||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby Αρμονία » Tue Nov 05, 2013 12:56 pm

{Ok I did put punctuation.}
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby diana. » Tue Nov 05, 2013 1:02 pm

{{ also use spaces between blake and slip. and after you finish the sentence.
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby þella » Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:23 pm

(Not trying to be pushy, but this would be an overall good post:
Blake pulls on a cute polka dotted bikini. She smiles at herself in the mirror before confidently heading into the backyard to take a dip in the hot tub. After finally reaching the water, she calmly slips inside of the warm, bubbling pool. I wonder where everyone is... She wonders. Blake closes her eyes and begins daydreaming about all of the hot guys she will hopefully meet soon, but after a few silent minutes, she falls asleep.
I hope this will help you understand what we're looking for. ^-^)
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby diana. » Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:28 pm

{{ i agree with bella but it's fine for now and i hope you can improve slowly... we're all here to help you do it (:


xxxx ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ xxxx
Lᴏsɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʙʟᴜᴇ ʟɪᴋᴇ I'd never known
Missing him was ᴅᴀʀᴋ ɢʀᴇʏ all along
- Fᴏʀɢᴇᴛᴛɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʟɪᴋᴇ -
∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ trying to know somebody you never met∘ ∘ ∘ ∘

Bᴜᴛ ʟᴏᴠɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʀᴇᴅ
Moving on from him is impossible
xxWʜᴇɴ I sᴛɪʟʟ sᴇᴇ ɪᴛ ᴀʟʟ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀᴅxx

xxxx ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ xxxx


Maya fished a water bottle from the fridge and headed into the lounge. Her heart pounded in her chest as she thought of Cade being there and her head swirled around the images from last night. She suddenly felt very awkward to go out there, even more so than before. The girl ignored her thoughts and finally reached the lounge and stopped foolishly as she stared at his back for a while.
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby þella » Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:39 pm

Cade stared oustide at the pool, still mesmerized by it's beauty. There was a girl who seemed to be asleep in thew hot tub and a wave of concern washed over him. Sleeping in a hot tub was extremely dangerous. Cade stood up and opened the back door, stepping outside and walking over to he hot tub in the far corner of the backyard. He gently but firmly grabbed the shoulders of the sleeping girl and shook them a little. "Hey, wake up, you okay? You should never go in a hot tub if you're tired, sleeping in one is dangerous. You could burn yourself or drown." Cade ran a hand through his hair and let go of the girl, allowing her to wake up and/or get out.
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby diana. » Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:57 pm

xxxx ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ xxxx
Lᴏsɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʙʟᴜᴇ ʟɪᴋᴇ I'd never known
Missing him was ᴅᴀʀᴋ ɢʀᴇʏ all along
- Fᴏʀɢᴇᴛᴛɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʟɪᴋᴇ -
∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ trying to know somebody you never met∘ ∘ ∘ ∘

Bᴜᴛ ʟᴏᴠɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʀᴇᴅ
Moving on from him is impossible
xxWʜᴇɴ I sᴛɪʟʟ sᴇᴇ ɪᴛ ᴀʟʟ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀᴅxx

xxxx ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ xxxx
Maya watched Cade as he headed into the pool and seemed to be talking to himself. A frown of concern appeared on her forehead but she ignored the boy as she headed upstairs into the room. She had realized it was a girl in the hot tub that was sleeping and by the look on Cade's face, he was trying to wake her up. But still a pang of jealousy washed over Maya and she shook her head to clear the thoughts. She took the stairs two at a time, almost tripping on one before she caught herself in time. The brunette ran inside her room and banged the door shut, realizing it was very loud. But she didn't want to see the rest of the time he was spending with another girl. Even if it was was precaution. It still annoyed her like she could have never imagined.
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby Αρμονία » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:57 am

Blake looked at the guy, then said,"I'm sorry what?" Then Alexandria sits up, Alexandria smiles at the boy, then says,"I'm Blake and you are?"
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby þella » Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:53 pm

(Alexandria...? I thought her name was Blake o.o) Cade shook his head. "Cade." He said simply. His footsteps could be heard as he walked back inside and left the girl to do whatever she wanted. He sighed and sat back down on the couch in living room. Cade desperately wished that things between him and Maya weren't so awkward so that he could talk to her.
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Re: ||The Dating Game|| [Semi-lit | Accepting]

Postby diana. » Wed Nov 06, 2013 3:25 pm

xxxx ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ xxxx
Lᴏsɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʙʟᴜᴇ ʟɪᴋᴇ I'd never known
Missing him was ᴅᴀʀᴋ ɢʀᴇʏ all along
- Fᴏʀɢᴇᴛᴛɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʟɪᴋᴇ -
∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ trying to know somebody you never met∘ ∘ ∘ ∘

Bᴜᴛ ʟᴏᴠɪɴɢ ʜɪᴍ ᴡᴀs ʀᴇᴅ
Moving on from him is impossible
xxWʜᴇɴ I sᴛɪʟʟ sᴇᴇ ɪᴛ ᴀʟʟ ɪɴ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀᴅxx

xxxx ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ ∘ xxxx


Maya sighed and headed towards the bathroom for a shower. The entire time, her thoughts were on Cade which started to annoy the girl. She knew that she had come here for a boy but she had no idea that she would find him so easily. She didn't want to fall in love yet. She wasn't ready for it. But her mind denied all those thoughts and a picture of Cade came back in her head. She almost screamed in frustration but controlled herself. Maya got into the hot water and smiled slightly which soon evaporated as soon as a picture of Cade appeared in her mind.
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