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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS]

Postby Temperance. » Mon Jan 16, 2012 1:34 am

Number I'd like to adopt:
The astonishingly gorgeous #5


Liocko Name:
Jezriel

Simply because I think it suits her personality. She's sort of like Jezebel but she actually realizes her mistake....and isn't quite as bad. Plus I think it sounds really pretty and its fun to say out loud XD


Backstory:
Jezriel slipped smoothly through the thick underbrush, her whiskers twitched faintly and her eyes narrowed. She had been alone for quite some time now, and frankly she wasn't enjoying it as much as she had thought she would. Though Jezriel was an accomplished huntress, managing to meet the quota of food she had been used to was something else entirely. Wistfully the stunning female found herself remembering past days, happier days, when life had been so much easier.

Dargel nudged her gently with his nose, eyes glittering teasingly. "Well? Get up sleepy one, I have food for you." A satisfied smirk spread across Jezriel's muzzle, and her eyes glittered with the knowledge that she had this male, among others, completely wrapped around her tail. It was a good thing that Jethro didn't have any inkling of this though, her "betrothed" would no doubt be intensely displeased. "When should we run away together Jezriel? Obviously we can't love each other and remain here, Jethro would have our tails! And likely kick us out anyways." This was the problem with Dargel, he wanted her TOO much. And she had no plans to commit to him in any way, she just liked all the attention. Her cream tail, tipped with white, snaked around Dargel to stroke his chin, "Now, now. There's absolutely no rush, they don't need to know a thing." She didn't say anything more, after all, Jezriel's word was law. That, if nothing else, was utterly respected by all the males. Dargel frowned though, his brow furrowing slightly, "Really though Jezriel, we can't....we can't call each other mates and be free about our relationship if we stay here....don't you want the freedom to admit the truth?" It shouldn't have stung her to hear that but it did. Fixing him in a dark glare she slowly answered. "Of course I do, but the cold season draws close and it would be wise to wait till fairer weather before heading out on our own." She figured the debate was done and turned away, but she missed the hard look in Dargel's eyes. Perhaps if she hadn't turned when she did Jezriel would have realized her error.....and sought to correct it. For playing with such deep emotions never ends well, love and war, two things that always seem to act without reason and thought, fueled instead by the deepest desires of those caught in its thrall. But Jezriel, in her vanity and pride, failed to note this.

Jethro appeared in front of her not long after, pain and fury equally glowing in his eyes. Dargel behind him looked at her with anguish and something else in his eyes. And Jezriel knew, she had been found out, and the consequences would be dire. "Jez....I can't believe you would do this. To me, to Dargel....have you no pride? No shame? I'm....I'm disgusted by you. That you would betray me, betray the group like this.....you're no queen Jezriel, not even a princess. Just a deceitful temptress who needs attention...and shuns love." To hear Jethro speak like this....it wounded her deeply, giving rise to feelings she hadn't realized she possessed. That Jezriel truly cared for Jethro....well, it seemed like too much to bear, but before she could give voice to any of these thoughts and feelings Jethro's eyes hardened. "You love no one but yourself. Fine, you can go love yourself to your hearts content....ALONE." The finality of his words spread through her and she gasped in horror. "No Jethro! Please no! I'll DIE on my own out there!" The look he shot her was full of pity, a little sorrow, and a broken heart. His voice was firm though, with no hesitation....only a deep sadness. "My paws are tied Jezriel. The law is the law. We have only one law and you broke it. There can be no exceptions....no matter who it is." Nodding to Dargel he started to walk away, leaving her alone, for good. And though Dargel tossed her one last glance he too walked away.


Jezriel shook herself out of the memory, hindsight had eventually shown her what a fool she had been...though it didn't soothe her in any way, rather it made her feel unclean. To have tampered with two such magnificent males....both of whom had loved her, and then roughly toss them away. How she could have been so heartless was beyond comprehension. And the worst part was...she realized that she truly did love Jethro, yet now there was nothing that could be done about it. She was gone, banished from the group and resigned to living out her days alone in the Mountains. There would be no kittens for her, no laughter and love from a mate. And it was all her own doing. Still, sometimes when she hunted and looked up at the moon hope ran through her....maybe one day she would find Jethro again, and perhaps even win over his love.

To be continued?


Anything else?:
I came up with a poem I thought was fitting for Jezriel. I also just want to say that I rarely fall so in love with a design as I have with her. That and her story, so tragic yet of her own making. I really want to continue it, but of course, there are many other good forms for her I'm sure, still I look forward to the judging and seeing who wins this stunning Liocko.

{Like shadows dancing in the night}
{I stole your love without a fight}
{And when you came to ask for mine}
{I danced away, but crossed a line}
{Then rising fury captured me}
{Exposed as wicked, all to see}
{The truth attacked me, love I found}
{But when he saw me, only frowned}
{And then I learned the wretched truth}
{An eye for eye and tooth for tooth}
{And I was sent forever away}
{Never again to see the day}
{When my love would see, and smile at me}
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby Queen Vivane » Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:13 am

Number I'd like to adopt: 2

Liocko Name: Ice Shard

Backstory: The bells rang out signalling midnight had arrived, he ignored the bells toll and watched the small meadow from his vantage point on the nearby hill, the moonlight bathed him in it's ethereal glow. His keen eyes spotted the slender and her heavily built stag companion with ease, she would occasionally twirl on her hooves so she was walking backward and then she would twirl and walk forwards once more. His head tilted to one side as he watched deep affection pass between the two companions, sighing he turned and slunk back to his cave

Anything else?: WIP
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby Azure23 » Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:12 am


Number I'd like to adopt:
[Number One, she is sooo pretty.]
Liocko Name:
[WaveRunner; Wave for short.]
Backstory:
The young female Liocko padded silently along the sandy shores. Her ears layed flat against her skull by the endless wind and her eyes squeezed shut to block out the stinging sand. This wasn't the best time for a walk, but she always traveled this way when she needed to time to think by herself. She finally came to a stop when she reached the edge of a cliff. Her keen blue eyes scanned the horizon and her mind drifted to different time.
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She was a kitten then. So young, curious, and full of reckless energy. She followed her mother and brother, her feathered tail streaming behind her as she chased her brother happily.

"Can't catch me!" The tan male kitten howled dodging out of his sister's reach.

"Come back here!" The younger brown and blue female kitten chirped, lashing at her brother's tail. She lunged at her brother with outstreatched paws and caught him heavily in the shoulder. The two scuffled in the dust, letting out little mews and excited chirps. They broked apart when their mother called to them. The rushed to her side, their feathered tails wagging happily.

The traveling trio continued on to their destination, oblivious to the pair of eyes watching them from the bushes.

The two kits looked curiously at their new surroundings. To their right was the thick, dark forest and to their left was the sheer cliffs that gave way to foaming waters that was the sea. The kits were cautiously looking over the cliffs, their crossed eyes wide with awe.

A loud, guttural roar caused them bolt real around in surprise and fear. Their mother stood protectively in front of them. Her dark bround fur standing along her spine and her lips drawn back to reveal sharp teeth. In front of her was a large, muscled tan and blue male. His dark eyes glinted maliciously and his tail lashed in aggitation.

"Leave them be, Sabine. They have nothing to do with this." Their mother's voice said calmly, but it trembled with underlying fear. The male grinned cruely. "No, but they mean everything to you." His voice grated and sent shivers down their spine. With a snarl he threw himself at their mother and the two very large lion-like creatures fought viciously in the gritty sand.

The two kittens watched with horror as their mother fought vainly with the male. It was failed effort in the end, and after only a few moments, the once proud and peaceful female was dead, her blood stained the sand red. The large male turned towards the terrified kits, a grin spreading on his cruel maw. Slowly he padded foward, his claws sliding out.

In panick, the two kits started to back away, their shrill mews echoed in the wind. The little female lost her footing near one of the cliffs. She dug her claws in to the edge, her terrified cry catching in her throat. The large male swiped at her brother, his claws catching his flesh. Just then, the female lost her footing and she plummeted into the salty waves below.

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WaveRunner shook her head, her eyes clouded with pain. She tipped her chin towards the heavens, her eyes searching for something the two familar stars that always were the first to show up in the darkening night. A warm feeling spread in her chest when she finally found them.

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[Sorry it is so long. Kinda got carried away. :3]
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby zacherie » Mon Jan 16, 2012 11:38 am

Number I'd like to adopt: The awesomifying #5

Liocko Name: Spirited (Used to be Rondo. She later changes her name into Soul Bridge. That part of the story isn't on here.)

Backstory:
The three kits jumped and frolicked under the watchful eyes of their parents. Except for the occasional fumble, they were as graceful as flowing water.
A few minutes into their play, the medium one strode confidently towards the parents.
"Ma, can we play near those rocks?" Rondo asked, eyes pleading. "We promise we'll behave!"
The father lifted his eyebrows suspiciously. The mother glanced at the father, shook her head, and spoke.
"Yes," she said. "But behave!" she warned the frisky kits.
"WE PROMISE!" Rondo shouted.
The kits flew into a frenzy of chase-and-tag. Rondo chased her brothers down and pinned them to the ground. The smallest one struggled out of Rondo's grasp as the biggest one, Stezin, gazed up at the mountain of rocks and grinned.
"Think you're up for a challenge?" Stezin asked them.
Rondo looked at Stezin quizzically. She shook her head furiously, tail twitching uncontrollably. She opened her mouth to speak but no words came out. However, smallest kit, Doreon, bounced up and down.
"Yeah! I'm a big kit now!" he announced proudly.
Stezin scanned his surrounding before he spoke. "I bet you can't beat me up that mountain," he teased, pointing his tail at the humongus pile of rocks.
Doreon pouted and stood on his tippy-toes to match eye level with Stezin. "I can do that. It'll be easy!" he said. He walked in circles around his older brother as if he were taunting him.
Stezin studied Doreon. He stood up straight, looked at Doreon right in the eye and dashed up the rocks.
"Hey, no head starts!" Doreon shouted up at Stezin. Then he scrambled up to follow his big brother.
They clambered up the mountain as quick as they can, in effort to beat the other. In a hurry, Doreon slipped and tumbled down the mountain. He landed with a thud. Shaking, Doreon got up to his feet and gazed up at his brother.
"Stezin," he wailed. Stezin paused and turned. As he turned to face down below, he misplaced his foot and set off a chain reaction. A pebble rolled downhill and hit a boulder and set the boulder tumbling down the mountain straight towards Doreon.
"Doreon!" Stezin yelled and slid down the mountain, but in vain.
Doreon saw the boulder bounding towards him. He sighed and looked at the approaching boulder. "I can do this," he whispered. Then the boulder crashed onto his head and flattened his body. The sound of his skull and spine fracturing echoed through the prairie.
The father's head quickly snapped up at the sound. Oh no, he thought. The kits! And he rushed to where the kits were playing.
It was horrible sight. Doreon's once young, spirited body was now lying in a pool of dark blood. His skull was crushed into many pieces. Whatever was left of his organs turned into a jumble of mush. He lay in a sprawled manner, flattened out by the boulder. Stezin who sat at the foot of the mountain immediately froze at the sight of his father. Rondo bounded away behind what was left of the boulder.
The father glanced at where Rondo fled and slowly turned his head to where Stezin sat. He plodded toward Stezin, eyes suspicious.
"Are...are you responsible for Doreon's...death?" the father asked, his voice trembling with fear.
Stezin gulped. "Yes," he said, bravely. "I did. And I --!"
His father swiped a paw at Stezin. Stezin flew across the prairie and crashed into the boulder Rondo was hiding behind. His head started to bleed and he feebly raised his head to look at his father.
"How... How could you do this?!" he roared and unsheathed his claws. He examined them, and looked back at Stezin. His face took on a smug look as he approached the bleeding kit.
"What, do you suppose, will happen if I swipe this paw across your stomach?" he said, looking at his claws. "A swipe of this," he continued, "can kill even the strongest. You are not even close to the skills of your younger sister. Younger!" he shouted. "Why did you do this?" he cried, tears staining his face. "Why?!" he screamed and slashed Stezin's stomach open. Blood gushed out from his belly and his face turned pale. His father repeatedly smashed him in the head. "Why, why, WHY?!" he wailed, like a child. He shook his head and slashed Stezin's chest. His father's claws punctured Stezin's lungs. Stezin gasped for breath and whispered, "I'm sorry." And he took his last breath and died.
"Rondo," her father sneered, "I know you're here." He trudged towards the boulder Rondo was standing behind. He peeked behind the boulder and saw a shivering, helpless kit. When he stepped closer, she backed off. He tried once more, but she backed off again in fear of being killed. He paused, then his face became red. He stuttered, utterly lost for words.
"You..." he finally choked. He shook his head and chuckled.
"No one... No one wants you anymore," he rasped. He spat on the ground. "No one cares if you're alive or not," he said. Looking at Rondo's horrified face, he crowed with laughter. "That's right, that's right," he continued, his bloodshot eyes reducing Rondo into a crumpled ball of fur. "You're just a piece of..." His tail twitched. "Nevermind," he said. "You wouldn't understand."


"You...you have to leave," he whispered. "Leave and never come back!" he murmured. Rondo froze, paralyzed by fear. Her father shot her a menacing look. "What are you waiting for?!" he screamed, his voice cracking. "LEAVE!"

He paused.

Then he whispered, "It's for your own good."


Anything else?: I got carried away, I see... and I keep editing my form. >w<;

Wow, that was fun writing. I might even consider finishing her story, if I get her. Well, whoever wins...
"May the odds be EVER in your favor!" -- The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby backseatpanda » Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:30 am

I just finished the chibi-ish versions of the last Liocko's that were given out to Demotivated-bear and horneddragon, I believe. |D

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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby Temperance. » Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:11 am

Am I allowed to ask when, approximately, judging will begin?


























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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby backseatpanda » Thu Jan 19, 2012 2:04 am

Ѧsɧωyɳ ♀ wrote:
Am I allowed to ask when, approximately, judging will begin?


Pfffff, I honestly don't know yet but I thought about maybe in one and a half to two weeks. |3
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby Flicka » Fri Jan 20, 2012 2:08 am

Number I'd like to adopt :Number five
Liocko Name: Sugarhigh
Backstory:wip
Anything else?:Im betting i can write a story about this one no probs
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby backseatpanda » Sun Jan 22, 2012 10:45 pm

Some nice stories I read there so far; sad ones but I love them anyway. I bet it'll be a pain to judge them. ;A;

Also, expect some items soon. We'll have a lot of cool stuff up for sale, even custom potions./ shot
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Re: Imagine there was a whole new world.. [LIOCKO ADOPTS-OPE

Postby zacherie » Mon Jan 23, 2012 3:29 pm

Make life happy, but make backstories traumatic .__.

Ooh items! *stares at yet to be made potions* I gotta have a custom. One day...I will get one.
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