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Brokenwillow:

I grabbed Tanglefur's scruff gently and pulled her with me out of the dark forest and into the Cloudclan camp. I spotted the medicine cat apprentice, Willowpaw. She had been left behind when the others had gone to the river. "Willowpaw! Please help" I picked up Tanglefur in my jaws and dropped her in front of Willowpaw. I then returned to the dark forest to save Thornpaw. I was almost there, I was in front of Thornpaw trying to grab him before Burningleaf hurt him. And suddenly, I fell and everything went black

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{I edited the above message, so if you read it when I first posted it, read it again}

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{have to get off again! sorry!}

[ivyy.]

Wolfstar

He trudged back home with his clanmates, "Lilywhisker, we need to talk. Now."

Rowanscar

She couldn't believe what just happened, "Burningleaf? Burningleaf? Where are you?" She cried out confused, tired, and worried. "Ghostpaw? burningleaf?" She started tearing up. "Please? Anyone?"

Sageleap

I want to claw their throats out! How could they? Those Foxhearts!

[wildcatabc]

{where is Rowansscar right now?}

[ivyy.]

*darkforest!*

[•a rose by any name•]

E M B E R H E A R T
The she-cat snarled as she smelled Brokenwillow. "Get out of here, you're not welcome—oh my StarClan, Tanglefur!" She ran inside the camp and yelled for the first medicine cat she could think of. "WILLOWPAW!"

W I L L O W P A W
Willowpaw turned her head at Emberheart's yowling. She saw an unfamiliar cat, weakened, dragging a heap of fur covered in red, matted fur. She immediately rushed over to help, stopping to get the cobweb supply along the way. Not even waiting to get to the medicine den, Willowpaw began treating Tanglefur, hurriedly working to stop the bleeding. Some wounds were so deep that the apprentice had to apply multiple cobwebs after the first few bled through. She looked up and saw that the other cat had disappeared. Making sure that Tanglefur was stable, she dragged her into the nearly empty camp.

B U R N I N G L E A F
He made a move towards Thornpaw's spiritual form while he was asleep, but paused, looking down. Everything had gone into chaos. We should have killed that warrior and kit when we had the chance, he thought bitterly. He watched as Brokenwillow carried her son's mate back to the CloudClan camp before passing out. "We could have ransomed her, fool!" he screamed. But deep down he sympathized with her actions. Then, he heard his name in the waking world. He woke up to hear his voice being shouted by Rowanscar. Hurt, he stood up and walked over to her. "I'm here, I'm here."

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Brokenwillow:

When I woke, I opened my eyes to blinding light and I was at the border between the dark forest and Starclan. How had I gotten here? Oh no! Thornpaw! I looked up, about to stand up, and saw Brightriver and my kits. "You're going to be okay now" my mate said. I felt the power and strength flowing back into me. "How could you?! That apprentice will die now!" I ran as fast as I could back towards Thornpaw and Burningleaf. I had been on the smaller side of the border near the pool of darkness. I ran across the land bridge and went as fast as I could towards Thornpaw.

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W I L L O W P A W
Willowpaw turned her head at Emberheart's yowling. She saw an unfamiliar cat, weakened, dragging a heap of fur covered in red, matted fur. She immediately rushed over to help, stopping to get the cobweb supply along the way. Not even waiting to get to the medicine den, Willowpaw began treating Tanglefur, hurriedly working to stop the bleeding. Some wounds were so deep that the apprentice had to apply multiple cobwebs after the first few bled through. She looked up and saw that the other cat had collapsed not too far from her. First she made sure that Tanglefur was stable, and then she went to drag the unconscious cat into the nearly-empty camp.

Brokenwillow did not collapse in the camp, she collapsed in the dark forest

[•a rose by any name•]

W I L L O W P A W
Willowpaw turned her head at Emberheart's yowling. She saw an unfamiliar cat, weakened, dragging a heap of fur covered in red, matted fur. She immediately rushed over to help, stopping to get the cobweb supply along the way. Not even waiting to get to the medicine den, Willowpaw began treating Tanglefur, hurriedly working to stop the bleeding. Some wounds were so deep that the apprentice had to apply multiple cobwebs after the first few bled through. She looked up and saw that the other cat had collapsed not too far from her. First she made sure that Tanglefur was stable, and then she went to drag the unconscious cat into the nearly-empty camp.

Brokenwillow did not collapse in the camp, she collapsed in the dark forest

My b, fixed it