the land of faerres { Sih likes shiny things }

[Taiyo]

I'm sorry Kale ^^; I can't do that for it'll be unfair to others.
You can always shorten your form C': quantity is not everything, I've accepted forms that'd been a few paragraphs long before X'3 its all about how you can connect with the faerre~ <3 sometimes you can cut back on a lot of.. stuff :'3

[broken*]

Alright, I'll try my best <3 I do have a really good idea for my woo part, so I'll shorten the whole part I normally do about the journey to maybe one or two paragaphs then get into her meeting Det ^^

[Taiyo]

Det is judging in 1 hour~

[Taiyo]

Det Has Chosen

Through the meetings, Det had sat quietly and had listened attentively. The Queen... disappeared silently half way through the meetings, smiling to herself for she knew, Det won't have a problem in choosing a partner. It was true.

There were many of the talented, and surprisingly, a lot of telepathic communicators too. Det was particular intrigued by one with raven hair. Though she claims to have a voice, but because of one oath she dare not speak, he was slightly disappointed in this wasted chance. Perhaps once in his life he did think of talking, but not now. He had learned to embrace the silence and the language of actions. Walking down the steps of the Altar, he followed the small footprints pressed into the grass as he neared étoile, the one who can speak but refuses to. It was stubborn, and he liked it. Det smiled at the lady, he spun around and dropped into a crouch, almost as if he's saying. I'm here to play~

Det has chosen you, Dawnbreeze10210

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Congratulations Dawnbreeze! 8D
eep. a little less forms than expected :< buuuut.... hopefully the next Faerre will spark up some more interest :')
Until then!
\owo/

[Dawnbreeze10210]

yay! Thanks so much, and wonderful forms everyone

***how étoile answers soon!***

[zacherie]

Congrats, Dawn! ^^ everyone was awesome~

Hope the next faerre is as stunning as Det and every faerre before him! :]

[nio]

Darn. I was going to go for him for Det. But I had no time. :<

[Blaze Crimson]

Congrats, DawnBreeze!


Username:blazeheart
Item Purchasing:Custom Orb
Link to trade:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/trades/viewtrade.php?id=16713585&userid=306138&signature=hbfaG6KSfZAcbGYJOGOR_w

IM SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY (probably- unless I woo a faerre before customs open) FIRST FAERRE!!!!!!

[Horneddragon]

Blaze, it really serves you no good complaining each time you fail at wooing a faerre, not to be blunt, but its actually kind of rude. ^^"
It would seem like your just trying to make the winner feel bad for beating you, and you do this each time you miss a faerre. I'd suggest asking for some critiques next time, i'm sure Tayio would love to help you, and i know there are quite a few other members who would <3

[Blaze Crimson]

Blaze, it really serves you no good complaining each time you fail at wooing a faerre, not to be blunt, but its actually kind of rude. ^^"
It would seem like your just trying to make the winner feel bad for beating you, and you do this each time you miss a faerre. I'd suggest asking for some critiques next time, i'm sure Tayio would love to help you, and i know there are quite a few other members who would <3

sorry! im really not trying to- ill edit.

Although, I have a right to be excited for the custom orb!

I have asked for critique, and have tried to go off of that. I think its just its not long enough... Im not exactly the sharpest tool in the shed. School is... rough.