- darn Dx
too late to finish my forms now... well, suppose next round, next chance.






















Lierre wrote:Okay, good. Haha.
Username: Lierre
Kennel that you are applying for: 232
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What do you wish to get out of this critique?: Length and content, I suppose. I'd like you to be pretty harsh on me. Not in a mean way, I hope, though. :c
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Personal Info wrote:
Nicknames
(For use only by his fellow soliders)
Haz, Hazzbean, Hazzinator.
Age:
15. Due to genetic recoding, he is immune to aging.
Height:
3 ft. at the shoulder
Weight:
135lbs
Eye color:
..do you really think its a good idea to take off his mask..?
Neutered?
Yes
Personality:
Serious- Hazmat is very serious and always puts buisness before pleasure. He never goofs around when there is something he could be doing instead. Forget about trying to win him over with jokes and puns, he's more likely to swat your ears.
Determined- This dog doesnt know the meaning of the word stop. Once he puts his mind to a task, nothing can stop him until he's done.
Headstrong- Tell him he cant do it, and he'll tell you how he's going to hurt you. Tell him its dangerous and stupid, and he'll want to do it even more than before.
Lonely- His tough exterior and serious attitude prevent nearly everyone from getting close, so Hazmat doesnt have a wide list of friends. He seeks companionship, but doesnt know how to get it.
Going a bit deeper.::.Hazmat has a strong sense of duty to his platoon, even if they are gone. If any one insults them, their memory, or their honor, he loses it. The dog will fly into a rage and its impossible to pull him out of it. But Hazmat also has a kind side to him, for those whom he lets through his rough exterior. He protects those he loves with his life, but he often is blinded by his loyalty, and can be unintentionally cruel because of it. This is one of his weaknesses. Most of his weaknesses are based off of his loyalness and deep caring for the few he loves. His enemies often exploit this.
He's very curious, with a talent for trouble. He can't say "No." to the chance of an adventure, no matter the risk. He believes his purpose is to discover the world for himself, and to help repair the damage done by the war. Weither it is helping his kind with chores, or rescuing humans from their own stupidity, he silently enjoys it with no reward. The smiles he gets is enough, and warms him up inside. Even if his external side shows the exact opposite. When this dog hears a new sound, he has to investigate. You can only imagine his shock when he discovered his first bear..

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History:
Warning: Content below may be disturbing to some.
The year is 2277. A nuclear war has all but wiped out civilization as we know it.The cause of the war, unknown exactly. But the worlds leading nations were racing towards the next breakthrough, just to get an Edge on their enemies. In 2063, only 14 years before the bombs dropped, the United States had found it. Hazmat dogs. Trained canine killers, with an adept resistance to radiation. They could Clear a missile silo in a matter of minutes. Hazmat, or Experiment #326 as he was officially called, was the best of the best. A combination of genetic wonder, and scientific miracles made him who he was. The canine was swift, and strong, with a bite to match. He was the favorite of all the lab employees, and they even fed him tablescraps, and let him come inside the barracks on winter nights. Then the soviets dropped their bombs.
As the dust settled, Hazmat opened his eyes. A large cement beam pinned him to the ground. The canine whimpered as he strugged to get on his feet. After A few minutes of Wriggling under the rubble, he managed to get free. Hazmat blinked, scanning the debris. "Private?!" He called out. "Corpral?! Leutenant?!" He howled. "A-Anybody..?" Hazmat whimpered, realizing he was alone. Alone.
He sat down, thin body shaking. Hazmat had never been alone. Even in his earliest memories..
"Doctor stop! You're hurting him!" A female human said, her voice filled with pain.
"Now Miss. Lucy, he's perfectly sedated, can't feel a thing." An elderly man replied. Pressure sliced open Hazmat's back, he could feel the warm blood seeping out. The dog struggled to open his eyes. In the end, he was too tierd. "Gauze, Miss. Lucy." The male said. There was a few clicks of the females shoes on the floor. His back got a bit of pressure, then felt dry once more. "The device, Miss. Lucy." A cold, heavy object lodged itself into his back. Hazmat heard a rapid beeping, and distant shouts. "Were losing him, Dr. Mobius!" The female shout whispered.
The scent of blood snapped him out of his day-dream. His ears pricked at the sound of groaning. Like a spring, the canine rushed towards the sound, desperate for someone, anyone, to have survived. Several yards away lay the crisp body of, what smelled like, Private Johnson. "J-johnson!" He barked, nosing the figure. Johnson groaned at the bark, his eyes creaking open. The dog could Not understand the human, and vice-versa. "Hazz.. Good.. " the Private coughed, blood sputtering out of his mouth. "Good boy.." He breathed. Johnsons head dropped, and he went still.
"Johnson..? JOHNSON?!" Hazmat licked the burned flesh of Johnson's hand. "Johnson.. Dont leave me here.. dont.." The dog whimpered, and layed down with his human. He shut his eyes underneith of his mask, and cried himself to sleep.
The next morning, Hazmat opened his eyes. They stung from crying, even holding them open was a challenge. He felt awful, like the time he had gotten into the soldiers footlockers. He had eaten a strange brown food, it was crunchy at first, and melted in his mouth. Hazmat had learned his lesson after that one.. He let out a sigh. The dog had no idea what to do. No home remained for him. Nothing but rubble, debris, and the stench of death. His squad was dead. He didnt have to find their remains to know that. Hazmat heaved himself up to his feet, he took one last look at the only place he could remember as home. The dog began the long walk to the horizon. Where he was going, who knows. Any where besides this dead land.Creating A Killer: Hazmats Creation
Beep... Beep.. Beep.. "Doctor, he's stabilized." Miss.Lucy, a meek young woman announced, hovering over the heart moniter machine. "He needs to recover, or we may lose him for good." A elderly man clad in red-stained scrubs gritted his teeth. Yanking off his blood soaked gloves, he threw them in the trash. "Very well. We will try again at dawn." He spat in an angered voice, storming out the door. Miss. Lucy sighed, Dr. Mobius was always like this. Impatient, rash, and angry. The dainty woman stepped over to the operating table, her high-heels clicking against the tile floor. She reached out to their patient, a five month old puppy, and began to stroke his side. "Dont worry little one.. One day.. This'll all be over." Her voice was kind, and gentle, the opposite of the blurry man Hazmat was always too drugged up to see. Hazmat liked the woman. He had no idea why the man hurt him so much, but he knew the woman always tried to help him, even if they could not understand each others languages. His long, thick tail wagged weakly, one of the only few things the humans understood. Miss. Lucy laughed, though it was full of pain. You could hear how heartbroken she was from the puppys suffering. "You've always been such a trooper. Keep up that fighting spirit, love." Hazmat squinted to look at the womans face. Laying on his side however, and being heavily sedated, the dog couldnt see much. What he could see was a round, pale face, with long, dark fur framing it. "Thank you, human. I do not know where I would be without you." He whimpered. The only reply he got was warm arms scooping him up. Time to return to the rest-den.
When Hazmat opened his eyes, he was warm. The room was bright, and what he felt through his coarse fur was soft. "Where am I..?" He silently wondered. This was not the rest-den, no, the rest-den was cold, dark, hard. The pup glanced around. He was on a human pelt, the kind they covered themselves in and somehow removed painlessly as well. Metal poles supported two of these pelts, and went on for rows. The long room was empty besides him and the pelts.
"Maybe I should find the Female..?" The little puppy thought, as he let out a mighty yawn.
"Hey Johnson!"A man shouted from behind Hazmat. He jumped up, trembling, and growled. The dog had never been around other humans, besides the Evil-Man and the Female. Based on those two humans, he was unsure how the others of their kind would act.
"Johnson! Your girlfriends creepy dog is awake. Get him outta here before he bites someone!" The new man shouted, unphased by the warning growl. Another man stepped into the long room through an opening. "Oh shut up McAvoy. " He said, pushing the other human. The human who had startled him left the room, leaving just Johnson and the pup.
"Hey lil' fella. Did you sleep good?" He asked, in a sweet, calm tone. Hazmat cocked his head, and stopped growling. He couldnt tell what the human wanted. To harm, or help him? "Go away!" the pup yipped. Johnson laughed, making Hazmat jump. The puppy slipped off the bed, and hit the floor with a thump. Hazmat whimpered, he had hit his head on the floor.
{{Story is a WIP}}
By DoodlepuffWhy do You want him? wrote:Oh glob, where to begin. He's a symbol of my childhood to me. I was very lonely, And video games were my only comfort. The Fallout series Was my All time favorite, And ive been in love with post-apocalyptic things ever since. He reminds me of Rex And Dogmeat, two companions You Can get in The games. I find radiation and gasmask things facinating, and I Even dressed up as a gasmask zombie For halloween. Hes so handsome too. :D. The glow in his eyes is so spooky, it gives me chills! But its so awesome, like a sort of mystery. :o
I want to Get loads more art of him and make him one of my main characters. I havent felt Thing compelled to win A character since Nilakanta. Who is still getting loads of art, by The way. ^^
If I Win Hazmat, I Can promise he'll get love And attention and all the art he could ever ask for.. ♥Hazmat's Apocalypse. wrote:
Glowing, gaping eyes
Study the wasteland that Was his home.
Gone
Gone.
His mind Screams for his comrades
A silent prayer for their return.
Not a sound.
Silence.












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