ShineClan [needing members!]

[slurm]

Falconpaw's eyes opened and he saw Forestkit safe again and he felt happy. He choked as thick warm blood filled his mouth and his eyes closed again and his breath was quick and shallow.

[chestnutpelt]

forestpaw screamed in terror."FALCONPAW!"pearlclan could've heard her."DEWHEART!please . help!!!!!"

[slurm]

(Dewheart is at the contest thing, Falconpaw and Forestpaw are in camp. Don't worry though, Forestkit should be worried in the rp but you don't have too, I love their love to much to let him die.)
Falconpaw's eyes opened "It's okay Forestpaw." He meowed a puddle of his blood now beside his head.
(Just so you know the hawk died when Falconpaw landed on it.)

[hedgehog101]

Mistpaw heard the screams and ran over, terror filling her eyes. She had never in her short life heard a cat yowl with such anguish. "What happened?" She yowled, running over

[Timery]

Amberstone was busy stretching for the next compitetion and Fireflame was in a tree lonely.

[chestnutpelt]

(falconpaw saved forestpaw from a hawk and hes hurt)

[slurm]

Falconpaw looked over his shoulder and saw a blurry Mistpaw "Mistpaw?..." he didn't get to finish, he fainted from blood loss.

[hedgehog101]

"No... No! Falconpaw!!! You stupid furball!" Mistpaw saw the blood, it was all she could see. The rest of the world was spinning. She ran back to the medicine cat den, not pausing to get herbs, but grabbing as many cobwebs as she could. She wasn't about to let her brother die.

[slurm]

Dewheart finally made it to camp aand rushed over to Falconpaw "What happened?!" He yowled crouching beside him and touching his nose to the wounds.

[Timery]

The quick impacting steps stopped and settled down by Falconpaw (Hey there, Falconpaw, i know your fainted but you can still see me, im Shinestar.) The starry cat mewed, her green eyes staring at the apprentice and then Forestpaw. [she's only visble to Mistpaw,Dewheart, and Falconpaw.] [and of course fainted cats can still see a starry cat! Can they?]