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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Arsenic » Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:53 pm

-Sniffle-
But I like hitting people with sticks.
I already have in mind who will win but I need those to to finish before I can really make up my mind.
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Dragoness » Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:57 pm

Yes, I admit to being a violent person.
And I hope my story wasn't to confusing, I kinda wrote the bloody thing at 2AM, which is something i should never do. -Goes back to writing paper at 2AM-
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:59 pm

I liked your story :) And everyone has a very good chance at winning, except those who wrote like 3 sentences.
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Irios Atelis » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:02 pm

I am going to try my luck!

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I'm entering the story contest!
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Name- Umbra
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It had been a long time since I was taken from my pack. All I remember was my pack screaming for me, everything was blurry as hands bundled me roughly into a dark hessian bag, it smelt of pain and fear. I howled for my pack but I was no more than a pup, when they didn't answer I howled louder but then something hit me hard in the head and everything went black, I remembered no more after that. Only that I woke up and I was with humans, I snarled with anger and fear but they hit me and yelled. They would do this every time I showed a spark of defiance, eventually I stopped showing them. But it still burned inside me. Only now to I act on it.
I ran and I ran, just for the sheer joy of it. I escaped the people I was unhappy with. I remembered the pain of something unknown hitting my head, my ears had burned when their voices rose in anger, I never knew what I had done wrong but it was all behind me. The night when I had slipped out the gate and started to run. I felt my paws hit the soft grass as I seemed to fly, the wind ran through my fur and the trees whispered as if encouraging me to go as far as my paws would take me. For too long have I put up with bad treatment. I have left them far behind. I look around at the new sights, racing through the large pine trees, the forest scent touched my nose as I glided effortlessly. Finally I could take it no longer and stopped, flopping down and letting the soft green grass cradle me. I looked around at the clearing where the long grass danced in the wind. The shade from the oak tree kept me cool as the breeze touched my face, telling me I was going to be happy. I would find a home again but for now I was free. As the scents washed over me lulling me into sleep and happiness. I smiled.
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Dragoness » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:02 pm

I agree with that, I read a lot of stories that I liked since I've been stalking around aimlessly and avoid my exams for most of the week.
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Arsenic » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:03 pm

I liked loved your story, Dragoness. Although I did love a couple of others... XD
Indeed, the people who wrote very short stories with bad grammar have a lower chance of winning than the people who went up to the limit of two paragraphs and had at least moderatly good grammar. [I'm a grammar natzi.]
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I don't think anyone read the front for clues about what the surrounding in their story should be like.

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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Dragoness » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:13 pm

I'm sorry to say that didn't see that. But Ahh well.
And I'm glad you liked my story. As the day when my first book hits the shelves gets closer anything good about my unedited writing is much enjoyed.
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Irios Atelis » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:17 pm

I did see that and just so I am not labeled as someone who ignores things: The humans took Umbra away from the desert and she now lives in the bush of Australia! Hehe!
*Is so nervous*
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest!

Postby Arsenic » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:22 pm

@Dragoness- And I'll be the first one to buy/read your book when it hits the shelves!
@Nix- -Petpet- Tis ok.
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Re: Dingo-Eater Adopts -Open- Contest Over!

Postby Irios Atelis » Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:35 pm

Damn! I didn't win!

Anyway congrats Dragoness and all the others!
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