons; warrior/medicine cat, 12-80 moons; elder, 80+ moons.): 7 moons
Rank: Apprentice
Rank wanted: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Warrior name (only fill out if apprentice OR kit!): ShimmerNight
Looks (description in words, please! 1-3 sentences.): Shimmerpaw is a Black and Graying white She-cat with a Silky coat. Her eyes are Bright green with Bits of Blue sparks..
History : She was abandoned at Camp, Lynxshadow's long lost little sister...
Other: Llamacorns rule!

There we go! x3

[nyra .]

((climbing isn't really a flaw, unless he's bad at doing it... also, the codeword is wrong. The rules also state at least 3 sentences for the appearance.))

((@Terezi, that isn't very literate. Maybe add a few things to it))

[eggog]

( done. )

[LolNope-Kitty]

Username: Terezi_Pyrope
Cat name: ShimmerPaw
Gender: Female ( She-Cat)
Age in moons (kit, 0-6 moons; apprentice, 6-12 moons; warrior/medicine cat, 12-80 moons; elder, 80+ moons.): 7 moons
Rank: Apprentice
Rank wanted: Medicine Cat Apprentice
Warrior name (only fill out if apprentice OR kit!): ShimmerNight
Looks (description in words, please! 1-3 sentences.): Shimmerpaw is a Black and Graying white She-cat with a Silky coat. Her eyes are Bright green with Bits of Blue sparks.. Her tail is long with black ring like stripes. She is about a foot tall with the length of 1 1/2 feet ..
Crush: Lionpaw
Mate: Nope!
Flaws: Can't swim, Stubborn..and VERY Cocky
Attributes: Great hunter and Fighter, Also very Clever..
History : She was abandoned at Camp, Lynxshadow's long lost little sister...
Other: Llamacorns rule!

There we go! x3

[Bobenna26]

{{- Uhmm...well first of all, Terezi, shimmer isn't a true prefix. And second of all, you have 3 or 4 cats that you don't even rp....are you sure you can take on another one? }