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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs » Wed Aug 14, 2013 3:42 pm



michelle,
breath.
i promise i am here,
though no one has been.

I try,
but someone,
is always there blocking
me from YOU



michelle looked at autumn, "your not right..."she said, she could tell she would die if she broke another rib, "you-.. you broke another rib... he has a chance, but if another one comes, your dead. you need help!"she said, but who could help. only michelle could, "you and i have to trust me, i need to help you autumn."she said crossly, autumn would die if she broke a few more ribs, as the pain would practicly take over... but how could michelle help.."l-lay down please?"she asked, she would have to try to help, as nothing could stop jack from getting infected, as he would have to do it himself, he was to deep in infection and all they could do was hope, as michelle had helped him.


jack--

Jack woke up, he looked at his wound and shook around, "I can't get up." he said, but he was all there. He was alive, for now. "W-wha?" jack said, hearing what michelle said "I NEED TO HELP!" he said and forced himself up, but falling again, strugling. "NO!" he yelled and got up, the pain hurting him badly. "No autumn." he said and fell once again "please..." he said and collapsed hardly, after trying again. Soon, he would break a rib. All he could do was hope for the best, while he was awake.
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Oɴᴄᴇ I ᴍᴇᴛ ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ.
Iᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀ ʙᴏʏ,
ᴀɴᴅ I ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴋɴᴏᴡ
ᴀ ᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜɪᴍ.

Wᴇ ᴛᴀʟᴋᴇᴅ ғᴏʀ ᴍᴏɴᴛʜs,
ʜᴏᴜʀs ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴅᴀʏ...

Aɴᴅ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ I ᴋɴᴇᴡ...

Tʜᴇ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ ᴡᴀs ɢᴏɴᴇ.
Iᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ ɴᴏᴡ.
❧ Mᴏɴᴛʜs ᴘᴀssᴇᴅ,
❧ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ I ʀᴇᴀʟɪᴢᴇᴅ ɪᴛ,
❧ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏʏ I ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴋɴᴇᴡ ᴀs ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ,
❧ ʜᴀᴅ sᴛᴏʟᴇɴ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ...

❧ Hᴇ ɴᴏᴡ ɪsɴ'ᴛ ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ, ᴏʀ ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ.
❧ Hᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ I ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ʜᴏʟᴅ.
❧ ❧ Fᴏʀᴇᴠᴇʀ.
❧ Hᴇ's ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ I ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ.
❧ ❧ Aʟᴡᴀʏs.
❧ Hᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ ᴡʜᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇs ᴍᴇ sᴍɪʟᴇ.
❧ ❧ Eᴠᴇʀʏ ᴅᴀʏ.
Nᴏᴡ ʜᴇ ɪs ᴍɪɴᴇ
ᴀɴᴅ I ᴀᴍ ʜɪs.
Fɪɴᴀʟʟʏ.
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby HotelBooks » Wed Aug 14, 2013 3:47 pm

Autumn layed down. Glad to have people to care. After all that she did to them, they still cared. She fainted again. This time she remembered the fighting ring. Everyone time she won a fight she was bitter. Her owner tried to pet her and she snapped at him. The Times she broke her ribs she wins always be left in the ring, leaving her ribs to try and heal. Her she life was passing before her eyes. The only thing that kept her going were the encouraging words from her friends. Her only friends.
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs » Wed Aug 14, 2013 3:51 pm


michelle,
breath.
i promise i am here,
though no one has been.

I try,
but someone,
is always there blocking
me from YOU




"oh this is bad... we don't have much time."
she mumbled, she felt around autumn, it felt as if she could feel her broken ribs she gave her a herb that may help heal her rib, she hoped but she couldn't say it would, it would most likely as it had a good chance to work, and a small chance not too.

jack--

"Oh no!" he said, hopefully she will be okay he thought to himself, "I hope it works." he said mumbling to michelle, he was scared but okay. He just hoped for the best

{writers block.}
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Venian Alexandrov Kogen Rodwalski

Oɴᴄᴇ I ᴍᴇᴛ ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ.
Iᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀ ʙᴏʏ,
ᴀɴᴅ I ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴋɴᴏᴡ
ᴀ ᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜɪᴍ.

Wᴇ ᴛᴀʟᴋᴇᴅ ғᴏʀ ᴍᴏɴᴛʜs,
ʜᴏᴜʀs ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴅᴀʏ...

Aɴᴅ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ I ᴋɴᴇᴡ...

Tʜᴇ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ ᴡᴀs ɢᴏɴᴇ.
Iᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ ɴᴏᴡ.
❧ Mᴏɴᴛʜs ᴘᴀssᴇᴅ,
❧ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ I ʀᴇᴀʟɪᴢᴇᴅ ɪᴛ,
❧ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏʏ I ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴋɴᴇᴡ ᴀs ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ,
❧ ʜᴀᴅ sᴛᴏʟᴇɴ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ...

❧ Hᴇ ɴᴏᴡ ɪsɴ'ᴛ ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ, ᴏʀ ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ.
❧ Hᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ I ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ʜᴏʟᴅ.
❧ ❧ Fᴏʀᴇᴠᴇʀ.
❧ Hᴇ's ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ I ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ.
❧ ❧ Aʟᴡᴀʏs.
❧ Hᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ ᴡʜᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇs ᴍᴇ sᴍɪʟᴇ.
❧ ❧ Eᴠᴇʀʏ ᴅᴀʏ.
Nᴏᴡ ʜᴇ ɪs ᴍɪɴᴇ
ᴀɴᴅ I ᴀᴍ ʜɪs.
Fɪɴᴀʟʟʏ.
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby HotelBooks » Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:01 pm

A few hours later Autumn awoke. She found that her friends had stayed. They had not left. She was grateful.Her side's felt much better. She got up and walked over to Jack. She saw he was alive but not well. The infection was not any better. She owed everything to Michelle. She still wondered what happened to him to cause such havoc. They put so much stress on Michelle." Jack...I like you too" She said laying beside him. Glad to be alive.
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby SunsetPatches » Thu Aug 15, 2013 12:13 am

R O S E

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Rose resurfaced from her dream some time later, her mind wearily dragging itself back to sense. She unconsciously still belied that she was still alone, the little pup taking in a cautious breath through her nose to test for any dangers lurking outside her closed lids. There were so many odors to sift through, moss, hay, dog, plus one more - that long-forgotten smell of food. She sniffed, opening her eyes to a blur of colour, and smelled the air again. Definitely meat.
Rose opened her eyes again, properly this time, and with the sight of the barn's inside her memories came rushing back. Her eyes flicked to the doorway of the stall, needing proof besides the sight and sound and smell that her protectors still existed. But Don and Lavender were there, and she sighed in relief.

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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Aug 15, 2013 12:28 am


[ |✖| Male |✖| 3 Years Old. |✖| Pitbull |✖| Fighter |✖| ]
"Tʜᴇ ʟᴀsᴛ ʙᴀᴛᴛʟᴇ ʙᴇᴛᴡᴇᴇɴ ɢᴏᴏᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠɪʟ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʏ ᴏғ Jᴜᴅɢᴍᴇɴᴛ."
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Don smiled at Rose as she woke up. "Back in the land of the living I see?" He said jokingly, and walked over to her, his blue eyes filled with happiness. He sat down beside her and gave her a gentle nuzzle, then nudged the rabbit closer to her. "Eat up, Rosie. Lavender caught this especially for you." It was the first time he had called her by the name 'Rosie' instead of 'Miss Rose'. He realised that, if he and Lavender were to be her adoptive parents, then it would be strange to still call her 'Miss'. He couldn't help but worry about the little puppy's paw though - it seemed to be sprained. But he knew that Lavender had worked her magic, and that her paw would be all better very soon. Perhaps the little family could go for a walk later to explore their new surroundings? As long as he didn't drop dead before that, that is.
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby SunsetPatches » Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:22 am

R O S E

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Rose smiled back at Don sleepily as he walked over to her, and stretched out her stiff limbs. The smile on her face grew wider as Don nuzzled her sofly, and she sighed happily.
Her eyes darted to the rabbit, to Don's concerned blue eyes, and back to the rabbit as Don persuaded her to eat. Thankyou, she woofed softly in Lavender's general direction, before directing her attention back to the rabbit. Rose didn't need any more persuasion, righting herself on three legs and limping over to it. Her stomach growled in anticipation as she dug her teeth into the rabbit, tearing off scraps of meat and chomping it down. She felt a bit bad gorging herself in front of her new friends, but her hunger was too great to ignore anymore. She did see Don's eyes flit down to her paw, just for a second, but her warring instincts of love and hunger directed her attention back to the rabbit. Remembering the fierce colour of his wounds, though, and remembering that terrifying moment when he had collapsed in a pool of blood, Rose looked back at him, and a worried crease appeared between her brows. Are you going to fall down again today? she asked.


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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby Lothlórien » Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:45 am

@GreenTea & Canopy:-:I would just like to remind you that you are not to go over two pages without me. I believe you went 4 pages. And most of your posts were between 60-100 words, the least amount you may have is 130 words. Or if you have bad writers block maybe 100 words. But writers block does not happen in every post or every other post. Also just one more thing for Everyone, I feel like some of us are playing more one on one then as a group. So when it switches to the next day I dare each of you to have your dog add someone to their group or hang out with a different dog.




A N N I E O A K L Y
T H E H U N T E R

Female
3 Years
Mate-Lucky
No Pups
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Annie watched Lucky seeing how he would take her words. Then in the blink of an eye he seemed to return to his goofy self. AT first her heart dipped, but it was nearly impossible to stay sad around goofy Lucky. He chased his tail and then tripped over her. She giggled unable to hide her laughter to much. She noticed he landed on his wounded shoulder though. Then in another blink of an eye he was Lucky again, the real Lucky. She smiled at him and licked his cheek before getting up. "It's fine Lucky, I love everything about you, even your different personalities." She watched him sensing his worry, and she added. "After all I did first fall in love with that goofy side of yours." She looked at his shoulder, she knew she had seen him wince. "I should get you something for the pain. Perhaps we could take a little walk to look for some herbs?" She smiled again at the thought of a romantic walk with Lucky. Not that looking for herbs was romantic, but it could be, depending on how you thought about it. As long as Chico and Goofy Lucky stayed put she would be able to spend time with the Lucky that she truly loved with all of her heart. As far as she was concerned she would never be able to get enough of Lucky. Perhaps they could even start trying to figure out where the pack had gone, maybe they were all closer then they thought.



R E M I N G T O N
T H E H U N T E R

Male
4 1/2 Years
Mate-Story
No Pups
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Remi once again moved closer to his mate and laid his head on her shoulder/neck. "I suppose, I just don't want to be the one who lead everyone here just to get captured or something." He let outa slow breath and then smiled a little. "Ah, look at me. Here I am with the most beautiful fae in the world, and I am worrying over nothing." He placed his paw on top of hers and touched his nose to her cheek on a sort of kiss. "You know Story, I am rather glad that Blaze is around. If she weren't you might have ended up liking Maverick more as he would have had more time to spend with you. Maybe that sounds rude, or selfish. But I think from the moment I met you I knew my life wouldn't be complete without you in it." He closed his eyes just a little keeping his head near hers and his paws on hers. "I really do love you Story." He said the words with all the love in his heart. He knew he loved her for more then her outside beauty, but also for the beauty that was on the inside. Her personality and her quick thinking. In his eyes she was perfect.


C H E C K E R S
T H E F I G H T E R

Male
4 Years
Single
Small Crush On Finn
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Checkers looked outside as he waited for Finn to respond to what he had said. He honestly didn't expect her to want him around all the time. And that could be a problem as he was thinking something inside him was growing to like her more and more. At the sound of her voice he brought his gaze back to hers. He looked at her as if unable to believe her words. She didn't mind? She would like that? Was she just saying the words or were they true? She looked down at her paws after saying the words and Checkers worried that they were not true. He took a breath and then let it out slow. Why did it matter if Finn liked him or not? He had never cared about what anyone thought of him, so why now? Besides if he was starting to get feelings for her she would never like him that way. He was just a mean looking brute who's personality could be just as mean. He had a rough past and was more of a loner then a pack member. He would probably end up leaving anyway. Then Finn spoke again, asking him what he wanted to do. He got a small smile on his face. They had talked about hunting before, but he was more of a fighter and didn't hunt much. Normally he didn't like fae's, but Finn was different, she had something about her that in a way reminded him of himself. She felt unwanted, alone and sometimes he was sure she felt worthless just like he did. He got up from laying down and watched her with a tilted head. "Well, we could got hunting like we planned." He said. "Or" He continued, moving closer to her. "We could go for a little swim." He finished as he came to stand by her side. Something about being close to her made his heart beat fast and made him feel the need to keep her safe. Of course there were parts of his brain telling him getting close was a bad idea. Right now his heart was winning. "That is, if you like swimming." Checkers had often gone swimming to clear his head and to gets his thoughts right. But if Finn didn't like the water he would have to think of something else.



M A V E R I C K
T H E L E A D E R

Male
5 Years
Single
Crush On Blaze
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Maverick fallowed at Blaze's side his fur brushing hers just slightly. He liked being around her and they had a lot on common. They both had the same amount of siblings. They both loved walking and climbing up mountains and they both enjoyed each others company. They came to the river and Maverick stopped by Blaze. Did Blaze really like him they way she said? Or after getting to know him did she think that they wouldn't be good together? He pushed the thoughts away. He knew he couldn't wait another moment. "Blaze? Can I ask you something?" He watched her and suddenly felt nervous. So he looked at the water as it flowed downstream. He took a deep breath and hoped he wouldn't mess this up. He was not the greatest with words. But he would try his best. He looked at her again willing his nerves to stop being so jumpy.
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby Bolt1784 » Thu Aug 15, 2013 1:56 am

(( yes, i was thinking the same thing, that the dogs are interacting with only a few others. c; i have an idea of what we could all do, but i'm not sure if everyone would want to be involved or not?? ))



[ |✖| Male |✖| 3 Years Old. |✖| Pitbull |✖| Fighter |✖| ]
"Tʜᴇ ʟᴀsᴛ ʙᴀᴛᴛʟᴇ ʙᴇᴛᴡᴇᴇɴ ɢᴏᴏᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠɪʟ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʏ ᴏғ Jᴜᴅɢᴍᴇɴᴛ."
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Don watched Rose eat, but his gaze was not judgemental or criticising. He always ate in a careless way himself, so it just made him feel all the more eager to adopt Rose with Lavender. He had zoned out a little at the thought of puppies again, but Rose brought him back to alertness when she spoke to him. With a kind and warm smile, he lowered his head to her a little as she spoke so that he could hear better - his hearing was not very good, and he could turn deaf one day. It was due to his rare solid white colouring - many solid white dogs with blue eyes end up deaf at some point in their lives. But he tuned in to her little, nervous voice easily. His smile faded at her question, and he wore a look of concern - he couldn't promise anything in his line of work. But he didn't want to make her worry, and for her sake, he would try not to be injured so badly next time a bad situation arose. Considering his words carefully, he softly replied to her, "i'm going to try my hardest not to. But I can't make any promises, Rose. I'm a fighter. It's my duty to protect everyone. I'll end up hurt sometimes, but that's the way it is for me. I hope you understand."
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Re: Full!!-The Determined V2 Semi-Lit-No Longer Accepting!!

Postby royalty. » Thu Aug 15, 2013 7:30 am

Fɪʀsᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ɪɢɴᴏʀᴇ ʏᴏᴜ,
ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʟᴀᴜɢʜ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ,
ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇʏ ғɪɢʜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ,
̲ᴛ̲ʜ̲ᴇ̲ɴ̲ ̲ʏ̲ᴏ̲ᴜ̲ ̲ᴡ̲ɪ̲ɴ̲.̲

BLAZE
"the fighter"

              blaze was sitting down when maverick came. she blushed ever time when they were walking and their fur brushed together. blaze looked at maverick as he spoke. "of course, maverick, you can tell me anything." she woofed with a friendly smile. "i'll always be by your side, no matter what." she smiled and licked his nose, smiling bigger. she wondered what he would ask her. there would be so many questions. blaze smield as she waited for the question.

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