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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby Noctilida » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:00 pm

One MAL slot open from me. This won't be first come, first served, but once again based on my ability. If you have a design from me, I'll definitely be able to do it. If you have another design that looks semi-simple-ish, then post it and I'll see what I can do.

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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby Vision. » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:20 pm

Hahahaha I wish I had one, your lines are amazing Noc!
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby l o v e l y ~ » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:22 pm

I wish I had enough good pets, I would so get a custom...:*(
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Rutoriel

Postby bianca. ❤ » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:26 pm

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I had awoken to the sound of everyone cheering. I was very curious so I sat up and ran to the cave where I saw a new little vortex appear it was beautiful! But this one was a little challenging she had climbed up a very rocky and steep platue! Well I must use my skills to get up to her. I used my foot to jump and balance on a rock then quickly grabbed with my hands an edge of a rock. I then picked up my right leg and lifted it up to a rock then the same with my right. Then I did the same again but with my hands I kept doing so until finally I had reached the top!

"Hello Rutoriel I would love to have you as my companion but I must tell you about myself first!" "I have traveled to so many places!" i said happily. I pulled a shiny rock that was gold and had blue and green spots all over it I had found this on a trip to south America it's very unique. I hands it to her "Be careful it's very fragile" I had finally gotten the rock back and continued "The next place I plan on going to is England for the second time! I have seen so many beautiful things in my adventure there and hope to experience more!" "My cousins live there and we would stay with them if you come with me!" " Theres so many castles there which I will show you a picture of one later" I said while winking

"I want to tell you about the places I have been in england if your interested" I spoke at once "The things I have seen were so interesting I have even seen a hyena once!" I pulled out my camera out of my bag and turned it on with one click of a button on top in the right corner "Here" I said "Here's some pictures I have took" One was of a beautiful warm colors of pink to orange to yellow. The second was of a castle! "This is the bodiam castle! It's located in England it's quite beautiful inside it's very mysterious though." The third and final picture was of a painting in the bodiam castle. "This painting was in the Tate museum also located in England this painting is quite famous so I decided to take a picture of it.

"Now I should probably tell you about England." I said smiling with a little giggle "England is one of the most populated and largest country compared to all the constituents of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland." I called "England also covers almost two thirds of the southern areas of the island of Great Britain. Also it has a rainfall all year round." I continued on "England is the second largest economy in Europe, but the fifth largest in the world!" "Here's something else you don't know" I winked "The first modern Olympics will help in England in 1850." "Also one you would like is that englands national flower is the rose!" I said excitedly and then talked about more important things.

"I must say I love your flower designs, it reminds me of nature." I looked up at the sky and scooted over close to Nutoriel. "Nutoriel I have to ask you something very important" I paused "Would you like to come with me to England and view the castles with me?" I awaited for a reply
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby Horneddragon » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:39 pm

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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby Noctilida » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:43 pm

Horneddragon wrote:
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Accepted. ouo Slot closed.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby Horneddragon » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:46 pm

oh! thank you ouo
Now i can have bragging rites that NocNocta did my MAL :B
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai Up

Postby spiff » Fri Aug 19, 2011 3:12 pm

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an attempt to woo retoriel

♞♘♞ I strolled into the cave, hand resting lightly on the silky fur at the nape of Xuen's neck. We had discovered this particular entrance to Ahzen on one of our frequent walks; I had been overjoyed to find that I would be able to come and go from this mystical place as often as I wanted, it was that close to my house. I beamed as I took in the now-familiar sight: the waterfall that merged into an impossibly clear and clean stream, the scattered rocks, the vortex that never ceased to fill me with awe. "Hey, I think we're just in time to see another Ahzenai come out," Xuen said, butting her head lightly into my leg.
♘♞♘ Sure enough, the vortex had brightened and come to life, stretching higher as colors flooded it: there were innumerable hues of brown, flashes of a dark forest green, and even occasional splashes of a faded magenta. "It's certainly an interesting color combination," she remarked. The words barely reached my mind, however; I was busy studying the vortex and wondering what the Ahzenai that came from it would look like. "Do you want to watch it come out?" When I did not reply, she nudged me again. "Earth to Sakorian!"
♞♘♞ I jerked out of my reverie and blinked in surprise. "What? Oh, yeah! Sure!" Xuen merely rolled her eyes and smiled as I led the two of us to a large rock that had a good view of the vortex. I seated myself, settling myself the best I could, while my companion lay down beside me, eyes half-closed as though she were to nod off at any time. I quietly hummed the first random tune (which happened to be "Do Re Mi") that popped into my mind as I watched the vortex, easily slipping back into my brooding state as I thought about what the Ahzenai that it would create would look like. The colors were more muted and dull, almost earthy. It made sense for the Ahzenai's design to be related to something like that.
♘♞♘ Once again, I was brought back from my semi-trance, but this time it was because an Ahzenai had sprung from the vortex, landing gracefully as though it took no exertion at all. I looked down at Xuen to see if she had her eyes closed, but she was watching the new arrival with mild interest. Her elegance is admirable, I thought as I began to look the Ahzenai over. The brown I had seen made up the base color of her fur. Delicate pink flower designs patterned her entire body, and green markings that looked like leaves covered her back and a good portion of her face. A glance at her back told me that her element was matter. Oh, wow, she's pretty. "Rutoriel!" Valcyon declared as she shook out her mane. I liked the name straight away.
♞♘♞ I observed as she looked at us all appraisingly before sauntering over a plateau and climbing up on it in a very relaxed manner. I eyed the lookout she had selected. It was steep and look quite difficult to climb if I wanted to approach the Ahzenai. "You like her, don't you?" Xuen's voice cut into my thoughts. I looked down at her. She didn't seem upset. "You can try to woo her if you want. I don't mind." I broke into a grin at this. "You don't?" She shook her head, allowing a small smile to flit across her lips. "Of course not. If you truly want her, then it's not my place to dictate whether or not you can." She paused, then added as an afterthought, "Besides, I could use an Ahzenai companion."
♘♞♘ I laughed, glad she wasn't the jealous type. "I guess I'll see if I can win her over. Wish me luck!" I stood and made to walk over to the plateau where she was, surveying the area like she ruled the place. Before I could even take a step, however, Xuen said from right behind me, "I'm coming with you." I started in surprise, but she merely passed me and led the way to Retoriel.
♞♘♞ I couldn't help myself; a small grin crept across my lips as I evaluated the the platform the Ahzenai was perched upon. It was quite similar to climbing a steep mountain, I thought as I began to scale up the side of the plateau. I had always like a good challenge, anyway. Xuen had already cleared the height of the vantage point with a single bound. She offered a paw to help me, but I refused it. I could get up this thing, and I would show Retoriel that. I clambered over the edge and hoisted myself up. Xuen was looking down at my with slight amusement flickering across her face. "That took you long enough," she said lightly. I stuck my tongue out at her despite my age. She chuckled.
♘♞♘ I got to my feet and dusted myself off, my hairline a little sticky, but climbing up the face of the plateau had not been particularly strenuous. I wiped a hand across my brow and took a moment to steady myself and ease my irregular breathing. "Hello, Retoriel," I greeted after her previous suitor had finished her speech, nodding my head in her direction, "I am |Ƨακσяιαи · Я α ɢ ɛ| and this is Xuen." I gestured vaguely towards the gas element Ahzenai. She, in turn, dipped her head in acknowledgment. I tilted my head slightly to the side as I examined her. "We greatly enjoy traveling. Though we have a home, we enjoy change; routine becomes a bore after a while, and so we occasionally visit places around the world to add a little zest into our lives."
♞♘♞ At this point, Xuen interrupted. "Neither of us like things to stay the same for too long. Though order and schedule are both great things, we get bored of them easily." I picked up from there, looking Retoriel straight in the eye as I spoke, my voice strong and clear. I was much more confident than I had been when I had wooed Xuen. "You might be like us: souls that are never appeased when staying in one place for too long. If you are, I offer you this: a wonderful life filled with thrill and adventure, two companions that will stick by you through thick and thin, and a home that you can always turn to when there is nowhere else to go. I would love it if you joined us, but in the end, it is ultimately up to you."


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Re: {Ahzenai} New Vortex Ahzenai: Rutoriel

Postby Kat. » Fri Aug 19, 2011 4:07 pm

My Attempt to Woo the Beautiful Rutoriel :)

I walk into the mystical cave with holds the unusual Swirling Vortex.

A beautiful Ahzenai slipped out, and she gracefully climbed up the plateau. "Wow! Your great at this..." I remark, gazing up at her in the plateau. Hmm... How could I reach her? I got a good grip on the face of the rock and hurled myself upas gracefully as I could. I used to might to pull myself up the plateau, and sat on the edge, close enough to give Rutoriel some personal space. "Hi there! Well... Just recently I learned that Ahzen is a magical place with many wonderful creatures. Thus, making you one of them."

I smile at Rutoriel, trying to let a friendship come easily. "I... Um... Have some stuff to talk to you about. First of all, I have heard you are a full of wisdom and intelligence, so I really need you in my life. Having someone there to talk to for advice is really helpful. And knowing whenever I can talk to you... I can learn something new." scoots a little closer, wanting to keep these next words private between the two of them.

"I keep this a secret, so you have to PROMISE not to tell, OK? I trust you, honestly, I just don't want any of your Ahzenai friends to hear this..." Look behind me, then back to Rutoriel. "I was... Adopted. I FINALLY have found the full family I have been looking almost a decade and a half for, and it feels great! So I know what it feels like to be picked over and questioned and begged for, even though you may not like the person wanting you as a campanion. So I have come here today to ask for your guidance, and I am willing to offer mine to you. For me, the ride was a little painful, and I want YOU to experience life and love to the fullest. Sometimes people tug at you skin (Or in you case, fur...), and you don't want to follow. Just like me. Only now, I follow proudly, just as I hope you get to live. I'm sorry I have no items or jewelry to offer you, except this prayer necklace. I don't honestly know if you believe in... Praying, or not, bu it can also be something known as a 'friendship necklace'." Hands the locket to Rutoriel, then rubs fingers over the one I am wearing. "My birth mother gave it to me when I was a baby, and gave me the second one as a gift from my birth brother, Ezekiel. I hope you will join me on my journey, as I attempt to make life's ends meet. I know I may not be the right tipe of person for you, but I am oppening up my heart to you. If you accept and come with, not as a slave or a minion or a pet, just a friend and forever ally." Jumps off the plateau, landing awkwardly on knees. "Jeepers Creepers..." wipes dust of knee-caps, then waves up at the Ahzen. "Goodbye, Rutoriel. May you join me someday!" I call out, then skip away.
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