Dawnclan (Version Three)

[~ Flame ~]

Pinepaw:
I laughed then perked my ears and nipped his ear. "no" I giggled.

Flameclaw:
I crouched down and licked Snowkit then Blazekit.

[raining-pouring]

Russetpaw

The tom's tail twitched as he turned to Snowkit to take in her reply. "Is that so? I'm sure she's just taking a hunting trip in the territory.." He reassured the solid-white kitten, resting his tail on her shoulder with a kind smile. "So, you guys look bored. What should we do?" Russetpaw asked, ears flicking to the side. Suddenly his conversation was interrupted by the entrance of Flameclaw. "Flameclaw!" he called out to the queen, his smile widening. "We were all very worried about you. Glad you're back! Everything alright?" He asked, noting the dull look in her eyes. As he watched Snowkit run up to her mother, a little twinge of pain tugged at his heartstrings. He had never really been able to embrace his family like that, they were all gone now. He pushed those thoughts out of his head and brought back the charming smile he just had.

[bananatakeover]

(she is orange with white paws.)

Snowkit smiled and then went back over to Russetpaw," Russetpaw, do you like being an apprentice?"

[raining-pouring]

{{ oh, sorry. xP }}

Russetpaw

The tom was surprised by the spontatneous question. Sitting down, Russetpaw contemplated the actual answer. "Well, Snowkit, it has it's ups and downs. But training is excellent!" He purred. "The only thing that I completely detest about being an apprentice is having to clean out the elders' moss nests. It's terrible!" He laughed, his tail flicking in amusement. "You'll be an apprentice like me soon, Snowkit. I can't wait until we can go hunting together. I can show you all the best places!"

[bananatakeover]

Snowkit smiled happily, " Do you think you could teach me something?" Her eyes fur of light and her ears flicked happily.

[<Mistybreeze>]

Name: Mistydawn
Discription: a white she-cat with spotted tabby markings. she has a black tipped tail and emerald green eyes.
Gender: female
Rank: young warrior
Mate/Crush: none yet, hoping to
Secret Mate/crush: none yet, hoping to have one in the future
Family: Icemoon (dead) Shadowglare (dead) Hawkflight (alive) Rosekit (dead)
Personality: a nice, cheerful she-cat, kind and loyal,
History: She doesn't really have a history, well, not an Important one, at least not to her.
Other: She is very fast and prefers not to fight.

Name: Hawkflight
Discription: a dark gray tom with light gray tabby stripes. Yellow eyes.
Gender: tom
Rank: young warrior
Mate/Crush: searching
Secret Mate/crush: searching
Family: same as misty's
Personality: a daring, nice, muscular tom. Is very adventurous and loyal, and will protect his clan with his life.
History: Nothing special
Other: prefers to fight, but still thinks before he acts.

Other: "Health" sorry, I read the rules, just forgot to add it...

[raining-pouring]

{{ @Mistybreeze - Just thought I'd let you know, you're missing something. Read the rules! }}

Russetpaw

Russetpaw's eyes lit up with happiness. "Of course I can!" He purred, jumping to his paws. "I can teach you the battle crouch. It's hard to master, but I think you'll catch the hang of it." The tom encouraged her, arranging his paws. "Now, just do what I do," He meowed, placing his forepaws shoulder-width apart and his hind legs a little wider set than his hips. "Keep you shoulders low, and flew those muscles," He instructed.

[bananatakeover]

(accepted, it's fine)

Snowkit did what was instructed and didn't have it perfect, but it was close. She looked up at him," like this?"

Frostcloud sat down with a small vole and began to eat.

[<Mistybreeze>]

{Oops.. Sorry, I read the rules, but forgot to add! It's there now! Thanks! Where should I start?}

[raining-pouring]

Russetpaw

He cocked his head to the side so he could see her form, and noticed a few mistakes. "Here," he meowed, straightening out so he could move over to her. "Lower your shoulders like... this." He meowed, pressing down gently on her upper back. "But otherwise, that's perfect!" He purred.