Perfect Pals (Petting Zoo RP New and always accepting)

[Taisi]

Belle looks at him, "But I do know you have a crush on me"

Could you please use correct grammar and punctuation? Like "s when your character is talking. And can you write more than one sentence?))

[lulu07]

(haha ok and dont worry u are really nice and im female and my name is lily and im black and im a sheland)

[Taisi]

Belle saw Lilly and she let out a little neigh to her, acknowledging her arrival to the zoo. She smiled back at the stallion in front of her, waiting for him to speak.

[ɪᴍᴘᴏssɪʙʟᴇ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍᴇʀ.]

Showdown watched the stallion run around the pen and was angry again. If only we were out of here my herd could run over grassy fields and wouldn't have to be cramped! We would be free to roam and to stretch out legs! to feel the soft tickle of grass! He reared angrily and laid his ears back, the whites of his eyes showing with anger.

[lulu07]

(im a she) gives a little smile whispers hi

[ɪᴍᴘᴏssɪʙʟᴇ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍᴇʀ.]

Belle looks at him, "But I do know you have a crush on me"

"U-ummm..." Wind panicked and didn't know what to say. She'll hate you forever and never talk to you again! The voice hissed loudly in his mind and also said, Plus your going against the charming handsome other horses. Your not charming or handsome! "No." He finally said, hanging his head miserably.

[cek00]

Midnight grinned, "I have," he said his eyes lighting up a bit.

[lulu07]

Walks closer to other animals "hey im lily and you are?"

[swag;]

Kona (pony) Male:
He continued on, running around the whole pen, he had no where else to go, but enjoyed himself.

Jagger (Quater Horse) Male:
Jagger brought his head down and he drank some water from a troph, sighing softly.

[ɪᴍᴘᴏssɪʙʟᴇ ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍᴇʀ.]

--which pony likes Bella?--