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I had a little bit of writers block! }}

❖ F I N N

➣ 2 + 1/2 || ➣ Female || ➣ Happy
➣ Checkers ➣ Crush- Checkers

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ＡＲＥ ＵＮＴＩＬ ＢＥＩＮＧ ＳＴＲＯＮＧ ＩＳ ＴＨＥ
ＯＮＬＹ ＣＨＯＩＣＥ ＹＯＵ ＨＡＶＥ.

➣ Word count;; 294

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-- She waited patiently for his answer not really caring that she had to wait a little while before he spoke again. She liked to just watch him and look at how he amazing his fur looked as it shone in the light of the early afternoon." That sounds great.." She managed to let escape her lips as she turned around in the tall green grass and began to walk around the edge of the barn, the old dusty red colored paint was pealing off of the side of the barn and falling onto the soft grass beneath it. Finn trotted with a bright smile to Checkers side and then stood next to him waiting for him to lead to way to the small pound and little stream. She couldn't wait to spend more time with the brute and have fun down by the water. Maybe they would be able to talk a little and get to know each other better then they did, she had only known him for a little while and thought this would be a good time for them to get to know him better then she did already. Even though she didn't know I thing about his history besides that he was a loner before and not in a pack she liked him a lot and hoped he felt the same way, but why would he? She still stood close to his side pushing a little as she just realized her lie merle coat was brushing up again at his. She looked away from him and down sheepishly at his paws. Great now he'll now you like him! Why'd you blush? You shouldn't have! She yelled at herself in her head as her icy blue eyes studied her white paws.
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Autumn to Jack
She was unsure, but let her guard down. She stepped closer and listened to his words. Playing them over and over again in her head. She tried to decipher them. She felt embarrassed when she finally got it. 'He loves me'. She did not understand this. She thought no one loved her. Then again she grew up that way. She then looked down and saw him drawing something. 'What could it be?' She thought to herself. Then seeing the shape after he was done it was a heart. She looked at Jack for awhile. Then replayed his words again. She smiled a little. "I like you to Jack. I love you, do you love me?" She layed down. Finally ready to sleep. He could answer her in the morning.

[royalty.]

Sorry I wasn't on a lot yesterday. My computer was acting up, and it was acting up this morning. I believe it is alright now though. Just had to restart it .))

A N N I E O A K L Y
T H E H U N T E R

Female
3 Years
Mate-Lucky
No Pups
Words Typed In This Post:-256

Annie watched Lucky seeing how he would take her words. Then in the blink of an eye he seemed to return to his goofy self. AT first her heart dipped, but it was nearly impossible to stay sad around goofy Lucky. He chased his tail and then tripped over her. She giggled unable to hide her laughter to much. She noticed he landed on his wounded shoulder though. Then in another blink of an eye he was Lucky again, the real Lucky. She smiled at him and licked his cheek before getting up. "It's fine Lucky, I love everything about you, even your different personalities." She watched him sensing his worry, and she added. "After all I did first fall in love with that goofy side of yours." She looked at his shoulder, she knew she had seen him wince. "I should get you something for the pain. Perhaps we could take a little walk to look for some herbs?" She smiled again at the thought of a romantic walk with Lucky. Not that looking for herbs was romantic, but it could be, depending on how you thought about it. As long as Chico and Goofy Lucky stayed put she would be able to spend time with the Lucky that she truly loved with all of her heart. As far as she was concerned she would never be able to get enough of Lucky. Perhaps they could even start trying to figure out where the pack had gone, maybe they were all closer then they thought.

R E M I N G T O N
T H E H U N T E R

Male
4 1/2 Years
Mate-Story
No Pups
Words Typed In The Post:-201

Remi watched Story and smiled again. Then she asked about puppies. He couldn't look away from her, and he defiantly had thought about puppies once or twice. Who wouldn't once they found a mate? He nodded. "Yes, I guess I have thought about having pups once or twice." He looked at his paws then at Story again. "I'm guess this means you have thought about having them as well?" He had to admit he liked the idea of having pups with Story. He just wanted to be ready, he wanted to be the best father he could be. But he realized in that moment that he would be ready for pups. He loved Story and would start a family with her whenever she wanted. In his mind nothing was to soon. If you loved each other so much that you wanted a family right away what was wrong with that? He smiled as he thought about a little fae pup just like Story, herding everything in site, a sweet personality with a bit of spice added every now and then. He almost laughed as he pictured a male pup like him. They would have their paws full that was for sure.

C H E C K E R S
T H E F I G H T E R

Male
4 Years
Single
Small Crush On Finn
Words Typed In This Post:-425

He smiled as he thought about going swimming with Finn, making her laugh and smile as he splashed her. About how she would look when they were done swimming and she would sit in a sunny patch to dry. She would look pretty with the sun dancing on her fur and making her eyes sparkle. He bet she looked even prettier in the moonlight, her blue merle coat probably looked like silver, her eyes probably looked like icy crystals. The image took his breath away, somehow he wanted to test that theory and see if it proved true. But that would have to wait for another time. So distracted by the image he had painted of Finn he almost didn't hear her. Thankfully her words reached his ears or else he would have been forced to ask what she had said. Not exactly the most gentlemen like thing to do. Not that he ever cared about being a gentlemen these days. Still Finn seemed to bring out that part of him that had been hidden for over 2 years. He watched her a moment longer before answering savoring the image of her sparkling fur one last time before pushing it away. He thought about some places, he hadn't been in the area to much, though when he was a loner he remembered passing by this spot a few times. There was a rather nice little pond that turned into a slow moving stream. It was pretty and quite and the perfect place for a swim. He fallowed her out into the sunshine. It was probably early evening, it would not be dark for a few more hours. That left plenty of time for swimming and talking. He realized he didn't know much about Finn, not that he needed to know a lot about her. But he supposed normal dogs talked about each others pasts and things of the sort. Perhaps they could do that, somehow he thought talking to Finn about his past would be easy. There was something about her that put him at ease and made him feel like he could trust someone again. It was nice. As he came to stand by her he spoke. "I know a spot, it's not to far. It is sort of like a pond that leads to a little stream. I think it will work very well for swimming." He started toward it heading around the back of the barn to a small trail. He stopped as he waited for Finn, making sure she was coming.

M A V E R I C K
T H E L E A D E R

Male
5 Years
Single
Crush On Blaze
Words Typed In This Post:-199

Maverick looked at Blaze, as he did he got more nervous. But she spoke and her voice clamed him. He looked into her eyes and smiled again, the nervous feeling vanishing to a feeling on love. He loved Blaze, it was the first time he had admitted it and he felt glad that he had. He took a deep breath then let it out slowly. "Blaze, I have enjoyed getting to know you. We love so many of the same things. We are both stubborn and strong. I love how when you fight for something you give it your all. You are never scared to do what's right and I admire you for that." He paused a moment and touch his nose to hers for just a moment. "What I am trying to say Blaze is I love you, and I want you to be my mate. I want to be with you always, I want to protect you." He smiled a little. "Even if you think you don't nee protecting. I want to have a family with you and I want to spend the rest of my days making you smile. So will you be my mate Blaze?"

Fɪʀsᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ɪɢɴᴏʀᴇ ʏᴏᴜ,
ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʟᴀᴜɢʜ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ,
ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇʏ ғɪɢʜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ,
̲ᴛ̲ʜ̲ᴇ̲ɴ̲ ̲ʏ̲ᴏ̲ᴜ̲ ̲ᴡ̲ɪ̲ɴ̲.̲

ＢＬＡＺＥ
"ｔｈｅ ｆｉｇｈｔｅｒ"

blaze smiled as he began speaking., her smile vanished more and more when maverick was speaking. at the end of his words, his beautiful beautiful words and when he touched his nose against hers, blaze smiled, the biggest and prettiest she has ever done to a brute. tears started to fall from her eyes as she said the one word she now loved more than anything else in the world. "YES!" she barked. tears streamed from her eyes. blaze touched her nose against maverick's, then released and wrapped her neck around his, resting her chin on his neck, too. "i love you so much, maverick. ever since i joined the pack, i never thoguht i would find a brute this amazing. it was never for your rank, no. your so handosme, and your personality, it matches mine." she giggled, then continued. "were stubborn, protective and loyal, kind and everything. maverick, when we went on that amazing walk, and we had all those things in common, i was just, like, io could not believe it. i went to my sleeping spot that night and dreamt for so long, until late in the morning, of us, with an amazinglife and great pups." she licked his nose and smiled bigger. even her cheeks were hurting on how much she was smiling! "maverick, i never knew you had feelings for me, i always felt like i had a hopeless crush on someone i had no chance with, but don cheered me up, so i asked you on the hike. i thought you liked bandit, si to be kind i invited her. but remington was there too, and if us three left and left rem behind he would be sad, so i invited you three. but when you couldn't come i was sad and thought you'd stay with bandit instead, but i was happy when you wanted to go on a hike again. and now, the fact that you asked me to mate you, i felt so happy! really really really really happy. i also want to have a family with you, i want to spend the rest of my days with you, and maybe some pups, and much more." she paused, then finally said. "maverick, i love you so much." she finished and touched noses with him. ---

[royalty.]

Sorry I wasn't on a lot yesterday. My computer was acting up, and it was acting up this morning. I believe it is alright now though. Just had to restart it .))

A N N I E O A K L Y
T H E H U N T E R

Female
3 Years
Mate-Lucky
No Pups
Words Typed In This Post:-256

Annie watched Lucky seeing how he would take her words. Then in the blink of an eye he seemed to return to his goofy self. AT first her heart dipped, but it was nearly impossible to stay sad around goofy Lucky. He chased his tail and then tripped over her. She giggled unable to hide her laughter to much. She noticed he landed on his wounded shoulder though. Then in another blink of an eye he was Lucky again, the real Lucky. She smiled at him and licked his cheek before getting up. "It's fine Lucky, I love everything about you, even your different personalities." She watched him sensing his worry, and she added. "After all I did first fall in love with that goofy side of yours." She looked at his shoulder, she knew she had seen him wince. "I should get you something for the pain. Perhaps we could take a little walk to look for some herbs?" She smiled again at the thought of a romantic walk with Lucky. Not that looking for herbs was romantic, but it could be, depending on how you thought about it. As long as Chico and Goofy Lucky stayed put she would be able to spend time with the Lucky that she truly loved with all of her heart. As far as she was concerned she would never be able to get enough of Lucky. Perhaps they could even start trying to figure out where the pack had gone, maybe they were all closer then they thought.

R E M I N G T O N
T H E H U N T E R

Male
4 1/2 Years
Mate-Story
No Pups
Words Typed In The Post:-201

Remi watched Story and smiled again. Then she asked about puppies. He couldn't look away from her, and he defiantly had thought about puppies once or twice. Who wouldn't once they found a mate? He nodded. "Yes, I guess I have thought about having pups once or twice." He looked at his paws then at Story again. "I'm guess this means you have thought about having them as well?" He had to admit he liked the idea of having pups with Story. He just wanted to be ready, he wanted to be the best father he could be. But he realized in that moment that he would be ready for pups. He loved Story and would start a family with her whenever she wanted. In his mind nothing was to soon. If you loved each other so much that you wanted a family right away what was wrong with that? He smiled as he thought about a little fae pup just like Story, herding everything in site, a sweet personality with a bit of spice added every now and then. He almost laughed as he pictured a male pup like him. They would have their paws full that was for sure.

C H E C K E R S
T H E F I G H T E R

Male
4 Years
Single
Small Crush On Finn
Words Typed In This Post:-425

He smiled as he thought about going swimming with Finn, making her laugh and smile as he splashed her. About how she would look when they were done swimming and she would sit in a sunny patch to dry. She would look pretty with the sun dancing on her fur and making her eyes sparkle. He bet she looked even prettier in the moonlight, her blue merle coat probably looked like silver, her eyes probably looked like icy crystals. The image took his breath away, somehow he wanted to test that theory and see if it proved true. But that would have to wait for another time. So distracted by the image he had painted of Finn he almost didn't hear her. Thankfully her words reached his ears or else he would have been forced to ask what she had said. Not exactly the most gentlemen like thing to do. Not that he ever cared about being a gentlemen these days. Still Finn seemed to bring out that part of him that had been hidden for over 2 years. He watched her a moment longer before answering savoring the image of her sparkling fur one last time before pushing it away. He thought about some places, he hadn't been in the area to much, though when he was a loner he remembered passing by this spot a few times. There was a rather nice little pond that turned into a slow moving stream. It was pretty and quite and the perfect place for a swim. He fallowed her out into the sunshine. It was probably early evening, it would not be dark for a few more hours. That left plenty of time for swimming and talking. He realized he didn't know much about Finn, not that he needed to know a lot about her. But he supposed normal dogs talked about each others pasts and things of the sort. Perhaps they could do that, somehow he thought talking to Finn about his past would be easy. There was something about her that put him at ease and made him feel like he could trust someone again. It was nice. As he came to stand by her he spoke. "I know a spot, it's not to far. It is sort of like a pond that leads to a little stream. I think it will work very well for swimming." He started toward it heading around the back of the barn to a small trail. He stopped as he waited for Finn, making sure she was coming.

M A V E R I C K
T H E L E A D E R

Male
5 Years
Single
Crush On Blaze
Words Typed In This Post:-199

Maverick looked at Blaze, as he did he got more nervous. But she spoke and her voice clamed him. He looked into her eyes and smiled again, the nervous feeling vanishing to a feeling on love. He loved Blaze, it was the first time he had admitted it and he felt glad that he had. He took a deep breath then let it out slowly. "Blaze, I have enjoyed getting to know you. We love so many of the same things. We are both stubborn and strong. I love how when you fight for something you give it your all. You are never scared to do what's right and I admire you for that." He paused a moment and touch his nose to hers for just a moment. "What I am trying to say Blaze is I love you, and I want you to be my mate. I want to be with you always, I want to protect you." He smiled a little. "Even if you think you don't nee protecting. I want to have a family with you and I want to spend the rest of my days making you smile. So will you be my mate Blaze?"

Fɪʀsᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ɪɢɴᴏʀᴇ ʏᴏᴜ,
ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʟᴀᴜɢʜ ᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ,
ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴛʜᴇʏ ғɪɢʜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ,
̲ᴛ̲ʜ̲ᴇ̲ɴ̲ ̲ʏ̲ᴏ̲ᴜ̲ ̲ᴡ̲ɪ̲ɴ̲.̲

ＢＬＡＺＥ
"ｔｈｅ ｆｉｇｈｔｅｒ"

blaze smiled as he began speaking., her smile vanished more and more when maverick was speaking. at the end of his words, his beautiful beautiful words and when he touched his nose against hers, blaze smiled, the biggest and prettiest she has ever done to a brute. tears started to fall from her eyes as she said the one word she now loved more than anything else in the world. "YES!" she barked. tears streamed from her eyes. blaze touched her nose against maverick's, then released and wrapped her neck around his, resting her chin on his neck, too. "i love you so much, maverick. ever since i joined the pack, i never thoguht i would find a brute this amazing. it was never for your rank, no. your so handosme, and your personality, it matches mine." she giggled, then continued. "were stubborn, protective and loyal, kind and everything. maverick, when we went on that amazing walk, and we had all those things in common, i was just, like, io could not believe it. i went to my sleeping spot that night and dreamt for so long, until late in the morning, of us, with an amazinglife and great pups." she licked his nose and smiled bigger. even her cheeks were hurting on how much she was smiling! "maverick, i never knew you had feelings for me, i always felt like i had a hopeless crush on someone i had no chance with, but don cheered me up, so i asked you on the hike. i thought you liked bandit, si to be kind i invited her. but remington was there too, and if us three left and left rem behind he would be sad, so i invited you three. but when you couldn't come i was sad and thought you'd stay with bandit instead, but i was happy when you wanted to go on a hike again. and now, the fact that you asked me to mate you, i felt so happy! really really really really happy. i also want to have a family with you, i want to spend the rest of my days with you, and maybe some pups, and much more." she paused, then finally said. "maverick, i love you so much." she finished and touched noses with him. ---

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The blue merle smiled. She licked his cheek and turned to her back. "I have thought about it before... And wanted to know if you wanted some..." She asked. Her blue eyes sparkeled with interest, wanting to know what he thought. She stood up, walking around to readjust her postion. Story was happy here, but really no longer liked most, such as Blaze. her blue eyes turned as she hears giggling. Probably Maverick and Black themselves. She rolled her eyes, and laid back down in front of Her mate.

[Bolt1784]

(( Awh, yay, Blaze and Maverick are finally together! <3 See, my Donners was right, Blaze. c;< ))

[royalty.]

blaze thanks you for your support, donny! i'm really happy they are together. its so amazing! c: ]

[Bolt1784]

(( and blaze didn't believe donny haha <3 ))

[royalty.]

sorry for spam, but i love this pic! ]

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