1x1 Roleplay Fraus and Tigermeow

[Fraus]

Ok. Is it sad that this is my most literature roleplay? XD)

"I can hear you, you idiot." She muttered, turning around, hearing things like him standing on dead leaves and breaking twigs. She crossed her arms, following the sound. "Were you ever going to tell me about the horrid things you did to me? Like abandoning me and letting me scream?" She asked, her voice quite cold. Gisselle knew what hunting was so she knew he was doing it to her

[Tigme]

And by literate, do you mean one where each post is the longest? This is the second shortest for me, but the others I have are no where near as active as this one.))

Connor paused. He couldn't believe what Gisselle had said. His mind was racing through different things, but now the strange instinctive feeling was gone. At least, for a short while. He now stayed completely still, watching her as she walked. It was hard to believe what she had said, but eventually he changing back into a human, sitting on the ground in the underbrush to keep out of sight, "How long have you known?" His voice sounded upset, as if he didn't know what he was even doing anymore.

[Fraus]

(Yeah, this is the roleplay I have with the longest posts. They're short because I don't have good writing skills! I've tried to make longer ones but the other person usually cuts theirs down to one line so I don't have much to work with)

"The first night but I had my voice taken away. If you want the bracelet, you can have it" Gisselle muttered, dropping the crushed dust of the bracelet on the floor. "Now, stop hunting me. Come out before I make you!" Gisselle snarled, looking in the direction he was sat. Connor wasn't the stealthiest to say the least but at least he was trying. She couldn't decide if it was a good thing as she was the one being hunted. She unfolded her arms and sat on the floor at the opposite side of the bush

[Tigme]

I usually try to match or exceed the other person, no matter what so that's usually what keeps mine long.))

Connor nervously stood up, "How-" He couldn't even speak, he was shocked, "how'd you get them off?" he was finally able to say. He couldn't think of how, not that he's even tried, but even then he couldn't imagine how she turned them to dust like that. He felt scared that Gisselle would hurt him, or that really anything would happen now. In the far distance, he heard the group coming closer, and knew if she truly did want to escape, they'd need to get moving soon.

[Fraus]

(Well its hard since most of my partners go. "He nodded" "She smiled" I try to write as much as I can with what I get)

"Sharp, sharp rocks. Then I smashed them into tiny chunks. Once the magic escaped, they just turn to dust. Now, we've got to get moving as not to be caught!" Gisselle smiled at him somewhat cheerily before she stood up and started to march in the direction she headed before. Connor seemed more anxious than she remembered but didn't really think that the cells would have changed him too much as Gisselle hadn't changed that much, even at all. She could hear the group approaching and wanted to disappear before they had even appeared or spotted the two just sat there, talking

[Tigme]

Well, I write more than that no matter what. Like, I don't always go into depth about their thoughts, but I do things like, "he nodded, and shifted his weight in his seat uncomfortably" I will say, although you do write well, you use larger words, and your sentences are well formed, you might wanna work on your grammar a bit.))

Connor hesitated, "But... what about my own bracelets?" He asked, "And, and..." To be honest, he wasn't entirely sure if he even wanted to leave. Things may have been bad now, but they were finally trusting him, even complimenting him. And the hunt, the chase, he was fascinated by it all. The voices were growing louder, but Connor knew they were still quite far away. Still, though, he hesitated leaving with Gisselle.

[Fraus]

(But I don't like grammar!! My friend is like a grammar cop and picks every out)

"I can break them for you, it doesn't hurt! I promise!" Gisselle could hear the men quickly coming closer and she was hopping from one foot to another where she was stood with urgency. What happened to their friendship? Like the night where they held hands through the bars and when she saved his life a few times. Did he not see that as important now? He'd rather stay with some people who kidnapped him and made him do heavy labour without a choice or getting paid? She just couldn't understand that

[Tigme]

I am too, and I will say, sometimes it is hard to not pick it out. But grammar's even more important than starting rp's! If you have poor grammar, there's a good chance you won't get a good job if you make an improper resume! Same with applications to universities, and tests in schools too! Plus, the oxford comma can stop you from cannibalism.))

Connor had to think for a moment, "Alright," He finally said, "But we should be quick if we wanna get away." He wasn't sure why, but there still seemed to be something that wanted him to stay. He was getting complimented, there was a schedule for things, and even if they were what he was running from, there seemed to be few threats for them, as long as they behaved. But then, there was the hard labor, and the insults when he first started. Even after just a few weeks, Connor had already begun to slouch as his spine felt nearly crushed from carrying so much heavy stuff.

[Fraus]

I have a question. Can you teach me how to use theses :; because I never know when to!)

Gisselle smiled, clapping her hands happily. "Yay! Lets go!" She quickly went a grabbed hold of his hand to take him with her. If they got far enough away, she'd be able to break his chains but with the group so close behind, now wasn't the time. She adjusted het bag slightly before she started to walk, intertwining her fingers with his as it just brought back goodish memories. Gisselle gave a small huff as she tugged at his arm, not wanting to wanting to get caught so earlier. If they weren't on the run before, they definitely were now

[Tigme]

Well, : is a colon, you use it to make a list, or something like this "It could only mean one thing: the chaos was back in town" whileas a semicolon is to combine two related sentences that are too short on their own like this "It was very humid out; it almost felt like we were walking through water" but use them sparsely.))


Connor walked with, or rather, was led by Gisselle as they continued further away from the group. He worried what might happen if they were found now, especially if Gisselle didn't have her bracelets on. He still wanted to go back, but... why? No matter how far away they ran, or how much he tried to point out the bad stuff, he still urged to return with the rest of the group. I have to find some way, he thought, But I don't want the either of us to get hurt yet. He continued to struggle inwards as they traveled further from the group.