Dandolms ~ Adoptable Horse-Wolves ~ Round Open

[Ray.]

Wanna be afflifieties http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=1277487&hilit=Horse+dog+dragon

[*Blackberry*]

Here are the winner, I'm sorry I'm a bit late posting them.

#1

#2
FourCrosses

#3

#4

#5

#6

#7

All Dandolms without a name will be carried over to the next round.

@Blackberry, your form is being carried over again so please don't post it again or quote it, just edit the one you already have. If you want a different Dandolm then you can post a new form.

@FourCrosses I'm glad you like him and I'm looking forward to seeing art of him. I'd just like to point out that there really isn't a second-in-comand position, hunters sort of fill that spot and Dandolms don't really have a sense of royalty either, the Alphas are pretty much it and they just call them the Alphas (no queen, king, princess etc.) Because of that I changed what you wrote in his description a bit, could you go to the archieve and see if you like what I put there; if you don't just send me a PM or let me know in the Fanclub and I'll change it to what ever you want.


I'll open the next round in a few minutes.

Are you trying to make me not get one? The one I tried for always as been carried over rounds. You accept others even though their forms are not good, but refuse mine. Don't you think you are trying to be unfair to me?

[Queen Vivane]

Blackberry in my opinion your form needs more work in order to actually win the Dandolm you want, that's just my opinion and I'm used to writing long as form's in adoption agencies. I'm not sure what Teeze thinks

[Teeze]

Wanna be afflifieties http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=1277487&hilit=Horse+dog+dragon

Sure; I'll add your link in a little while added.

Are you trying to make me not get one? The one I tried for always as been carried over rounds. You accept others even though their forms are not good, but refuse mine. Don't you think you are trying to be unfair to me?

That's not it at all,Blackberry, it's just that you don't have anything in the description about the personality of the Dandolm and that is the most important part of the form.
The name, age, rank, and why you want it are all needed but a lot of what I am looking for has to do with how well you've developed the personality of the character. Art, stories, and poems are not needed like in some other adoption agencies and the form doesn't need to be long it just has to be descriptive enough for me to get an idea of what the Dandolm is like. I don't need a physical description of the Dandolm because I already have images of all of them so the den number is all I need to know which Dandolm you are trying for.

Blackberry in my opinion your form needs more work in order to actually win the Dandolm you want, that's just my opinion and I'm used to writing long as form's in adoption agencies. I'm not sure what Teeze thinks

Thank you Chrysalis, but like I told Blackberry it doesn't matter how long it is as long as it gets the personality across. Your forms are usually fine though so you don't have to worry about it.


I said in a post a few rounds back that I am being rather forgiving with the forms, some of them have been kind of lacking, but they did have everything that was required so I let them slide. As more people start putting in forms though it would probably be a good idea for everyone to put a little more effort into their forms because I have seen quite a few people make some really well thought out forms here on ChickenSmoothie and when those people start posting on this thread it will make it harder to win the Dandolms you want. Right now though just make sure you have everything that is needed and you won’t have a problem.


I added a new form to the breeding post so it is now possible to breed two of my breeding Dandolms together, all rules still apply when using that form.

[albinny trancy]

Den #: 6
Name: Maddie
Age: 3 (horse years)
Sex: Female
Rank: Warrior
Why you want this Dandolm: First and foremost, the design is breathtakingly captivating! I've been in need of an equid character for so long, and I have a feeling she'll be just perfect for it.
What you will do with this Dandolm: I'll use her in my upcoming illustrated novel. c:
Describe the Dandolm: Ever since she was a pup, this little girl has been loads of trouble. She kept trying to escape. She wanted to prove her worth to her 'pack' by finding a rogue and fighting them off. ...Of course, her mother never let her. But that didn't stop her from trying, and succeeding, once, only to be captured by a hunting patrol while she was trying to take down a badger. Now a full grown warrior, Maddie will do anything to pick a fight with anyone and everyone.

[Teeze]

Ok Thief I'll add your form to the front page, but I would like to point out that she is not an equid character, she is a horse/wolf and I would also like you to reread the part about the ranks since there is no warrior rank and also the part about the ages since they do not go by horse years. If you are still unsure about the ages when you get done reading it then I did put a little about ages and growth in the FAQ about ranks in the fan club or you can just ask me.

I would also like to know a little more about your illustrated novel; I'm not making it against the rules to use them in that way but I am going to need to know more about it before I approve of it. You can PM me that information instead of posting it here and it only needs to be a short description of what you have planned (I mainly want to make sure that you stick to the species standard and that you aren't going to be making money off of it).

[Teeze]

Here are the winners, I'm sorry I'm a bit late posting it.

1.

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3.

4.

5. nightwane

6.

Any Dandom without a name by it will be carried over to the next round.

@Blackberry your form is being carried over so if you want the same Dandolm you can just edit the form that is linked to on the bottom of the adoption post. Do not make a new post or quote your old post. If you are going for a different Dandolm then you can create a new post.
Here is the post I made saying why I have been carrying over your form.

@Th13f your form is being carried over to the next round so if you want to still go for the same Dandolm you can just edit your old form. Do not quote it or post a new one unless you are going for a different Dandolm. My post right before this one explains why your form wasn't accepted.

I will be be opening the next round in a little while.

[Teeze]

The round is now open, feel free to post.

No new Dandolms again, and I've decided that any round that is during one of my classes will last two weeks instead of one so I can focus more on my schooling without having to worry about closing the round every week.

I also plan on starting an event later this week and then I will have another event closer to the end of August for my birthday. So keep an eye out for those.

[~AlphaWolf~]

Den #: 3
Name: Free
Age: 3
Sex: Female
Rank: Forage
Why you want this Dandolm: Becaus ei rarely win any species and she is beuatiful
What you will do with this Dandolm: She will be my character and she might be in a roleplay.
[b]Describe the Dandolm: Sweet,Cautious of abnormal things,Smart,Fast.[/b

[Teeze]

Ok AlphaWolf, I'll add your form to the front page; if you do get her just remember that you are not allowed to use the Dandolms in any roleplays except the ones I provide. I am working on getting the roleplays finished but I haven't had much time to work on them because of school (I have school all year). You might also want to add a bit more to the description of her so you will have a better chance of getting her in case someone else tries for the same one. Your form isn't very strong the way it is and there is a good chance you will lose if someone else puts in a form for her.


@ Everyone I am going to add Forager as an alternate rank to Hunter. Both ranks will do the same jobs (hunt, forage, protect the pack, etc.) just they will focus on different areas.


Event Started
I have started a raffle that will run until the 25th (my birthday). It can be found in the Event Post.
Everyone gets to choose 1 number a day, up to a total of 2 numbers. There will be 5 prizes that I will give out on the 25th or when all the numbers have been chosen.
You can still post adoption forms for Dandolms while the raffle is running.
There will be another event starting the 25th.