∞Infinity∞ Dog role play {open}

[.bluejay.]

Jezzabelle stopped when she asked about the wolf dog. "He is trying to be mates with the alpha, after he attacked me," Jezzabelle growled.

[♚ M I U ♚]

Breeze came to a stop looking confused,"He wants to mate with alpha? What would he gain from that? And he attacked you? He is telling everyone you attacked him but..seeing as your smaller and pregnant I doubt that." She sat down with a frown,"Even if he became mates with the alpha he won't run the pack..she wouldn't let him." She told Jezzie trying to understand what has the other female so upset. "What is making you so angry right now?"

[.bluejay.]

"Everything!" Jezzabelle growled. Jezzabelle snarled at the thought.

[♚ M I U ♚]

Breeze tilted her head at her,"Well..describe everything? The fact the male had the audacity to attack you? The fact the male wants to mate someone else? The pack not believing you? I need something to go on Jezzie so I can fix it to where you stay with us. I need someone in the pack that won't go all ooo and ahhh over a wolf dog." She snorted remembering how the pack seemed to do just that and the male had smoothly inserted him next to their alpha.

[.bluejay.]

"He was mad because I wouldn't introduce him to the alpha so he attacked me," Jezzabelle said.

[♚ M I U ♚]

Breeze nodded her head now grasping why she was mad,"Well in that case, running away from the pack is going to make him think he made you a wuss and now he can do whatever he wants. Come back with me Jezzie." She growled her eyes flashing,"Lets show him he still has to fight to get into our pack completely. I for one am not easily persuaded by charm or bullying."

[.bluejay.]

"I am not going near that wolf dog," Jezzabelle growled. Jezzabelle trotted off, getting farther away from the pack.

[♚ M I U ♚]

Breeze fell in beside her,"Why not? You going to let him walk over you like that? Chase you out and take your spot?" She asked shocked a bit that the dog before her had no back bone it seemed..she had thought the female had spunk.

[.bluejay.]

"I'm not gonna go get attacked, I'm not an idiot," Jezzabelle growled, running faster.

[The_Shadow_Ghost]

{Rainbow dash, this is your first warning. You have broken three rules and will have to tone your roleplaying down to follow these rules. I know it's easy to get caught up in the moment when roleplaying but three rules is enough.

1|You have posted one liner's, which it says in the rules is the one rule regarding literacy that I have. Please try to lengthen your posts a bit. Even if you make it to just over two lines then its okay. Its very hard to respond to one line of writing especially when you are trying to write a paragraph. Your posts were perfect earlier on, but they have gotten way shorter as you go on.

2|You aren't being very realistic. It started with Jezzie being able to fight a wolf-dog. If she really wanted her pups to survive, she would be resting at the camp or doing some easy exercise. Also Jezzabelle is a great Dane/ Australian Shepard mix and so she shouldn't be able to 'ditch' a greyhound, which is a breed built for speed. Also, Jezzie is pregnant and so she would have to stop and drink, rest and eat alot more than a normal dog otherwise she would be doing harm to herself and her pups. So please try to make things a bit more fair when it comes to realism, I put up with Jezzie being able to run away from Chakotay, who is a husky, which is a breed built for endurance because when dogs get feisty its hard to stop them, but Jezzie in her current state shouldn't be able to outrun a greyhound. Even a healthy dog would find it incredibly hard to outrun one.

3| Drama. First Jezzie denied entrance to the packs camp to a dog who wanted to talk to the alpha. Blocking his way and starting a fight was dramatic, but within reason. Running off was also within reason. But this running has gone on far to long. Jezzie is blowing a situation into a minor war, which it sounds like has already begun with Jezzie refusing to listen to her Beta and follow her order's, which being a subordinate she is supposed to do. For all she know's, Luca could have fought off the Daxter and forced him to leave but she doesn't know if he is still in the camp or not. And your blowing your argument way out of proportion. The plot line has been interrupted by jezzie running off, I intended to have the dogs leave and start their journey home but they can't with three dogs missing, and the beta to boot.

Please read over the rules once more to make sure you don;t break them again. Thank you