Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby enigma. » Mon Apr 16, 2012 3:39 am

(Okay! Thanks for showing interst!)
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"A man can only walk the
roads of which his feet will take him.
He cannot ride on the back of
another to follow his."



"If I tell you where I'm going, there
will be no mystery. No one will ask
you the same question, because
you'll be following me."

"Me plus you? That equals two people
standing awkwardly because I'm not
good with people."
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby M e e r k a t » Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:43 am

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|Tessa||Female||Hunter||Loyal|

Name: Tessa
Gender: Female
Rank: Hunter
Desired Rank: Hunter
Age: 3
Breed: Rottweiler

Physical Description: Tessa is a Rottweiler. Her fur is the normal two toned black and brown, brown for her eyebrowns, mouth, cheeks, belly, paws, and the underside of her tail. Shiny would be a great way to describe her coat, it is always kept in pristine condition. Tessa is very bulky, but not with fat; with muscle. She has floppy ears, and her tail is full size. Humans were the only reason for Rottweiler's to have short stubby tails, and Tessa loves her tail. It helps with balance. Tessa has a light pink tongue, and her eyes are a startling golden color.
Personality: A good word to describe Tessa is loyal. She is slow to make friends and to trust other dogs, but once she trusts you, you have her undying loyalty for life. She is very fond of the old human saying "Never leave a man behind" or in this case, never leave a dog behind. Tessa does not anger easily, and can take criticism with ease. She loves a good joke even though she is bad at telling jokes herself.
History: Once a stray, always a stray. Tessa was bred in a puppy mill, and when the place fell to ruins she became a stray. She was only a couple months old at the time, so a majority of her life has been spent on the streets. She learned from the other strays, fighting for her food, and keeping a close watch on her territory. Tessa has no idea who she is related too, and frankly, she does not really care. She is happy just being a hunter, and she has no desire to move up in the ranks.
Crush: //
Mate: //
Kin: *licks history*
Pups: //

Username: NitrousOxide
Nickname: Nitro,Oxy,Ox. Anything but "nit". I'm not a head lice. ._.
Theme Song: Theme. . song?
Other: This is my first fully Literate RP, so anything to help me out would be lovely. . . and I apologize if I am not up to standard for the first few posts. I will get the hang of it!! I promise!!
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby M e e r k a t » Mon Apr 16, 2012 4:44 am

((Okay, epic fail. Just ignore that, I hit submit instead of preview. :P Just finishing up, be a couple minutes.))
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby enigma. » Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:01 am

(That's fine, I'll try and help you along. But after about two weeks if it seems you just can't keep up I might have to ask you too leave.

If you want a few pointers, show what your dog thinks and feels. Relate to her past.

Instead of "Tessa woke up." Turn it into something like, "Tessa slowly blinked open her eyes. Still tired from sleep she yawned softly, mouth stretching open to reveal two rows of her pearly whites. When the yawn completed her jaws snapped shut and she took the chance to glance around."

See the difference? All literate is, is more detail and thought into it. It's basically putting the acutal character into the writing instead of just something a lot of others say.)
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"A man can only walk the
roads of which his feet will take him.
He cannot ride on the back of
another to follow his."



"If I tell you where I'm going, there
will be no mystery. No one will ask
you the same question, because
you'll be following me."

"Me plus you? That equals two people
standing awkwardly because I'm not
good with people."
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby apricity » Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:05 am

{ Is it okay to begin roleplaying now? c: }
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby enigma. » Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:16 am

(Yes, I'm in the middle of doing my openings right now!)
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"A man can only walk the
roads of which his feet will take him.
He cannot ride on the back of
another to follow his."



"If I tell you where I'm going, there
will be no mystery. No one will ask
you the same question, because
you'll be following me."

"Me plus you? That equals two people
standing awkwardly because I'm not
good with people."
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby enigma. » Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:27 am

Latika|Female|Alpha Female

Mood: Agitated
Location: Construction Zone
Tagged: No one
Crush/Mate: Ha!


Latika snarled as she ran along the construction zone. Her eyes hardened into a look of dedication. Every tooth in her mouth showed, the sun glinting off of them. The rabbit on the rock just below her was hopping around furiously. But here it was at a disadvantage. The merle colored fae knew this area perfectly, long ago it had been a hot spot for ambushes against the wolves. Being one of the few dogs who had bravely ventured into the unknown. She remembered the first time they had come out. The wolves had been waiting, crouched behind the giant metal contraptions waiting for the dogs. They hadn't even seen it coming, the group had been hunting a deer when the giant canines leapt from hiding. In no time half the group had been taken out but the pure anger swelling inside them had been enough to scare the others away. Now it was early morning and the mist swirled around like a thick blanket. It made Latika's fur stick to her body.
When the rabbit took one fatal turn there Latika was. Leaping off of the rocky texture of the machine she plummeted down onto the rabbit and sunk her teeth in. The whole scene was no more then a few seconds, from jump to the snap of bone. The body of the brown rabbit hung limp in her jaws it would be a nice morning snack no doubt. The blood ran down her mouth, then to her neck. Staining her grey fur, tinting it red. But it wasn't exactly a bother, besides now she had to get back to the pack. The sun had only just risen and someone would get worried. So, with quick steps she headed back to the pack. Hopping from rock formation to rock formation.



Rocky|Male|Pup

Mood: Happy
Location: Pack Site, the abanoded subway
Tagged: Jester
Crush/Mate: Little young...


Rocky woke up with a loud yawn. His tiny puppy teeth showing behind his golden lips. When he finished with his yawn, both jaws came back together with a small snap. Looking around the pup took note of who was around. It seemed Tessa was still sleeping, Latika was no where around, Jedi was sleeping as was Risk. But he noticed Jester up and smiled, his tail beating the ground. The pup's long fur hadn't quite grown in yet but it would only be another month or so before it did. For now he could enjoy his neat, short fur. He liked it this way, it was easy to keep clean and knowing Latika she hated when it was dirty. Oh well, the dog was like a mother to him. At least when she wasn't mad and he wasn't pulling some ridiclous trick. So jumping up he darted from his box to bound over to Jester. A steady rythm picked up as he bounded over to the adult dog. Rocky was a little clumsy but it wasn't anything that didn't fix itself over time. Reaching Jester the pup jumped onto him with excitment. "Hey Jester! Watcha doin'?" The pup asked, with one slow motion he slid off the older dog onto the ground. That goofy smile of his showed up as he looked up to the dog. He liked Jester, he was easy to get along with and fine with a joke unlike most of the dogs here. He had learned that. With Latika pulling a prank was something that got you killed, she ruled her pack around the central idea of respect. No respect, no mercy.
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"A man can only walk the
roads of which his feet will take him.
He cannot ride on the back of
another to follow his."



"If I tell you where I'm going, there
will be no mystery. No one will ask
you the same question, because
you'll be following me."

"Me plus you? That equals two people
standing awkwardly because I'm not
good with people."
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby M e e r k a t » Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:54 am

:Tessa:
Female|Hunter
Mood: Drowsy
Location: Abandoned Subway
Action: waking up

Tessa felt eyes boring into her while she slept, if only for a moment. Slowly, still groggy from her late night she opened her eyes. She moved, her bones protesting with small cracks and pops as she sat up. Gazing around, she saw the young pup Rocky attempting to talk with Jester. She grinned to herself. Jester was always one for jokes, and she could just imagine the conversation about to take place. Wanting to be a part of some good spirit, she rose to her paws, once again small cracks and pops came from the protesting bones. She was so tired that she realized she must not have moved off her side all night. Her tail curled upwards, along with her back, making an arch. Then she reserved, sliding her massive paws forward, keeping her bum in the air as her front touched the ground. Feeling much more energized, she quietly padded over to Jester and Rocky, not wanting to disturb the rest of the sleeping dogs. If you learned one thing form being in the pack, it was never wake a sleeping dog. Ever. She eventually made her way over to the two dogs, moving with deliberate slowness.
"Good morning" she said, her husky voice just a little too loud.
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby M e e r k a t » Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:55 am

((How is that? :3 ))
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Re: Lost | Stray Dog RP | Literate | Accepting

Postby enigma. » Mon Apr 16, 2012 8:57 am

(That's good!)
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"Me plus you? That equals two people
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