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Redfur
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I nodded my head, sad that an enemy cat could be trespassing. I kept looking at the pool of blood. "Well, let's keep going on our patrol. Maybe we will find more evidence," I said, and started walking.

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Nightbreeze

Nightbreeze nodded. He took a quick glance at the area around him. He inhaled some air, then exhaled quickly. He started on padding. He hopped that they wouldn't find anything else. Although finding the fox might be good.

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Redfur
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I kept on padding through the forest, through our part of the forest. I was in front of my patrol, being the deputy and all. I kept looking to my left, and to the left. My head was almost always towards the sky, sniffing the air. I couldn't get another scent of the fox, or enemy cat, anywhere. I looked back at Nightbreeze and Dawnpaw. "Have you guys smelt anything yet? I haven't yet, but maybe you guys have?" I asked them.

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(What is Semi-Literate? Two different people gave me two different definitions. And also what is Literate?)

Nightbreeze

Nightbreeze lifted his nose and inhaled once more. "Crow-food" Nightbreeze said. H glanced around and found a another, half eaten rabbit. It was a big rabbit. And it would have tasted nice and juicy. "But thats it." Nightbreeze said.

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{{ Well usually people think that semi-literate is three to five lines, correct grammar, punctuation and detail. Literate is a few paragraphs, with correct punctuation, grammar, and detail, each post.

Can I be the rouge that is eating all of the food?(: }}

Redfur
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I looked at the crow food, then at the rabbit. The huge and tasty rabbit. My mouth started watering, just looking at it. It was half eaten, though, so it was already starting to rot. I kept padding through the forest, shaking my head. The clan had been starving for awhile now, all of the food was gone. All of the food was rotten. I sniffed the air again, taking a huge inhale in. "I smell something! It.. It's a cat. But an unknown cat. I don't know where it is coming from. It seems to not be a clan cat.." I said to Nightbreeze, turning around to look at him.

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Nightbreeze

Nightbreeze took in the scent. He peered around in the distance, but saw nothing. He became silent and listened to his surrounding. He heard birds chirp and fly away. "I think its on our territory right now." Nightbreeze said. He looked over at Dawnpaw, who had huge eyes and was frightened. She crouched down and kept looking around. Hoping she wouldn't find the Rouge.

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Rouge
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I could tell that there were cats near by. Those pack kind of cats. They are always near here, they should leave. I start walking towards them, stepping on a twig. It cracked, making birds in the trees run away. My one eye was looking around, my one ear was twitching, listening to all of the sounds. My scarred skin was noticeable through the forest. I see the cats. There were three of them. I could tell that one of them was a higher rank than the others. My yellow eye shown through the bush that I was in, I hoped the other cats could see it. I take my white paw out of the bushes, many scars on it. I take out another paw of mine, also white, with some blood on it. It was scarred up, too. I finally completely step out. My white body full of scars, and dried blood.

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Dawnpaw

Dawnpaw saw a cat emerge from the bushes. "Nightbreeze! Redfur!" She screeched. She slowly back away, frightened by the cat, with scars and blood everywhere.

Nightbreeze

Nightbreeze quickly turned as Dawnpaw yelled. He saw the cat, she had many scars. And blood stained fur. He lowered his head and dropped to a crouch.

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Redfur
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As soon as I heard Dawnpaw screech, I look over. There was the cat, and I could tell this was the cat that had been eating our food. I look over at Nightbreeze, while I was crouching. We were both crouching now, I would fight to the death with this cat. It seemed to eat our food, and not care. It seemed strong though, and going through a lot of fights at one. I whispered to Dawnpaw, "Tell Skystar we had found a cat, and to tell her to surround the cat, okay?" I made sure the rouge couldn't hear me at all.

Rouge
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I stared at the cats as they had crouched down. I didn't know what they were doing. Whether they were starting a fight or trying not to start one. I stood where I was, standing tall, even though I was already a tall cat. My muscles were showing through my skin, I was well fed compared to these pack cats. I kept looking at them. First at the tom, then at the she cat. I saw the she cat talk to the young cat. I snarled. I didn't want to talk, but I had no idea what she was trying to do. "Don't move." I growled, my tail flicking in the air with irritation.

{{ I'm sorry. This is interesting to me, so I am writing more xD }}

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(Its fine! I made another character. We only had 1 warrior. Now we have two! I might make more so that Skystar can send out more cats.)

Dawnpaw

Dawnpaw froze. She didn't make even a slight move. Then she Looked up at the other two cats beside her, Trusting them that she will be safe. Then she sprinted off hoping she wouldn't be followed. She ran into camp and scanned around looking for Skystar. "Skystar!" She yelled. She was panicking. This was her first Rouge. She found Skystar and ran over to him. "Skystar! There's a cat! A Rouge! On our Territory! Nightbreeze and Redfur is with it!" She was breathing hard rushing to get everything out.

Skystar

Skystar quickly nodded. He could tell Dawnpaw was panicking. "I will send some cats out. You stay here and help guard the camp." He said. Skystar quickly padded over to Foxblaze. "Go help Nightbreeze and Redfur. They are with a rouge." Skystar said.

Foxblaze

Foxblaze nodded then dashed out of camp. As he ran, he took in the smell, locating Nightbreeze, Redfur, and the Rouge. He could also smell rotting prey. But more then yesterday. This Rouge must be well fed. He spotted Nightbreeze and Redfur, and sniffed the air. There was definitely a rouge there. He continued to run, then stopped. He slowly crawled out of the bush and sat in front of it. He was able to be seen. But not in plain sight. He looked over at Nightbreeze and Redfur waiting patiently. He knew there would probably be a battle.

Nightbreeze

"You are eating our prey." Nightbreeze hissed. He quickly glanced over at Foxblaze, then put his eyes back on the rouge in front of him. It was well fed. And in many battles. And it had scars to prove it. He quickly glanced over at Redfur who was also in a low crouch.