Raising Hope Adoption Agency[Adoptions/Donations CLOSED]

[Zeee]

Congradulations Wesley, Im happy for you although quite sad I didn't get her.

[ubiquitous]

I guess my form for Clockworks wasn't good enough. I'll definitely add more for this round.
Just out of curiosity, what was my form lacking?
And another question, should I repost my form or just edit the last one?

[Queen Vivane]

- I wish to be critiqued -

Username: <3Fenris<3
Link to form: [*]
How would you like to be critique'd (PM...?): Pm please
Other: Thank you
^-^ <3

[Smamm]

I guess my form for Clockworks wasn't good enough. I'll definitely add more for this round.
Just out of curiosity, what was my form lacking?
And another question, should I repost my form or just edit the last one?

You didn't finish. |D A few of your personality traits were blank and your history still had a WIP under it. |3 You can fix it up and apply it for the next code drop if you would like. |3

[ubiquitous]

Okay, thank you so much for the help Smamm. I'd still like to know if I can repost it or just edit the last one.

[Smamm]

Since it's a new CD, please repost.

[Kaylawolf]

Congratualtions WesleyDog! I thought I had Syritha but congratulations anyways!

[ubiquitous]

Just reposting for the next code drop.
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- I wish to adopt -
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Username:
Candiie [changed to S u m m e r]
# of Character You Wish to Adopt:
44 [Forty-Four]
Character's Name:
Clockworks
Birth Name:
Cameron
Nicknames:
Clock, Cam [only called Cam by extremely close family and friends], occasionally referred to as Alpha
Character's Gender:
Male
Breed:
Falkland Islands Wolf / German Shepard / Belgian Malinois hybrid. May have some traces of other dogs, but the exact bloodline is not known.

About the Falkland Islands Wolf:
The Falkland Islands Wolf, also known as the Warrah, was the only native mammal of the Falkland Islands. Its fur had a tawny colour. The tip of the tail was white. The diet is unknown, but due to the absence of native rodents on the Falklands, its diet probably consisted of ground-nesting birds such as geese and penguins, grubs and insects, as well as seashore scavenging. It has sometimes been said that it may have dwelt in burrows. In 1833, Charles Darwin visited the island and saw the strange wolves, which were confused with foxes many times. Their Latin name actually translated into "foolish dog of the south", because of their apparent lack of fear of people. The canine became extinct in 1876.
Appearance:

Items:

/-Gear Necklace-\
This necklace was made specially for Clockworks at his birth. The red, orange and blue cord were found in a ship reck, thought once to be part of women's and young girl's hair bows. The two gears were part of the ship itself, The Beautiful Lady. The feather tied onto one is just a personal touch of Clock's.
/-Washer and Shark Tooth Necklace-\
The washer disc was, once again, found in the shipwreck, but the four small shark teeth were added when a shark washed up on shore. They added them to the necklace because they hoped they would bring bravery to the wearer.
/-Pocket Knife-\
This was found buried in the sand on the beach by Clockworks himself. He put it on a cord so he could keep it on him at all times for self defense.
/-Leather Strips-\
Made from the belts of the men on The Beautiful Lady, Clockworks wears these on all four legs, with only one of his back legs, and two on each of his front ones. The leather on his hind left leg keeps a small knife secure to his thigh.
/-Goggles-\
It is unknown where these came from. As a very young pup, Clock came out of the forest wearing these, and hasn't taken them off since.
/-Feathers-\

Personality:

.:Leader:.
All his life, Clock has been a leader, but it wasn't his choice at first. His parents passed away because of poisoning years ago when Clock was only a young pup. Because his parents were the Alphas of their pack, very soon after they died he was thrust into his spot of power. He grew into the position, and learned how to control so many other wolves, but he has never done it with a loud or demanding voice. Clock is more of a strong but silent type, asking for things simply in a monotone voice. Though the pack considers him a great Alpha, he has never felt like this job was to belong to him, and still believes that if his parents were alive, they'd be much better rulers.

.:Quiet:.
Before his parents accident, Clockworks was a happy playful pup, asking endless questions about the world, begging for his father to play with him as a young pup does. Since then though, it has been a different story. When told of his parents death, Cameron reacted with neither tears nor screams, but said in a low shallow voice, "They're gone?" he has always been quiet, only speaking when obliged to and mumbling to himself in times of confusion. At times when any sane person would scream, he would stand quietly, not bringing up a fuss or worsening the problem. His ways are much different than his father, who, at a cause of alarm, would make a huge deal over it, only worsening the problem. From learning from both his father's wrong ways and the grief of their deaths, Clockworks has decided that being silent is safer.

.:Strong-Willed:.

.:Cautious:.
Cameron has always been careful in his environment, watching out for poisonous snakes or just making sure everyone is with him when he leaves. Since his parent's incident, he has been even more cautious, not letting pups go into the forest alone, checking all the food before it is eaten, and many other things. Cam is also cautious in his decisions. He doesn't want to make the wrong choice, so he chooses the one in which less can go wrong. His carefulness influences a lot of what goes on in his pack.

.:Adventurous:.

.:Feels Guilty:.

==WIP==

History:

Prologue

May 27th, 1838

The ship sailed calmly through the water, the captain at the helm. He looked onward out and saw nothing but the aqua water he had seen for days, and smelt the invigorating spray of salt water of the front of the small ship. It had been a week and a half since is ship, The Beautiful Lady, had set sail from Europe with its twenty passengers heading towards North America. It was where everyone wanted to start their new lives, but the trip was hard on everyone. The salt air made the women seasick, the diet made men extremely ill, and the small area on board made the children long for their old spacious homes. The trip wasn't easy, but it was needed.
The Captain once again looked out at the deck, with the women chatting about and the children playing with whatever they could get their hands on, but instead of seeing the bright sky he had seen just moments earlier, now in its place was a hoard of black clouds and swirling water slowly swallowing up the beautiful day. The dogs in the kennel barked as loud as they could. This was no ordinary storm.
"Hit the deck!" The captain shouted. "Be back in your rooms! A mighty storm's brewing!"
The women and children raced back, knowing the storm would be hard, but one young girl was left by herself. The captain looked around, but her mother or father was not to be seen. He ordered the shipmates to bring her inside, but she refused. She wanted to see the storm, and was determined to do so. With no other choice, she was brought in with the captain, able to see the storm but not injured by its strength.
"Batten down the hatches!" The captain yelled again, "Hoist the main sail!"
He turned the wheel port, hoping it would avoid the eye of the storm, but he was not that lucky. The churning waters splashed upon the deck, the swirling winds defining out any other noises. They were in the middle of the ocean, no land to be seen for miles, and with a storm this big, all they could do was pray.
The little lady, of which the captain had forgotten her presence, was now pointing out the glass.
"Look sir, an island!"She said excitedly.
As they approached, the waters now threatening to sink the ship, the captain saw she was correct.
"Is it North America, sir? Is that where we shall make our new homes?"
The captain sighed. "I do not believe so. But for now, it is our only choice."

WIP

Art Piece:
Working on, and will hopefully be done by Saturday.
Other:
Sorry, this whole form is a Work In Progress as I don't have very much time right now.
Do you promise to take care of it?:
Yes, I will take very good care of him, and will get art of him as often as I can and will write stories as well as possible role play him. He is such a beautiful and intriguing design, and if I were to be the lucky one to come home with him, it would fill me with joy.

[Wesley]

OMG! Thank you so much! My hours are very much so cutback because of school, so I just noticed this. I really appreciate it, and I'll take great care of her. Thank you, Smamm, Joy, Aeolus, Firefly, and Science. <33

[Zeee]

OMG! Thank you so much! My hours are very much so cutback because of school, so I just noticed this. I really appreciate it, and I'll take great care of her. Thank you, Smamm, Joy, and Science. <33

Even though I wasnt one of those listed people, im glad she got a good home with you, Wesley!