(Nice job!)
I set off at a gallop for Ryneckhsa. Luckily, the place was small, and I soon burst into Utasia. I heard the whinny from far away; I had unusually good hearing. I walked for a few miles and saw Parousia. I darted away into a small, small, clearing. There, the water really looked like it was blue and sparkling in the pond. I noticed very old hoofprints and placed my own hoof in them. It fit perfectly with one, and by the stale scent, I could tell two stallions and a feverish mare had been here. A singled tree stood beside the pond and I leaned against it, looking around more. A small cave just the right size for me and no one else. I stood inside, happy.
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This and
this are the two most beautiful songs in the world. <3)