Ｔｈｅ Ｄｅｔｅｒｍｉｎｅｄ Ｖ3 Ｓｅｍｉ-Ｌｉｔ-Closed

[HotelBooks]

Autumn looked at Jack and grinned. Not wanting to tell she started laughing, only to cover her sadness from their talk. "We just talked. Nothing special."
(Writers block, sorry)

[Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs]

ｍｉｃｈｅｌｌｅ,
ｂｒｅａｔｈ.
ｉ ｐｒｏｍｉｓｅ ｉ ａｍ ｈｅｒｅ,
ｔｈｏｕｇｈ ｎｏ ｏｎｅ ｈａｓ ｂｅｅｎ.

Ｉ ｔｒｙ,
ｂｕｔ ｓｏｍｅｏｎｅ,
ｉｓ ａｌｗａｙｓ ｔｈｅｒｅ ｂｌｏｃｋｉｎｇ
ｍｅ ｆｒｏｍ ＹＯＵ

"you think i'm dumb don't you?"she said, when someone did what autumn did, they were hiding something. just like everyone did. "i can tell when someone is keeping a secret."she sighed, "i thought... friends were different.."she said sadly, and growled a bit "just... go away!"she said and ran out of the small cave, she layed in the woods, "i can tell!"she said sadly, she could tell. as many did that too her, "i.. i.. thought... they were different." she mumbled sadly.

jack--

Jack was puzzled, he hadn't said anything. "Michelle!" he said, "Why... did you hide it?" he said, nicely, not madly, he just wanted to know why, "Shes really mad." he said, "We should go to her!" he said and sighed, he would have kept it, but he wouldn't have... he couldn't decide at all.. he sighed and looked at Autumn, not mad, but not excited. He looked over to where Michelle's tracks were and looked at her small paw tracks.

[Quitting1015]

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Story-


The blue merle sighed, and looked to him. "I hope so Remi. I mean, they are at least 4 hours away in the city, The threat here is pretty much only the animals." She said. She licked his cheek, and stood. the trough was pretty much her favorite, So she flipped it over, And laid down.

[HotelBooks]

Autumn looked away. She did it again. How did she hurt everyone. If she did not kill them she hurt them emotionally. She chased after Michelle. Even though there was excruciating pain in her ribs, she still ran looking for Michelle. She found her crying." Michelle, I am going to tell you everything. When I was born my parents outcast me. They did not like me. I was not a fighter like my siblings. They hated me. I loved them with all my heart. When they were both put in a fighting ring along with my brothers and sisters, watching them all torn to shreds one by one.....watching them all die. It hurt me. I was then put in the ring. I fought out of anger. I killed many dogs. I did not want to hurt you, but it hurts me to tell. Everyday I worry....I worry about being captured and put back in the ring....I hate killing, and fighting. I hate violence." Autumn said. She was once again crying, but she stopped. Hoping for forgiveness.

[Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs]

jack--

"Dad.." he said quietly to himself, "I tried hard. They all leave, I'm sorry." he said, and went away, he would end up leaving the loners. He walked far, and hid in the forest, "I tried... but they all run away, they just won't listen to me!" he said angrily, and tore the tree with his paw, he whimpered quietly, as blood dripped down his paw as he bled, harshly. His paw seemed to be cut open. He just, wasn't right. He wished he was with his dad, he would never make it, "I thought Autumn... was different, I thought we had a bond." he said quietly.

ｍｉｃｈｅｌｌｅ,
ｂｒｅａｔｈ.
ｉ ｐｒｏｍｉｓｅ ｉ ａｍ ｈｅｒｅ,
ｔｈｏｕｇｈ ｎｏ ｏｎｅ ｈａｓ ｂｅｅｎ.

Ｉ ｔｒｙ,
ｂｕｔ ｓｏｍｅｏｎｅ,
ｉｓ ａｌｗａｙｓ ｔｈｅｒｅ ｂｌｏｃｋｉｎｇ
ｍｅ ｆｒｏｍ ＹＯＵ

"wow.. i'm sorry. you didn't have to tell me."she said, now she was going to tell autumn her story, "my life was worse... i think.. i was abused by my owner, i still have some of the scars today probably, he abused me and my siblings. i was most though, he hated runts, and i was the runt. he kicked me into the wall once, and made a dent. slapped me, and much more. he would send me outside when my parents were gone, and make me hunt until i found something, if not he wouldn't let me in. i had barley opened my eyes when this happened, i then, got a mate. we had pups and they all died in a fire."she moaned, and started crying.

[HotelBooks]

Autumn felt sorry for Michelle. She never knew. She was glad she was so close they could share this with each other. She remembered Jack. She just left. He will probably never forgive her." I am so sorry to hear that. I feel bad I really do, but I left him. I left Jack. I really must leave." Autumn ran off. She followed his tracks. She hurting very bad, but still she ran. How did she always manage to hurt someone? She found him. She found him and blood. Lots of blood. What did she do now?" Jack?" She ran over to him now all she lived off of was adrenaline. "I just wanted to make things right with Michelle. Please, I am sorry. I..I thought you would understand." She licked him then fainted. She had broken another rib.

[Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs]

jack--

Jack screeched, he couldn't get up. He was hurt also, "MICHELLE!" he screamed, he felt the other side of the world could here him. "MICHELLE!" michelle, probably couldn't hear him, his heart pounded. He got up and screeched, "Autumn!" he said, he got up and found something that might help, he fed it to her barley, and fell. Blood came out of his paw, where he was hurt himself even more, "Autu-" he said, and blacked out. He felt like he was dreaming, he was dead... but Autumn made it, that's all he wanted.

ｍｉｃｈｅｌｌｅ,
ｂｒｅａｔｈ.
ｉ ｐｒｏｍｉｓｅ ｉ ａｍ ｈｅｒｅ,
ｔｈｏｕｇｈ ｎｏ ｏｎｅ ｈａｓ ｂｅｅｎ.

Ｉ ｔｒｙ,
ｂｕｔ ｓｏｍｅｏｎｅ,
ｉｓ ａｌｗａｙｓ ｔｈｅｒｅ ｂｌｏｃｋｉｎｇ
ｍｅ ｆｒｏｍ ＹＯＵ

michelle struggled, "go... then."she said angrily, anger glistening in her eyes, jack was there first, but she just.. needed someone, wha.... what was that noise, it must be nothing. michelle thought... it sounded... like her name, but she couldn't recall it, "weird." michelle mumbled, though she sensed something was happening she couldn't tell. she sighed and looked around tiredly.

[HotelBooks]

(Did he really die.)
Autumn knew she had to wake up. Even though her pain was still horrible she stood. She looked at Jack. He, he was gone. She killed someone else. She could not bear this any longer. She killed someone she loved. Abe hurt her dearest friend. What else could happen to her."Michelle, it is Jack! Please help! He needs you. Do it for him! Please." She called. Every breath, slowly killing her with pain. She could not die, not now. She found some moss, and placed it on the brute's bleeding wound." Jack, I wish I could take your place." She said crying. Hoping Michelle would come.

[Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs]

jack--

{I don't know yet.}

"S-stop." he whispered, "Save yourself." he said, slowly, "not me." he said, he didn't know if he was going to die or not. He only wanted Autumn safe. He couldn't die of blood, his paw had been cut there before, it was probably infected. He looked up, "Autumn... I can't die without saying this, if I do." he said quietly, "Autumn..." he said, and stopped closing his eyes tightly, "I..." he said, 'don't say it.' -- 'say it!' his thoughts told him.. "Like you." he said and blacked out. Was he dead? Or was he still.. alive? If dead, the infection had to be bad so very bad.

ｍｉｃｈｅｌｌｅ,
ｂｒｅａｔｈ.
ｉ ｐｒｏｍｉｓｅ ｉ ａｍ ｈｅｒｅ,
ｔｈｏｕｇｈ ｎｏ ｏｎｅ ｈａｓ ｂｅｅｎ.

Ｉ ｔｒｙ,
ｂｕｔ ｓｏｍｅｏｎｅ,
ｉｓ ａｌｗａｙｓ ｔｈｅｒｅ ｂｌｏｃｋｉｎｇ
ｍｅ ｆｒｏｍ ＹＯＵ

michelle screeched when she saw her friend, she heard what he said and smiled "no jack!" she said and cried, she ran around gettings herbs, "don't die my friend!"she said loudly, and sobbed "oh autumn, what do we do?"she said worried, she ran around, paced back and forth, "why.."she said and cried. 'don't go!' she said in her thoughts, she wanted him as a friend badly, very bad. autumn too, "what do we do?"she said sobbing loudly, 'don't go' she thought, 'please' she added.

[HotelBooks]

Autumn was still crying. She was having a mental breakdown. Nothing mattered, but helping Michelle help Jack. He was the one thing she loved. He knew how she felt. He would have to kill her first before he died." Jack, please . I need you as much as you need us right now." She had to stop. Her pain would kill her before anything else. "Michelle, thank you so much. I...I don't know what happened. I got here and he was o the ground. "