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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:54 pm

Demon-Dragoness wrote:It's offcial I am attached to Evil Plushie lmao

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wolf_girl_14 wrote:
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Name of Serenche:
Natura

Personality:
Natura is very quiet and shy, but much like her chocolate colored fur, she is very sweet. She was born blind, her parents thought of this as a bad thing, but loved their only daughter to the fullest, nurturing her to be loving and kind.
She does wish she could see the world around her, but loves her self the way she is. She always says that she is happy to be this way, she can get to know others for who they really are, not for what they look like on the outside.
She lives her life as any other serenche would, using her other senses to get around. She is very sociable and loves to make new friends, she doesn't like to be alone.



History:
Being blind Natura could never fully fend for herself. Her parents were concerned that she would not be able to survive on her own. This thought slightly discouraged her. Being born blind she didn't know anything was wrong with her until her parents noticed it and pointed it out. Her other senses are hightened, making it not as hard as it might seem.
She had always had a facsination with small creatures, in the mornings she would always listen to the Amozona's bird songs and in the late afternoon listen to movement and sounds smaller rodents and animals made as they prepared for night to fall. Her parents always said she was in tune with Nature, always knowing when the berries would be ripe or when spring was on it's way. She had a way with other animals as well.
Natura would never eat meat, only fruits and berries she would scavenge for. She couldn't stand the thought of eating an innocent little creture that had done nothing to harm her. It reminded her of stories she heard when she was older, about Strange two-legged flat-faced creatures who hunted for and sometimes killed Serenche Lartins.
One day, She had gathered some sweet, ripe berries and settled down to rest in the late afternoon sunlight. She munched on the berries but wasn't very hungry at the time. She fell asleep soon, letting the sun warm her chocolate brown fur. She woke up about an hour latter to a familiar scurrying sound of a smaller animal. She could here it nibbling at the berries she hadn't eaten.
She opened her unseeing eyes and turned her head towards that general direction smiling at the little thing. She knew it would probably run off, and at first she was confused when it didn't, in fact it stayed for a moment. It ate some berries, sqeaked a little as if thanking her for the lovely snack and ran off.
She didn't think much of it, until it happened a few more times. Eventually the little mouse like creature became her constant companion, always sharing meals with her and sitting on her back. She named him Pin, because it fit the tiny creature well. They are unseparable, Wherever she is Pin will be close by.



Which Cage?
#3

Other
I'm so happy you took my suggestion for the naturally colored litter! They are all beautiful but this one really caught my eye ;3 If I get her she'll be my first serenche ever! 8D If we win the serenche are we allowed to make slight design edits? If not then that's fine, just asking ^^
Also, I would like you to know that if I win her, she will not just be stuck somewhere on a thread and be forgotton. She will go on my character thread, and I will order art of her regularly as I do with all of my other characters. I Hope you consider this when you are judging the forms, and know I will always love and care for her.

Great form! Yeah, a few changes might be done, just ask me about it and I will gladly make a few edits ;3
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby EnergyRaptor » Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:15 am

wolf_girl_14 wrote:
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Name of Serenche:
Natura

Personality:
Natura is very quiet and shy, but much like her chocolate colored fur, she is very sweet. She was born blind, her parents thought of this as a bad thing, but loved their only daughter to the fullest, nurturing her to be loving and kind.
She does wish she could see the world around her, but loves her self the way she is. She always says that she is happy to be this way, she can get to know others for who they really are, not for what they look like on the outside.
She lives her life as any other serenche would, using her other senses to get around. She is very sociable and loves to make new friends, she doesn't like to be alone.



History:
Being blind Natura could never fully fend for herself. Her parents were concerned that she would not be able to survive on her own. This thought slightly discouraged her. Being born blind she didn't know anything was wrong with her until her parents noticed it and pointed it out. Her other senses are hightened, making it not as hard as it might seem.
She had always had a facsination with small creatures, in the mornings she would always listen to the Amozona's bird songs and in the late afternoon listen to movement and sounds smaller rodents and animals made as they prepared for night to fall. Her parents always said she was in tune with Nature, always knowing when the berries would be ripe or when spring was on it's way. She had a way with other animals as well.
Natura would never eat meat, only fruits and berries she would scavenge for. She couldn't stand the thought of eating an innocent little creture that had done nothing to harm her. It reminded her of stories she heard when she was older, about Strange two-legged flat-faced creatures who hunted for and sometimes killed Serenche Lartins.
One day, She had gathered some sweet, ripe berries and settled down to rest in the late afternoon sunlight. She munched on the berries but wasn't very hungry at the time. She fell asleep soon, letting the sun warm her chocolate brown fur. She woke up about an hour latter to a familiar scurrying sound of a smaller animal. She could here it nibbling at the berries she hadn't eaten.
She opened her unseeing eyes and turned her head towards that general direction smiling at the little thing. She knew it would probably run off, and at first she was confused when it didn't, in fact it stayed for a moment. It ate some berries, sqeaked a little as if thanking her for the lovely snack and ran off.
She didn't think much of it, until it happened a few more times. Eventually the little mouse like creature became her constant companion, always sharing meals with her and sitting on her back. She named him Pin, because it fit the tiny creature well. They are unseparable, Wherever she is Pin will be close by.



Which Cage?
#3

Other
I'm so happy you took my suggestion for the naturally colored litter! They are all beautiful but this one really caught my eye ;3 If I get her she'll be my first serenche ever! 8D If we win the serenche are we allowed to make slight design edits? If not then that's fine, just asking ^^
Also, I would like you to know that if I win her, she will not just be stuck somewhere on a thread and be forgotton. She will go on my character thread, and I will order art of her regularly as I do with all of my other characters. I Hope you consider this when you are judging the forms, and know I will always love and care for her.


Wow, that's such an epic form! :O One really gets a feeling of how she is. I wish you good luck in getting her.
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby Hollywood Undead » Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:18 am

Thankyou both! I'm glad you like it :3
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby Northstar. » Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:46 am

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Name of Serenche: Haru, meaning 'sun or sunlight'

Personality: Haru is a contradicting character, with many different faces and even more flaws. He struggles and strives to be normal, but for him it just isn't easy. He isn't social, and is awkward in conversation, if not rude or standoffish. Haru tries to be strong, but strength is something that he happens to lack, especially mentally. Perseverance is not in his vocabulary, and neither is brave or blunt. He can talk circles around the best of them, his inner walls remaining steadfast and loyal. Maybe that could be a term to describe him: loyal. But then again, how can one be loyal without strength? Perhaps he judges himself too harshly, and cannot see his own hidden treasures beneath his patch-work skin. Rarely, if ever, will something catch his interest; those things that do will not be forgotten easily.

History: He remembered. Soft, human skin, grabbing hands and chubby human cheeks. Warm nights, fuzzy blankets and the constant smell of peanut butter cookies. Back then, all he was made of was scraps of fabric and button eyes, perfectly assembled and brightly colored. Not a thread was out of place as he was dragged around by a blue eyed, curly haired toddler. Through thick and thin, they were together; through dirt and rain and ice and mud. They were an inseparable pair.

Over the years of many washings and treks through unknown places, the poor strange looking plushie became threadbare and dull. The only reminder of his past glory was bright, red button eyes. His beautiful cloth hung in gray tatters, the finest of threads jagged and loose. His sweet human soon became bored with her old toy, and moved on to ponies and Barbies, leaving her best friend all alone in the garbage can.

There he lay for three cold days and nights, hardening himself to the world and the loneliness that came with it. On the fourth day, a second before the garbage truck was able to lift it's cargo, a rainy wind blew through the street, shaking shutters and loose objects. The odd plushie blew away with the wind while the trees and grass strangely remained unmoved.

Over the town he flew, into a forest that called to him. The wind vanished as quickly as it came, and the tattered plushie fell through the thick trees of the forest, landing on the ground with a wet, pitiful plop. Stuffing and cloth landed haphazardly around him. Strangely enough an old woman was waiting for him, a portable sewing kit in one hand and a gummy smile on her wrinkled, kind face. She made quick work of the desecrated toy, sewing all his bits and pieces back on with strange thread, all the while humming a sweet, foreign melody. Her work was quick and efficient, and when she was finished, he looked as good as new, besides the faded color.
But then, something strange happened. Haru couldn't explain it even if he had a million words to describe it with. A tingling started in his toes, and a sound of popping and stretching fabric was heard, before suddenly, magically, the once-plushie was standing on four feet, balancing easily with his tail. But he wasn't so strange anymore; he was something new and unheard of by few human ears: a Serenche. He whirled around to look for the wrinkled old woman, only to find her gone, and nothing but a silver needle in her place. A bittersweet feeling swelled inside him: a mixture of his newly found freedom, and a longing for his lost little girl.


Which Cage?: 2
Other: Well, that was fun. XD So, I don't really have a character thread/site to put this baby on if I get him. The reason? I haven't adopted characters before and I just decided to try it out recently. But I promise if I win Haru that he will get his own little thread and tons of bought arts because I can't draw with my tablet to save my life.
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:09 pm

Looks great! Good job with it ;3
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby Northstar. » Tue Apr 12, 2011 11:53 pm

SilverFeather wrote:Looks great! Good job with it ;3

Thank you. ^_^
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby IzzyBee » Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:35 am

*Feels awesome*
I finished Stella's story!! I'm so happy, it's been like two weeks, and I finished it!! *Flails*
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby Transkitty » Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:46 am

O....k then. I'm sorry, I didn't realize I could only have two. I wouldn't have tried for another if I'd known.
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby TheSilverfeather » Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:18 am

Sorry, but you have already adopted 2 serenches so I would prefer if you didn't attempt to adopt any more. It's a limit on how many you can adopt, and I dearly want it to be followed. It's to give more people an opportunity to get that serenche, and you have already been lucky enough to win two. Many people haven't, so I won't look at your form when judging comes. Sorry, but for once I want to follow the rule that I set when I first created the thread, as I have broken that rule many times in order to give people what they please.

Right now I'm really tired, but I'm going to add another rule;
"It's not allowed, by any chance, to have a human char who knows of the serenches." Basically because I want only three humans who know about them. Two of them which is my charries, and one who's Darkehs. If you do have a human char, please remove this char/human from the RP. No matter how long you have used the char, remove it. If many people start having tons of humans who knows of the serenches, it won't be special! The hunters who hunt in their land originally hunts for the fur of the animal, not after which species they are. They don't know about the species at all.

Sorry about the long post, I'm just really tired and sick of seeing people who don't follow my thread rules Dx Right now, I actually think of simply shutting down everything in order to keep the serenche species rare...
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Re: The Land of Syegaria {Serenche Lartins!}

Postby [axolotl] » Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:21 pm

Instead of a form, could I write a story?
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