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[Broken Chords]

Im Coexists cousin... I dont know how long its going to take for HollowedAngel to get my pm but I explained some things there. Im sure she will be much better feeling tonight or tomorrow and I know she is sorry because she said so.

[Skritnaja]

If she's sorry then she should apologise to Rabbitheart. Even if she've had a rough/bad day it's never ok to take it out on other people^^

[NARANDA]

Name: Hidama (Japanese - Falling Star) | Pen: 6 | Gender Female

What Will I Use Her For?
She shall be kept in a special spot on my charrie site and she'd be a friend for Nafisa. I will RP her and spoil her with art. I'll also write stories about her with my other charries and about her life.

Why Do I Want Her?
I love her colors and how the colors and pattern reminds me of a galaxy or mist. She is just right for me and would fit in very well with the rest of my characters.
It was also pretty much love at first sight! I'd treat her like I do my Momoko, spoil her with art and use her constantly!

Her Personality
•Calm
•Brave
•Strong
•Quiet
•Protective
•Patient
She is a calm warrior, slow to anger and doesn't let others get the best of her. Her calm personality makes it hard for others to find her weak spot. She is protective in battle and instead of fighting for herself, she fight for others, running to their aid when they are in trouble.
She is also very motherly and a great teacher. She is very protective of her cubs and would never let anyone harm them, not even over her dead body. She is very good at teaching and does not rush, instead she becomes good and helps her students and cubs become good by teaching them patience and not rushing them through what they need to know.

Her Ancestors Story
It was gone, the darkness had swallowed it whole. Nothing but darkness remained. My family, I could still hear their screams and cries for help, but I could do nothing, the darkness was too strong. I was supposed to protect them, I was the guardian star, but I had failed. I left, death still filled my senses and never left me, their pain filled faces were in my dreams each night, their cries rang in my ears always, reminding me of my failure. The darkness chased me into nothingness, trying to destroy me like it did my family, but I refused to hand myself over. I had an idea, but it meant dying and leaving my descendants to fend off the demons, leaving them to run, but I was tired of running, now it shall be my descendants. I was reborn, a cat with gems along its back, graceful and beautiful, I had a lovely family, but the darkness soon followed me to the planet. It won, I was destroyed, but I watched from above as my family went on, generation after generation they were destroyed and joined me. Until that night, she was born in a storm, grey fur like mist and markings like the galaxy. I saw a glow in her crystals, the power I once had as a guardian of the stars, passed on to her, the first.

Her History
It was my destiny, what I was born to do. The darkness closed in on me, leaving death in it's wake. The screams of my ancestors were ringing in my ears, the screams from when they were swallowed up by the darkness. It's red eyes were filled with anger, yet they were lifeless. I felt not a strand of fear, as is stalked me. The scent of death and blood filled my nose as it came closer and closer. I ran, ready to strike it down, I was to destroy the darkness.

Years before
Why me? I had been running my whole life, hoping not to meet the same fate as my ancestors, death by the darkness. I had to watch as it swallowed my parents whole. I could still hear their screams and smell their blood. The darkness had minions, demons. All as dark as night. They looked like canines, black slime covered their body, their eyes glowed green and their teeth were covered in green toxin, one bite and any normal creature is dead, but I wasn't normal, I was a fallen star, hiding from the darkness that stole my planet or should I say my ancestors planet. It was swallowed whole, nothing was left but a deep blackness of death and sorrow. Only one survived, a great ancestor of mine, just like me, they had watched their family die, heard their screams and felt the sorrow I felt. Just like me, they were alone, left to wander among the stars. But they made themselves a new life and I hate them for it. They left me and my family to struggle and die, they left us to face the darkness alone. I was the last, if I died, my family line would be gone forever, the power of The Guardian Star would be gone forever.

I sat on the cliff, looking up at the stars, the place that could have been my home, had the darkness not come. I could feel them, my family, looking down at me with loving eyes. They were at peace, they no longer had to run, no longer had to fight, they were free. They lived in the celestial realm, the place of the gone stars, the ancients long lost. They no longer lived in their mortal bodies, but instead lived as heavenly beings, gaining the forms they could of once had, full of power and beauty. I imagined what it would be like to live with them, what it would be like to just give up. I saw myself at peace, but then other images filled my mind. Death and blood filled my thoughts, the blood of those I left behind to be victims of the darkness. I could not leave, not with the darkness still there.

I got up and walked away from the cliff, away from the stars and away from my ancestors. I ducked out of view into the trees, careful not to make too much noise. I could hear the howls, filled with death and hate. They were coming for me, to destroy me. They would fail like every other time, but I still had to run, hide. They would weaken me to the point that I could not even open my eyes as the darkness swallowed me, I'd be helpless. I ran through the dark, away from the howls, but they seemed to be in every direction, no matter where I ran, they always seemed to get louder and louder until it sounded like they were right there, but they were not. They are very loud creatures, they could be ten miles away but it will sound like they are right there, right behind you, ready to dig their fangs into your flesh and fill your blood with their deadly toxin, a toxin that stung like ice and burned like fire.

This was a routine. I'd be relaxing and then the howls start, I run. Into the shadows of the trees, away from from the death and blood that came with the dreaded demons, I run. I would continue to flee until their howls could no longer be heard, usually at the break of da as they hide from the light. They came every night until that day. They couldn't be heard, couldn't been seen, it almost seemed as if they had never been there. Everything was quiet and still, it sent shivers up my back. I knew something was coming, I could feel it in my soul. I looked up to the sky, there were no clouds, no mist and no celestial beings. I starred in shock. They were just gone, the sky was empty. The darkness had arrived.

I watched as it filled the sky, it stared at me with it's red eyes, burning deep into my mind, bringing back all the dreaded memories of my family and their death. It was my destiny, what I was born to do. The darkness closed in on me, leaving death in it's wake. The screams of my ancestors were ringing in my ears, the screams from when they were swallowed up by the darkness. It's red eyes were filled with anger, yet they were lifeless. I felt not a strand of fear, as is stalked me. The scent of death and blood filled my nose as it came closer and closer. I ran, ready to strike it down, I was to destroy the darkness.

The darkness roared yet it didn't sound like a roar but more like the screams of the dead. It did not scare me. My fear of the great destroyer was gone, instead all I felt was anger, anger for all those it killed, anger for all those that suffered. My crystals started glow, the power of my great ancestor, the guardian star, filled my blood. I roared a battle cry as I charged, my claws extended, glowing as a power surrounded them. Then my claws made contact. It roared in pain, but didn't fall, instead he twisted around and charged me, I was ready though, or so I thought. I jumped to the left thinking I would have time to strike but instead I felt intense pain as it raked my side with it's deadly claws. I fell to the ground, my mind a buzz, my body searing like fire. It came towards me, it's deadly intent showed in his eyes. I felt the sweet releif of death, of peace, as he came slowly closer, taunting me. Tonight I was to die.

Wait, what about those I would leave behind, what about all that my family has fought for? A new power filled my senses, a power given to me by those I must protect. I ran towards the darkness and lept, a new stregnth helping me to achieve victory. I ripped my claws, glowing brightly, down it's neck and side. It roared in pain, but it soon became just a whisper as it faded into nothingness, revealing a light that was lost centuries ago, a light that was blocked by the darkness. I watched as the creatures of my new home came out of their hiding, staring in amazement at the new light, the new freedom. I smiled at them as the world began to twist and fade into blackness. I fell.

Other
Thank you for this chance!
This is where she will be if I win


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[.kestral]

Name:
Nox
Pen:
6
Gender:
Female
Age:
5 Years

What will you use it for:
Nox will first and foremost become a companion for my little lonely Ripped. I could imagine them having some very pretty cubs I would use her for the story I have planned for my little Crysts and if an RP for the species opens both her and Ripped will be involved. I want to get some art of her too, I love her markings and feel they would be stunning to see forming as she grows so would like to get some images of her while she is a lot younger.
Why do you want it:
I want Nox as she is first and foremost...stunning. Thats the easiest way to describe her. The colours on her pelt are amazing, she looks like a starry night sky, which is why I gave her the name Nox. I love her darker crystals to, they add to the character.

Personality:
- Quiet
- Gentle
- Friendly
- Kind
- Sweet

Nox is truly a softie, she is kind and gentle and always avoids conflict. She has had many hardships in her young life which may be why her and Ripped connected so swiftly. She is always polite though and tries not to let her past affect her future, she knows life hurts but doesn't let it bother her or change her decisions. She believes it is always better to take a chance at happiness, she doesn't want to spend her life not knowing what she could have had. She loves her freedom, her new home and her new friend and never wants to return to her harsh past. She has occasionally had issues learning to trust others but now she knows the world isn't out to get her and is happy to follow along in the path of life and to learn along the way.

History:
Life has never been easy, it has always been full of hate, turmoil and destruction. The destruction of every belief you ever had, the screams of fear as your sister is dragged into the darkness. The wrathful eyes of your murderous evil father, his cold laughter as he attacks. The sleet, snow and rain battering what is left of you...and then the relief. The warm soothing tongue cleaning your wounds. My life has been hard. But because of him, it will always be worth it.

My childhood was unusual to say the least, my father was...well insane. He barely recognized us or my mother, my older sister from a previous mating had stuck around to help my mother and revealed to me there had been an accident soon after my birth. My father had been hurt, damaged permanently and barely remembered who he was, he had extreme mood swings and hated everyone. Including us. We couldn't leave him, he was our father, my mother tried to convince us to run a few times as I grew older but we resisted and stuck around for her sake as well as ours.

That was out biggest mistake. One day my father lost it, went completely insane, he called me and my sister abnormal, scum of the earth, dirt, vileness....He called us demons and ran away. It wasn't until a week later that we saw him again, he came upon us as we slept. He killed out mother, and dragged my sister away through the snow. My second biggest mistake was not going after her, I was young, scared, my crystals were barely grown, I was barely grown. My mother was dead, my father insane, my sister....gone. It took two days before he came back for me.

His claws slashed through my fur, my skin, his sharp claw split my nose and slashed cuts above my eyes. I was in agony, the cold air burned my cuts bitterly. He laughed manically as he attacked. He mocked me, scorned me, told me all the dark things he had planned. It turns out my sister was alive, he had left her dying in the snow and had the same planned for me. I wept with fear and lashed out, I was shocked at my own anger, shocked at my own strength as he flew backwards away from me. He lay in the snow dazed and I ran.

I ran, ran for hours, for days. My wounds bled and hurt, my paws ached and the pads cracked. I could feel him running behind me, I wasn't sure if I was imagining him or not. Finally I collapsed, collapsed in the snow shaking with fear. It wasn't until I felt a cool tongue licking my wounds clean that I realized I wasn't alone.

Many people say Ripped is a cold, heartless male. To me he is my friend, my only family. My savior. I will never forget that.
Other:
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[NeriHyuga]

neri will you be able to judge 6? XD

yes i will judge 6 ^^

@ coexist hey, did you have a bad day today? normally you are so friendly and nice. You should know that everyone can enter on every crystaline he wants. And it doesn't wins the longest or hardest form ^^ it wins the form that has the most heart in it and fits the best to the crystaline ^^ and if you don't win it, it isn't the last crystaline we made, just try for another one you like very much the next time ^^

[.kestral]

Any idea when this round ends?

[NeriHyuga]

it just opens, so i think in a week or two, but lirrie decide when it ends ^^

[Lirrie]

coexist anyone can try out for one, its not based on how you write. Although i do appreciate a well though out form, it what moves me that it based on. Please appologize to rabbitheart when you can.


and coexist if you pm me ill try to help with your form a little k?


Thanks everyone going for one.

[Coexist]

Im sorry to everyone about the way I acted, please forgive me. I am ashamed of it. I will not act such again.

[Lirrie]

Howevvvvvvver sweetsound you are banned from the thread for arguing with a mod and others about it. I dont apreciate arguing on or off my thread about my species,

Coexist you arnt banned because i believe your truely sorry and like i said last post im willing to help you.

Guys if a mod says something about something on my thread in my absence please dont argue with them k?