


quick facts wrote:
- fav. youtuber;;
markiplier <3- fav. animals;;
bears,hummingbirds.- fav. thing to draw;;
big cats.- fandoms;;
most recently, walking dead.- rp interests;;
warriors, wolves,
subject to change.- rp level;;
semi-lit to lit.- current muse;;
7.5/10- past aliases;;
{ s'amomo }, .x. calamita .x.

halierae wrote:Bey and Jace
Jace nodded. The blood dribbled down her shoulders from Beys coughing, making him look sad and haunted. He trekked faster, flipping his head for Chakotay to keep up with him. "We have to get her there fast."
halierae wrote:Bey and Jace
Bey coughed more, her belly seizing up. Jace grimaced, turning to Chakotay. "How much longer" he asked desperately. "I don't think she's going to make it..." He cried. When Bey heard this, she started to silently cry too. "And the pups..." He whispered.

The_Shadow_Ghost wrote:{Rainbow dash, this is your first warning. You have broken three rules and will have to tone your roleplaying down to follow these rules. I know it's easy to get caught up in the moment when roleplaying but three rules is enough.
1|You have posted one liner's, which it says in the rules is the one rule regarding literacy that I have. Please try to lengthen your posts a bit. Even if you make it to just over two lines then its okay. Its very hard to respond to one line of writing especially when you are trying to write a paragraph. Your posts were perfect earlier on, but they have gotten way shorter as you go on.
2|You aren't being very realistic. It started with Jezzie being able to fight a wolf-dog. If she really wanted her pups to survive, she would be resting at the camp or doing some easy exercise. Also Jezzabelle is a great Dane/ Australian Shepard mix and so she shouldn't be able to 'ditch' a greyhound, which is a breed built for speed. Also, Jezzie is pregnant and so she would have to stop and drink, rest and eat alot more than a normal dog otherwise she would be doing harm to herself and her pups. So please try to make things a bit more fair when it comes to realism, I put up with Jezzie being able to run away from Chakotay, who is a husky, which is a breed built for endurance because when dogs get feisty its hard to stop them, but Jezzie in her current state shouldn't be able to outrun a greyhound. Even a healthy dog would find it incredibly hard to outrun one.
3| Drama. First Jezzie denied entrance to the packs camp to a dog who wanted to talk to the alpha. Blocking his way and starting a fight was dramatic, but within reason. Running off was also within reason. But this running has gone on far to long. Jezzie is blowing a situation into a minor war, which it sounds like has already begun with Jezzie refusing to listen to her Beta and follow her order's, which being a subordinate she is supposed to do. For all she know's, Luca could have fought off the Daxter and forced him to leave but she doesn't know if he is still in the camp or not. And your blowing your argument way out of proportion. The plot line has been interrupted by jezzie running off, I intended to have the dogs leave and start their journey home but they can't with three dogs missing, and the beta to boot.
Please read over the rules once more to make sure you don;t break them again. Thank you

{s'amomo.} wrote:{ i am back, will post when my mind recoops :3 }

{Rainbow Dash} wrote:(You clearly don't like me so I guess I'll just leave)


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{Rainbow Dash} wrote:The_Shadow_Ghost wrote:{Rainbow dash, this is your first warning. You have broken three rules and will have to tone your roleplaying down to follow these rules. I know it's easy to get caught up in the moment when roleplaying but three rules is enough.
1|You have posted one liner's, which it says in the rules is the one rule regarding literacy that I have. Please try to lengthen your posts a bit. Even if you make it to just over two lines then its okay. Its very hard to respond to one line of writing especially when you are trying to write a paragraph. Your posts were perfect earlier on, but they have gotten way shorter as you go on.
2|You aren't being very realistic. It started with Jezzie being able to fight a wolf-dog. If she really wanted her pups to survive, she would be resting at the camp or doing some easy exercise. Also Jezzabelle is a great Dane/ Australian Shepard mix and so she shouldn't be able to 'ditch' a greyhound, which is a breed built for speed. Also, Jezzie is pregnant and so she would have to stop and drink, rest and eat alot more than a normal dog otherwise she would be doing harm to herself and her pups. So please try to make things a bit more fair when it comes to realism, I put up with Jezzie being able to run away from Chakotay, who is a husky, which is a breed built for endurance because when dogs get feisty its hard to stop them, but Jezzie in her current state shouldn't be able to outrun a greyhound. Even a healthy dog would find it incredibly hard to outrun one.
3| Drama. First Jezzie denied entrance to the packs camp to a dog who wanted to talk to the alpha. Blocking his way and starting a fight was dramatic, but within reason. Running off was also within reason. But this running has gone on far to long. Jezzie is blowing a situation into a minor war, which it sounds like has already begun with Jezzie refusing to listen to her Beta and follow her order's, which being a subordinate she is supposed to do. For all she know's, Luca could have fought off the Daxter and forced him to leave but she doesn't know if he is still in the camp or not. And your blowing your argument way out of proportion. The plot line has been interrupted by jezzie running off, I intended to have the dogs leave and start their journey home but they can't with three dogs missing, and the beta to boot.
Please read over the rules once more to make sure you don;t break them again. Thank you
(You clearly don't like me so I guess I'll just leave)



quick facts wrote:
- fav. youtuber;;
markiplier <3- fav. animals;;
bears,hummingbirds.- fav. thing to draw;;
big cats.- fandoms;;
most recently, walking dead.- rp interests;;
warriors, wolves,
subject to change.- rp level;;
semi-lit to lit.- current muse;;
7.5/10- past aliases;;
{ s'amomo }, .x. calamita .x.


{Rainbow Dash} wrote:(I'm sorry but other than the literacy rule, your rules are getting a bit ridiculous)
halierae wrote:((Rainbowdash, they like you, they just want to keep the RP successful and realistic. They probably just thought you didn't remember the rules. I think the rules are fine, but with you said right now.... Yeah that's not very nice. Don't get frustrated love.))
{s'amomo.} wrote:{ rainbow you are just fine. i have been warned before, they are simply giving a warning. it does not mean someone secretly hates you. will you really just quit any rp because you got a warning? i have gooten board warnings and never quit cs. And most of those rules are super basic. realistic in realistic rp section. no overboard drama. and she does have a plot for the rp, and needs to keep it going. jezzie has been offered help many times but denies it. and yes… sometimes people just come off rude when they do not mean it. perfectly understandable.

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