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[Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs]

jack--


"don't be scared!" he said, he wasn't going to hurt her, "i have feelings for you, that i have never felt before." he admitted, he looked up at her, and tried to smile, "it's just one of my bad days, we all have them." he said, and smiled, "i can't tell you how i feel, it is hard to explain." he said and looked back up at her, and then down again. he made a mark in the sand, it looked like a heart, or an apple, he loved doodling with his claws on the sand, he was happy... but sad at the same time he sighed, and tried to be happy. he liked autumn, and he wanted to be happy because he was with her, but he was in a really bad mood, he couldn't explain why it was like a 'jack' mood, that he got a lot he sighed once again and looked up, "im sorry. i just don't feel so good." he said quietly, and tried his best to smile to her, as he wished to enjoy this night. Hopefully he would.

[HotelBooks]

(I will post tomorrow, i have to think about my post.)

[kuromi.]

will post tommorow maybe. it will e my momma's birthday tomorrow and i have highschool and band practice c:

[SunsetPatches]

((I got the weird 404 for a bit GreenTea, I think I just took the extention //url thingy off the end and it worked. Worst comes to worst I'm sure there's a different word counter you could use. Try googling it
Aww, Bolt. Hope you feel better ))

Don watched Rose eat, but his gaze was not judgemental or criticising. He always ate in a careless way himself, so it just made him feel all the more eager to adopt Rose with Lavender. He had zoned out a little at the thought of puppies again, but Rose brought him back to alertness when she spoke to him. With a kind and warm smile, he lowered his head to her a little as she spoke so that he could hear better - his hearing was not very good, and he could turn deaf one day. It was due to his rare solid white colouring - many solid white dogs with blue eyes end up deaf at some point in their lives. But he tuned in to her little, nervous voice easily. His smile faded at her question, and he wore a look of concern - he couldn't promise anything in his line of work. But he didn't want to make her worry, and for her sake, he would try not to be injured so badly next time a bad situation arose. Considering his words carefully, he softly replied to her, "i'm going to try my hardest not to. But I can't make any promises, Rose. I'm a fighter. It's my duty to protect everyone. I'll end up hurt sometimes, but that's the way it is for me. I hope you understand."

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Rose couldn't stop a little whimper from coming out of her mouth, but she forced herself to try and understand what Don was saying as he looked down at her with concern in his eyes. When he said it was his job, his duty, it did help her rationalise his quick response to her presence, and his kindness and protectiveness since. How he'd become a perfect father figure without even realising it - it was all due to the love he felt for his pack and his mate already. But it didn't stop her worrying fiercely about the first loved one she'd truly had.
She swallowed her misgivings for a moment and went to the pitbull's side, sinking into his soft fur as she murmured, I just don't want to be lost again.

(sorry, minor WB)

Word Count: 133

[Bolt1784]

(( *flies in to the sun* ))
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CjVwALJ7TFk

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"Tʜᴇ ʟᴀsᴛ ʙᴀᴛᴛʟᴇ ʙᴇᴛᴡᴇᴇɴ ɢᴏᴏᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠɪʟ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʏ ᴏғ Jᴜᴅɢᴍᴇɴᴛ."
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Don smiled at Rose and gave the top of her head a soft lick. "It's alright, Rosie. You won't be lost again. Even if I...I don't come back one day, you'll still have everyone else in the pack. But I promise, i'll do everything I can to be here for you. Okay? I promise." He tried to reassure her. He wasn't sure if his words had given the right effect, but either way, he was telling her the truth. "And you'd still have Lavender too. In fact...Me and Lavender wanted to talk to you about something." He continued, his tail beginning to wag as he remembered what he and Lav had decided to ask Rose. He just hoped that she would say yes.

[SunsetPatches]

((oh god that video was hilarious, Bolt ))

Don smiled at Rose and gave the top of her head a soft lick. "It's alright, Rosie. You won't be lost again. Even if I...I don't come back one day, you'll still have everyone else in the pack. But I promise, i'll do everything I can to be here for you. Okay? I promise." He tried to reassure her. He wasn't sure if his words had given the right effect, but either way, he was telling her the truth. "And you'd still have Lavender too. In fact...Me and Lavender wanted to talk to you about something." He continued, his tail beginning to wag as he remembered what he and Lav had decided to ask Rose. He just hoped that she would say yes.

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Rose brightened at the soft lick Don gave her, and a rush of love overwhelmed her as he promised her that he would be there. That, more than any herbs or moss or food, was what would heal her broken heart. Trust. Both him and Lavender would be there for her, and she just had to trust Don not to mortally wound himself any time soon.
She reached up on tiptoe and nuzzled his cheek, breathing in what was now becoming his familiar scent. Don started to talk again, and Rose looked up at him seriously. Anything he or Lavender had to say, she was all ears.
Her mind lost focus, though, on what Don was saying as her eyes blurred and her nose wrinked. Her breathing hitched and felt strangely itchy as it whistled through her nose. She hung breathlessly waiting, bemused, until finally-
ACHOO!
Rose blinked twice and turned back to Don. She hoped she hadn't interrupted too badly. His tail had begun to wag, though. The pup looked back at him sheepishly and woofed, Sorry, what was that?

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[Bolt1784]

(( it was too cute
i''m done
*flies to the moon* ))

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"Tʜᴇ ʟᴀsᴛ ʙᴀᴛᴛʟᴇ ʙᴇᴛᴡᴇᴇɴ ɢᴏᴏᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠɪʟ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʏ ᴏғ Jᴜᴅɢᴍᴇɴᴛ."
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Don chuckled to himself as Rose sneezed pretty loudly. He didn't mind repeating what he had just said - it just felt good to have someone that wanted to listen to him. Lavender, Rose and Maverick seemed to be the only dogs he could truly rely on right now. Everyone else seemed to push him away. Perhaps they didn't mean to do so. But still, it had been hurting him for three years. There was probably no way to change it now. He had Rose and Lavender to talk to - the two dogs who truly wanted to hear his voice and what he had to say. It meant a lot to him, and he was grateful for it. With an amused smirk, Don lowered his head to Rose's level. "Lavender and I were wondering if...If you'd like to...Be our daughter." He said this with complete sincerity, trying to pick his words carefully. "Lavender would be your mother, and I would be your father."

[SunsetPatches]

((You see, now, that post was too cute!
*flies to the moon when it's eclipsing the sun so she can visit Bolt*
I feel bad that Speechless isn't here to share this moment with us, but oh well.))

Don chuckled to himself as Rose sneezed pretty loudly. He didn't mind repeating what he had just said - it just felt good to have someone that wanted to listen to him. Lavender, Rose and Maverick seemed to be the only dogs he could truly rely on right now. Everyone else seemed to push him away. Perhaps they didn't mean to do so. But still, it had been hurting him for three years. There was probably no way to change it now. He had Rose and Lavender to talk to - the two dogs who truly wanted to hear his voice and what he had to say. It meant a lot to him, and he was grateful for it. With an amused smirk, Don lowered his head to Rose's level. "Lavender and I were wondering if...If you'd like to...Be our daughter." He said this with complete sincerity, trying to pick his words carefully. "Lavender would be your mother, and I would be your father."

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A trickle of trepidation coalesced in her heart as Don lowered his head to her level. His grave eyes bored into hers as he started to speak.
Rose was so awe-struck by his word that it took her a few moments to process what he was saying.
Suddenly, memories flooded into Rose's mind, dim blurs of her mother's face, a rememberance of love; then a wave of desolation and loneliness as her mother disappeared underneath her, her soul slowly draining away. The memories had not gone away, they had not ceased to be meaningful - but a new life was ahead of her. A new life, filled with her new pack and her protectors. Her parents.
A current of love whirled within her, so voraciously consuming her with joy that she could not speak. Rose could only gaze up at the brute, the first friendly and steadfast face that she could count upon, and hoped that he could see the love and hope and wonder within her.
Finally, she managed to whisper a word. The best word.
Yes.

Word Count: 178

[Bolt1784]

(( speechy will be here later <3 ))

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"Tʜᴇ ʟᴀsᴛ ʙᴀᴛᴛʟᴇ ʙᴇᴛᴡᴇᴇɴ ɢᴏᴏᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠɪʟ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ ᴛʜᴇ Dᴀʏ ᴏғ Jᴜᴅɢᴍᴇɴᴛ."
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Don couldn't control the big smile that forced itself on to his face. In his heart, he had known that Rose would agree to this. That one simple word made him feel elated, happy and grateful all at once. "Then, as your new dad, i'm afraid i'll have to tickle you." He said with a playful grin, looking to Lavender for a second - she knew of his tickle torture very well. Without hesitation, Don gently pushed Rose on to her back, exposing her belly, and started to tickle her with his cold nose. But he would not let on that he was ticklish himself. Only Lavender knew of that dark secret. His tail was wagging like a puppy with a chew toy at that moment, and he didn't intend to stop it. He was too happy.

[SunsetPatches]

((it's funny because I'm actually super duper ticklish and my friends tickle torture me all the time ))

Don couldn't control the big smile that forced itself on to his face. In his heart, he had known that Rose would agree to this. That one simple word made him feel elated, happy and grateful all at once. "Then, as your new dad, i'm afraid i'll have to tickle you." He said with a playful grin, looking to Lavender for a second - she knew of his tickle torture very well. Without hesitation, Don gently pushed Rose on to her back, exposing her belly, and started to tickle her with his cold nose. But he would not let on that he was ticklish himself. Only Lavender knew of that dark secret. His tail was wagging like a puppy with a chew toy at that moment, and he didn't intend to stop it. He was too happy.

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The little fae pup grinned back at Don's grateful smile, hope suffusing her entire body. She never wanted the moment to end, or at least she didn't before Don began to tickle her. Rose hadn't known if she was ticklish before that moment, or really known what ticking was. But now, though, she knew all too well what it felt like as she giggled and squirmed and wriggled under Don's nose. Her tail was wagging, though, and she was feeling too much joy to be disgruntled at his violating nose.
She eventually wriggled her way free, though, and went to get her revenge before realising that pouncing on the big bear of a dog would probably not be such a good idea, considering the scars and open wounds riddling the dog's frame.
The pup did intend on getting her revenge, in play at least, and let out a mock growl at the big pitbull. Rose ran straight at him with a grin on her face, at the last moment stooping low and skidding right under the brute. She lowered her head in playful anger and woofed excitedly.

Word Count: 187