(ok, thanks!

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Dawnsaber:
she sat there, catching breath. when the hunter decided to hit her in the chest, she choked. she looked down, blood running from her head, her skull throbbing. she walked back to the pack, and took a nice wash down in a little pond, disconnected from the drinking pond. "sh- she got taken." she said out of breath, almost falling to the ground.
Duskclaw:
he saw her hurt, and went over there to comfort her. "are you ok!?" he said terrified. he helped her to the den.
Siltia:
"mom!" she yelped. she was afraid. she slowly walked over to dawnsaber, and cuddled up next to her. the sniffled and asked "where is hicktown?" tears nearly filling her eyes.